NEW FF: Memories- A Tug of War (Chapter7, Page35) - Page 11

Awesome update im loving this

AMAZING!!! I loved this update, I love how Asad admitted finally that he loves her and that he can see in her eyes that she loves him too, it made me smile when he kept saying to her 'tum mujhse pyaar karti ho' and she was like 'I don't'

Perfect. Love it . You are awesome girl. Asad and his apology was just so perfect. I felt for him. One side of me wanted her to forgive him but then his deeds are no less.. He shouldn't be forgiven that easily , he is on his knees... I want to see what else could he do to make her forgive him. And, loved that part were he proposes her all of a sudden and says that she also loves him, so sure he is about her.. knows her too well, huh!! And, she denying her love.. Loved it , dear.

amazing story .. read all 4 parts !! plz continue sooon

OMG I stumbled upon this too late! Sorry exams are going on, so I'm freakkkiiing out! Anyways, so happy you're feeling better and quick updates make me happy, so double the celebration! Another mindblowing update. I was a little disappointed in te end when Zoya broke in front of him and he managed to get the last word cause I was hoping superhero Ray would drop by, but then I read your note an I'm so not disappointed anymore! Wow I'm such a sadist. Asad needs to grovel! I love how Ry was supporting her all throughout and she relied on him- sooo cute! OKEY I LOVED THE PART WERE RAY IS GETTING THE PAPERS SIGNED! Them both wanting to hurt each other- for Zoya too! Ahh <3 Another detail that I loved that you included was how Asad was concerned for his mom and sister and sent Ayaan- so true to his character and it overall helped the story flow :D The second time I read it I realized how it was important for Asad to have the last word. Firstly, the flashbacks were amazingly incorporated and I loved how Zoya was trying not to break her resolve. Secondly, Asad is now determined and he's made his point to Zoya. She now knows that he is fighting for her and that will help her forgive him later. As of now I'm totally excited for Asad- Ray interactions! Bring it on (: Cant wait!

Zoya is in so much pain :(..Want to know Asad's next step./..update soon n plz pm..sent a buddy request..

Very intense!! Love it!! Update soon =)

read it in one go!!! plz continue soon!! and plz plz plz pm me!