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Chapter 4

Part A

Hey guys chapter 4 will have two parts to it okay maybe three depends on how much i write. 😃

Breakfast went by really quickly for the Khan family. Everyone was excited about for the mehendi night. Dilshad had already told Asad to stay home from work and she and Zeenat were heading out to the marker for some last minute errands for the tonight. Zoya was still lost in her thoughts about Asad was so eager to tell her but he never got the chance to. Breakfast came to an end and Tanveer was also lost in her room planning on a way to get rid of Zoya and she had finally decided that she would do it in fact on the day of the nikaah but till then she decided to mess with Zoya just for the heck of it.

Zoya: "Najma chalo you have to help me pick out matching jewelry for my outfit for tonight I just don't know what to wear with them."

Zoya let out all in one breath. She looked up to see Mr. Khan smirking at her and Najma just staring at her trying to control her laughter but she couldn't anymore so she just laughed at Zoya's behavior. Zoya huffed and brought her hands up to her chest and folded them glaring at Najma.

Zoya: "Tamatar why are you laughing at me? Did I say something funny? Does this mean you won't help me? Allah Miyah what is wrong with you Najma here I am in a dilemma and you are laughing at your soon to be Bhabi!"

At that Najma straightened up and looked at Zoya with a serious look on her face.

Najma: "Sorry...bhabi I will help you but first let me see the jewelry first then I can help you match it!"

Zoya: "Okay chalo!"

With that Zoya grabbed Najma's hand and dragged her to her room in a rush. Asad just sat there with a bewildered expression on his face thinking about Zoya and her crazy antics. He smiled at the thought and got up to go to his room to prepare for the talk that he wanted to have to with Zoya. He decided to give her a little surprise and in that surprise he would make sure to express his true feelings for Zoya. With that in mind he got busy with the preparations.

Najma: "Okay first show me your outfit then I can help you pick matching jewelry."

Zoya: "Oh yeah I almost forgot about that let me grab them!"

Zoya rushed to her cupboard and quickly pulled out the outfit that she was supposed to wear for the mehendi function. She came back and handed the Kameez to Najma.

Najma: "Oh my god! Zoya this outfit looks so beautiful! Masha'Allah you are going to look so beautiful tonight! Watch bhai-jaan will not be able to take his eyes off you for even a moment!"

Najma squealed even more over the outfit and Zoya looked around blushing like a tomato at her comment. There was a knock at Zoya's door and she went to go open it. There stood Asad with a big box in his hands and a playful grin on his face.

Zoya: "Ji Mr. Khan did you need something?"

Asad: "Woh Zoya this is for you. And do read the note, its inside in the box. Oh and Zoya don't be late okay."

With that Asad turned around and left. Zoya was puzzled with his strange behavior and closed her door to quickly check inside the box to see what her Jahanpana six packs had gave her. Najma came up to Zoya and helped her open the box. As Zoya opened the box both girls let out a gasp. Inside was the most beautiful salwar Kameez. Zoya saw the note and picked it up to read what it says.

Zoya please meet me in the backyard in approximately thirty minutes. I have a surprise waiting for you. Please come in the salwar that I have gifted you. I wish to see you wearing this color I am sure you will look amazing in it.

Asad

PS: Please do not make your Jahanpana six packs wait!

Zoya put down the note in a daze and picked up the Salwar. It was beautiful and she had to admit that her emotionally challenged Mr. Khan did have good choice in women's clothes. As the Salwar dropped open her face fell. Najma noticed and asked what was wrong.

Zoya: "This salwar doesn't have any sleeves its sleeveless Najma how can I wear this?"

Najma: "But Zoya what's wrong? I mean bhai-jaan gave you it as a gift and wants to see you wearing it so what's wrong?"

Zoya hesitated for a bit but then she decided to tell Najma the reason for her hesitation. Zoya closed her eyes and brought her hand to her sleeve and pulled it up enough for Najma to see the charred skin from the burn marks she got as a child. Najma followed Zoya's hand and let out a gasp when she saw the burn on her hand. Now it came to her it explained why Zoya always wore long sleeved shirts. Tears started to fall from Zoya's eyes and Najma quickly rushed up to her and pulled her into a bone crushing hug.

Najma: "Zoya why are you ashamed of that. I don't know where or when you got that burn but it doesn't mean you have to hide it. No one will judge you here this is your own family and we all love you. So there is no need to cry about it okay. An also if you still are too uncomfortable with bhai-jaan seeing it well then you can always drape your dupatta on that side and just let it fall over your hand. But trust me you don't have to we love you and just because you have a burn on your skin will make us stop loving you. Do you understand?"

Zoya looked up at Najma with tears welled in her eyes. She gave her a small smile and pulled Najma into another hug.

Zoya: "Thank you Najma, thank you so much for this."

Najma: "No need to thank me...Bhabi! No hurry up and get dressed you have a date with bhai-jaan at 2 and look it's already 1:40! Hurry up you don't want to keep bhai-jaan waiting now do you?"

Najma laughed and walked out of Zoya's room leaving behind a blushing Zoya. She quickly grabbed the Kameez and ran into the bathroom to change. She came out and looked at her clock and saw she only had ten minutes left she quickly fixed her hair applied kohl to her eyes and grabbed a pair of earrings and rushed out of her room to go to the backyard where asad was waiting for her.

She stepped out onto the lawn and gasped. In the middle of the lawn was a big gazebo. She looked around but couldn't see him anywhere. She walked up to the gazebo and saw a small round table in the middle with rose petals scattered around with a small box in the middle of the table. She walked around and red and white heart shaped balloons were scattered around on the ground with rose petals. All of a sudden a pair of hands grabbed Zoya from behind and pulled her flush against their body. She knew to well who it was. Asad brushed her hair aside to one side and placed a kiss in the nape of her neck. He felt Zoya shudder against him. He nuzzled closer to her and he felt Zoya relax in his embrace.

Asad: "Masha'Allah Zoya you look beautiful. An thank you for wearing the outfit and for being on time."

Zoya: "So Mr. Khan are you going to keep hugging me or will you tell me the reason why you called me out here. What is this surprise for?"

Asad let go of Zoya and was going to walk over to the table to but right at the same time Zoya stepped away as well. The dupatta fell off of Zoya's shoulder since it was stuck under his foot. Zoya froze in her tracks she turned around to face Asad and saw Asad staring at her with a sympathetic expression. Zoya looked down at her feet and tears soon started to fall. Asad walked up to her and lifter her chin up to make her look at him. He wiped away her tears and shook his head telling her not to cry.

Asad: "Zoya what's wrong? Why are you crying? Is it because of your scar?"

Zoya: "Please Mr. Khan don't pity me I know it is disgusting but this is the truth I was burned in a fire when I was three years old it was the same accident in which I lost my ammi but the scar are permanent they never went away."

Asad: "Zoya why would you say that your scars are disgusting? They are not disgusting! They are beautiful! They make you more beautiful! Without them you are incomplete because this scar resembles the type of person you have become. These are your battle scars! They tell me the story of a young girl who has fought all her life and look at her now she's a strong, beautiful, independent person. Your battle scars have shaped you into the person you are today and without them you aren't you. Do not feel sad about them instead you should be proud of them if people say something ignore them because they don't know you! Your amazing and I love you just the way you are the whole package including the crazy you as well!"

Zoya pulled back with her mouth hanging in the shape of an O. She smacked asad and realized he had teased her at the end and then she gasped realizing what asad had just confessed to her. Asad had just said that he loves her. Zoya's excitement was visible in her eyes. She felt as if she was on the moon.

Zoya: "Mr. Khan what did you just say to me there at the end?"

Asad: "That I lo..."

Asad stopped and grinned at Zoya and ruffled his hair with the other hand. He realized he got carried away in the moment and had confessed to Zoya. It wasn't as planned but he felt happy that he was finally able to tell her.

Asad stepped back and took Zoya's left hand in his and got down on his knees. He pulled the box out of his jacket pocket and pulled out her engagement ring. Zoya looked down at her hand and realized her ring was missing and realized that the doctors had probably taken it off her hand when she was in the hospital. She looked back and asad and finally progressed what he was about to do.

Asad: "Zoya you came into my life as a storm. You literally turned my whole life upside down. You never listened to me, always fought with me and always got yourself in trouble while helping others. You came into our lives and changed everything for the better. You made my ammi and sister smile after such a long time. You were the light in our darkest hour. You have helped break down the walls that your emotionally challenged Akdu Ahmed Khan had built around his heart. You showed me what love is Zoya, you taught me how to love and how to live life. You are the reason for my smile. If I don't see you for a day I get impatient and panic. Your amazing Zoya I want to wake up every morning to you next to me to see your face first to start my day off. Without you I am nothing Zoya. I love you Zoya. I love everything about you so will you do the honors of marrying me and spending the rest of your life with me."

By the end of Asad's speech Zoya was crying. She silently shook her head in confirmation and Asad slipped the ring onto her finger. He got up and pulled her into a hug. He pulled back and and wiped away her tears again.

Asad: "Zoya I love you."

Zoya was in shock she still wasn't able to get her thoughts together and just hugged asad back. She was so happy that she got someone as amazing as Asad and such a wonderful family which would finally be hers in its own true sense.

Zoya: "Mr. Khan thank you so much for this. The proposal it's is amazing something I will cherish forever and also tell our kids about!"

Asad: "Oh so the nikaah has not happened yet and you are already talking about our children! An Mrs. Khan I think you are forgetting something."

Zoya: "I am? What am I forgetting?"

Zoya kept think then it suddenly hit her what Asad was hinting at. She looked down and blushed red. She looked up at Asad and smiled at him.

Zoya: "Woh..Mr. Kh.."

Asad: "No do not call me Mr. Khan...call me asad."

Zoya: "Okay. Woh asad I don't know what you are talking about I am not forgetting anything!"

Asad: "Zoya come on this is not fair you know what I am talking about."

Zoya looked up at Asad and smirked. She walked closer to him and entwined her hands around his neck. She came close to his ears. Asad could feel her breath against his neck. It sent a shiver down his spine but he loved having Zoya close to him and holding her.

Zoya: "ASAD! I LOVE YOU!!"

Zoya screamed into his ear she pulled back and smirked at Asad leaned in and gave him a kiss right on his lips then pulled away running and laughing. Asad had registered what Zoya had just done and then took off running after her.

Asad: "Zoya come back here right this instant!"

Asad chased Zoya around in the backyard. He finally caught her and they both tripped and fell with Zoya on the bottom and Asad on top. Zoya was blushing red crimson Asad was looking at her and smirking. They were lost in each other's until the voice of a certain someone brought them out of their trance.

At the sound of the Zoya asad clenched his fists. Zoya notice the change in his behavior and got off her he helped her up and then they turned to walk away but then they stopped dead in their tracks when they heard the next words out of Tanveer's mouth.

Tanveer: "Haan it's all done. I put acid in the mehendi so Zoya would not apply it. Yeah it's not big but I am saving the rest for tomorrow the day of the nikaah. I will get asad to that warehouse no matter what you just make sure you bring me what I asked for because if I don't have that then my plan won't work I need to make sure Asad is unconscious the whole time and so when Asad wakes up he will believe he actually took advantage of me. I am sure this will of course break the nikaah between Asad and Zoya but this will also ensure that Asad will marry me so that I can give my child his name. Bi you have to help me or else I will tell Asad that his dear father is truly innocent and the recordings from the gudiya were changed because you asked me to change it! And besides remember I still have a copy of that recording so if you don't help me I will just hand over that recording to Asad. Okay yeah but make sure you have those goons ready for tomorrow."

Asad and Zoya stood there shocked and rooted to the spot still processing what they had just overheard Tanveer talk about. Asad clenched his fists tighter and then turned around to walk into her room. Zoya snapped out of her thoughts and rushed after Asad to stop him before he does something stupid.

Zoya: "Asad! Wait stop!"

Asad: "Why should I! She disgusts me she's been playing us this whole time even last night she didn't really get burned she faked it! I will not spare her! She even switched the recordings for the gudiya! That means ammi was right all along. I will not spare her! I will have her put behind bars along with Raziya"

Zoya: "Asad stop! Even if we do anything right now it won't make a difference because we still don't have any concrete proof against them. Please calm down and listen to me I have a plan!"

Later that Evening

Dilshad: "Najma hurry up and bring down Zoya down everyone is waiting for her."

Najma: "Ji ammi I will just call her."

Everyone was running around and rushing to get things ready for the Mehendi night everything was ready within time just Zoya was missing. Asad was constantly pacing around waiting for Zoya to come down so he could see her. Najma turned around to go to Zoya's room but stopped when she saw Zoya coming out from her room.

Najma: "Ammi Zoya is here."

When Asad heard Najma say that Zoya was finally there he quickly started looking for her amongst the people in the crowd. He came up to his ammi, Zeenat and his sister and looked for Zoya. When he looked up and saw her it was like he couldn't breathe. There stood Zoya in a white Salwar Kameez with purple looking just like an angel. Asad couldn't take his eyes of Zoya as she made her way through the guests to get to them. She looked amazing and pretty in white. He didn't know that white would look so good on her. Zoya looked up as she felt Asad's penetrating gaze on her. She locked eyes with Asad and blushed, Asad winked at her and she looked down at the ground. Najma walked up to Zoya and led her by the hand to where her ammi was standing.

Dilshad: "Masha'Allah Zoya you look beautiful today. No wonder Asad cannot take his eyes off of you, now let's go we have to start with the mehendi."

Zoya walked passed Asad and brushed her hand against his. At the contact Asad felt a jolt of electricity run through his body. Zoya went and sat amongst the ladies and was getting ready to have her mehendi down. But soon Tanveer came down to take pleasure in watching Zoya in pain.

Tanveer: Arrey wah! The mehendi ceremony has already started. Oh look at that Zoya you look so beautiful."

Zoya: "Thank you Tanveer."

Tanveer: "No need to thank me Zoya, oh well Khala if it isn't a problem since I am Jammy's best friend can I do the honors of putting Mehendi on Zoya's hand first?"

Dilshad: "Sure Tanveer why not go ahead."

Tanveer: "Thank you Khala"

Tanveer smirked to herself and then grabbed a Mehendi off of the tray to apply it on her hand. She thought that right when the mehendi hits Zoya's hand she would deny having it put on her hand. She squeezed a little on her hand and started the design she was concentrating on the design that she didn't realize that Zoya still did not say anything. After she finished she looked up at Zoya and noticed the tears that were welled in her eyes. Tanveer smirked and leaned in to whisper something into Zoya's ear.

Tanveer: "What's wrong Zoya? Does something hurt? Oh I am sorry I forgot to tell you that I had mixed acid into your mehendi!"

Zoya looked up at Tanveer with determination and spat out in her face with a cold voice.

Zoya: "Not a bit Tanveer. Is this the best you could do by putting acid in my mehendi?"

Zoya leaned away and looked at Tanveer with eyes burning with rage. She looked towards Asad and saw Asad smile at her. Zoya returned a watery smile to Asad and put her strong face back up till it was over. Zoya's thoughts went back to when she had her conversation with Asad regarding Tanveer.

Flashback

Asad: "Zoya are you crazy! You cannot do this! I will not let you do it! I cannot see you going through that much pain just for me!"

Zoya: "Asad you have to listen to me if I don't put the mehendi on or if we even change it Tanveer will get suspicious about it. We can't have her find out that we know or else we will not be able to prove Dost innocent and also we will not be able to catch Tanveer red handed. I mean look at how she fooled us all with her fake burn marks. Please Asad you have to trust me on this. I will be fine an besides I have you so when I have my Jahanpana six packs with me there's nothing for me to worry about!"

Asad: "Okay fine but Zoya promise me if at any time you do not want to continue with the mehendi gesture to me and I will stop the function okay."

Zoya: "Asad there will be need for that. I am getting this mehendi done for our nikaah and I do not want to leave it incomplete just because of Tanveer. I will be fine I promise you."

Zoya snapped out of her thoughts as she heard all the commotion going on around her. She realized that the mehendi was already done and everyone was laughing and having fun. Soon Dilshad came to her and wanted to take her to wash the mehendi off of Zoyas hand.

Dilshad: "Zoya chalo its time to wash the mehendi off your hands. Chalo I will take you to the bathroom."

Zoya panicked as she realized if water touched her hand she would feel more pain. She couldn't find a way out of it and decided to just follow Dilshad quietly to the bathroom. She washed her hands off with water and came back. Asad realized her eyes were red and he knew she was crying. He walked up to her and held her hands up. He looked at her hands and noticed that they were all red and burned from the acid.

Dilshad: "Ya allah! Zoya what happened to your hands?! How did they get burned?"

Zoya: "Who Phupi I think I was allergic to the mehendi that's why but I am fine."

Dilshad: "Well make sure you put some ointment on your hand beta so it wont hurt."

Zoya: "Ji Phupi."

Najma: "Wow Bhabi the color of your Mehendi is so dark! That means that bhai-jaan loves you a lot doesn't it."

At Najma's comment both Zoya and Asad looked up at each other smiling. They knew well enough the reason behind Najma's comment but it didn't bother them because she was right because Zoya knew Asad loved her a lot.

Najma: "Ammi doesn't bhai-jaan have to find his name in the mehendi designs?"

Dilshad: "Your right Najma he does so Asad what are you waiting for look for your name."

Asad looked down at her hand again and then looked up after a bit. He saw the trace of the A and then the women's started saying that he wasn't able to find his name. Asad looked at Zoya and winked at her. She blushed and looked at her ground. They were lost in each other and did not hear the doorbell ring. Dilshad went to go open the door and was shocked to see who was standing there. Dilshad recovered and brought the guest inside. Dilshad cleared her throat to get the attention of her family to see who has come. Zoya slowly looked up and was shocked to see who was standing in front of her.

Precap:

The slap resonated within the entire Khan Mansion. Dilshad's eyes were burning with rage as she looked at the people who had just shattered her dreams.

Dilshad: "Tanveer how could you do this to us! And Asad tum how could you do this to Zoya! How could you betray her! Look at her bechari is heartbroken! What have you done to her! Aur tum Tanveer don't try to act innocent in all of this either!! You are more at fault in this then Asad! If he couldn't control it you being a woman could've have somehow handled the situation!"

With that Dilshad turned around to gather up a broken Zoya how was sobbing uncontrollably. Zoya held her hand up to Dilshad and asked her to stop she looked at Asad with tears in her eyes and then turned around to walk away with a big grin on her face.


Phew! Finally! Well that's Part A to chapter 4! I hope its long enough for you guys! I wrote this update in one hour! Wow that was fast and man do my hands hurt from typing that much! 😕

I dont know how the chapter turned out. I hope its good. 😳

But please do like and comment!

Cause this is how it works...

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FF + Readers +Comments = Me happy... Me happy= faster/longer updates! 😃😆


Lol okay sorry that was just me trying to be funny I guess you guys aren't laughing.

But yes do comment I love reading your guys comments.

So yeah... read and let me know if i should continue...

okay okay ill stop now. read and comment

Bye 😃

Oh almost forgot! The pics for Zoya's outfits! LOL GOSH SORRY IM SO SLOW TODAY! 😆

THIS IS HER OUTFIT FOR THE MEHENDI!!

IT SHOULD BE SLEEVELESS!! 😃


THIS IS THE OUTFIT ASAD GIFTED ZOYA!! 😃😃



READ AND COMMENT MY LITTLE MINIONS!! I SHALL BY WAITING IMPATIENTLY FOR YOUR REPLIES!!

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Ruksar 😊

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