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Aishwarya

@--Aishwarya--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

I went through all your comments!!!!! Thaaannnkkk Youuu!!!!😃😃😃 Feels soo good when I get such lovely remarks for my first ff 😊...There are so much comments that I can't reply to each and everyone!!!!! So thank you everyone for your support and keep supporting me 😊...I would love to get more reviews 😃

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CutiepieHarshad

@CutiepieHarshad

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

awesome part

loved it dear

am soo happy so updated that too so fast

phir se tanveer ka kachra🤣

aww zoya is sooo sweet i wish gul read this ff n make qh like this after her disgusting track

plz plz plz plz plz plz cont soon

can't wait more

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Wow

This part was awesome

Loved the way Asad told Zoya news

Love ur work

Thx for the pm

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago

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arniemagic

@arniemagic

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

cute update :)

thank u :)

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

AWWW..awesome loved the update..fabbb❤️❤️

asad finally gave the news to zoya...so beautifully...❤️

loved ayaan he called tanveer aunty,,ha ha .🤣

very good treatment was given to tanveer by the khan family!!!!!!!😎👍🏼

and the dailogues by everyone were fabb...specially by dishaad & ayaan...loved it...😆

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_Nabeela_

@_Nabeela_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Can't stop laughing :)
Amazing i love it :)
Please continue it soon :)

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

wow. loved it.awesome. plz continue soon.

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Tadibaaaz

@Tadibaaaz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

👏Awesome I just wait for ur ff u really write awesome 👏

I am more interested in ur post than the original serial

I just luv ur dialogues

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

I am tired of laughing so much!!!
Everyone is after 'bechara' Asad!!!
Ayan he is simply awesome!!! Tanveer aunty!!!

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-.-Mariam-.-

@-.-Mariam-.-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

That was SUPER update..Let me highlight the lines i like most..

1.Asad: Ammi!!! You all are going??? Leaving me alone??😲

Dilshaad: Then do one thing. Ask the neighbors also to sit with you. 😆

2.Ayaan: Arey Tanveer Aunty!!!🤣

3.Ayaan: But we are not fine if you are at home. 😉 Hello, I am not calling you out of affection or something. We want them both to stay alone. So we don't want you to be here. Come. I will get you chocolates also if you want.😆

4.Ayaan: Am I some helpdesk for you???😉

5.Dilshaad took the phone from Ayaan: How?? Go give this news in media. They will let her know.🤣

6.Zoya: Asad!!! You are telling this so daringly to me??? Are you going to tell me who is that kabab mein haddi now???😆Asad: No darling!! Don't abuse my honey like that!!!😛

7.You have an affectionate devar, and good friends in my sisters who are ready to beat up their Bhaijaan, if their Bhaabhi cries a little. 😆

8.Zoya: "The person you are trying is currently not responding, and will not respond your call also. So please don't try again later!!" (She said just as they say in a record message)👏

9.Ayaan to everyone at the table: I think the waiter didn't give her more food. That's why gusse main paagal ho gayi hai!!🤣

10.Zoya: Main nahi, aapka baccha hai jealous!!😛

In short I LOVE THE UPDATE...

Continue soon...Thnx for PM...

Oopss now noticed that my comment is long...