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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: _Oishi_
great start..continue soon

Originally posted by: angelina_angel
Good one

Originally posted by: kandygrover
Amazing start!!!!!!!!!! Please pm me when u continue.

I'm really glad you liked it :) Thank You!

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: InvisibleSmile
This was just a flow of countless feelings. I sometimes watch the show with my mum and can't stop but think how foolish Mr. Khan is. Mr. Know-it-all doesn't know anything in fact. You described Zoya's feelings perfectly. Love is bound to make a person out of control. Sometimes we think we have strong grip on our lives but in truth we have very little say in these matters. Similar has happened to Zoya.

Wonderful part, I look forward to the next.

Had I not been sitting in the cafe now with hundreds of people around, I would have definitely squealed in delight. A response from such an amazing writer, I'm really honoured 😳

Exactly! He thinks he knows and understands everything when precisely it's the opposite. Every single time he had hurt Zoya with his caustic words, I used to cringe. Just because she doesn't exactly put up her emotions on sleeves doesn't mean that he has to go on and on. I don't know sometimes I feel that the writers neglect these subtle feelings. It happened before too with Khushi. I know they can buck up from any situation and take everything in their stride, but they'd have to show their inner turmoil too. Sometimes I fail in connecting the situations 😆

Infact this whole thing was written when I could no longer tolerate the polar form of Akdu Khan blowing Zoya hot and cold every single time.

Once again thanks for the response :)

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Nice start by showing Zoya's sadness and her realisation that she's in love with Asad.

Thank you :)

With all the feelings bottled up, I always wonder when Zoya is going to burst out.

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: mochhug
PLEASE CONTINUE! I love this track! I was really hoping something like would've happened... zoya's trauma.. her helplessness manifesting themselves so that Asad could see how much that fire scared her... PLEASE PUT UP THE NEXT PART.

Thanks a lot for the warm response :)

I too wanted Asad to see the trauma Zoya is under everytime she sees the fire. But as usual looks like he doesn't even know about in the first place 😕

Hope you'll enjoy the rest of it :)

Edited by -Siaa- - 12 years ago

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Usa2013
very nice i wish gul could look at your story line and introduce zoya's angle and her altercations .i do realize in love we do not take in the words of our lover seriously ,but it still hurts a lot your heart bears so much then but when you get married it just vanishes , you always fight back ... strange isn't...

Thanks for the compliment 😳

Gul has her own way of things and the only thing I always wish is that she gives prominence to the character's inner feelings.