AsYa TS -Trust Updated - Page 5

Amazing amazing simply amazing

perfect ,,, i cant say anything else !!
please continue sooon ,, i read all parts in one go and cant wait to see wt happens next 👏

Loved it! Exactly what she should say to him!

So beautiful. Hope the cvs read this n show sumthng like this.

awesome luv it thanks 4 the pm pls continue it

wow! so lovely yar pls cont

I just loved it, so beautifully written.

Oh wow!! That was very deep.. Loved it!! I feel like Asad in the show needs to realize this as well!! Very well portrayed!! Please continue soon!

Originally posted by: -Siaa-

Had I not been sitting in the cafe now with hundreds of people around, I would have definitely squealed in delight. A response from such an amazing writer, I'm really honoured 😳

Exactly! He thinks he knows and understands everything when precisely it's the opposite. Every single time he had hurt Zoya with his caustic words, I used to cringe. Just because she doesn't exactly put up her emotions on sleeves doesn't mean that he has to go on and on. I don't know sometimes I feel that the writers neglect these subtle feelings. It happened before too with Khushi. I know they can buck up from any situation and take everything in their stride, but they'd have to show their inner turmoil too. Sometimes I fail in connecting the situations 😆

Infact this whole thing was written when I could no longer tolerate the polar form of Akdu Khan blowing Zoya hot and cold every single time.

Once again thanks for the response :)

Thank you for your extremely kind words. You made me smile and I am the one who is really honored.😳

Asad is very ignorant of his surroundings at times especially when it concerns Zoya. That is his fault, Zoya deserves so much better. I haven't seen all the episodes so I can't give a detailed answer but yes he needs to start paying more attention. You are so right, the makers often miss out on the the inner turmoil of the girl lead. That's not fair to us because we in a way can connect and know there is so much more within than they are showing. I always feel that Khushi had so much potential had her character been properly written. I hope that does not happen to Zoya.

I am glad you wrote this OS. You write beautifully. To write depths of the heart requires skill not everyone can do it really well.

Now, I am going to read the second part :)

This tale of yours is just awesome!