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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Entry No #30


OS: Valentine at the hospital


It was the day of valentine and all were busy dressing for their partner.

"Bhaijaan,can you do a little faster? It seems like we will reach there when the party gets over." said Nazma banging the door like hell.

Asad replies, "Tamatar, wait for 2 minutes. I am almost ready."

Asad comes out of his room to see the shocked face of Nazma and Dilshad.

"Ammi aur Tamatar please don't look at me like that. I feel shy."

Dilshad says with a smile plastered on her face "It seems like you are surely going to give a heart attack to the girls in the party. So the question is who the lucky one is."

***

"You are looking gorgeous Zoya. I am speechless. Don't know you are dressinf up so much but he will be so lucky to have you."

"Stop it Jiju. You are thinking a little more. It's nothing like that. It's valentine day and I can wear what I am comfortable I so…" said Zoya nonstop.

"I don't know who that guy was but he he surely was right. You are talking nonstop like a Rajdhani train .Okay now jokes apart be ready quick it's already 6'o clock and the party is gonna start at 7'o clock.

***

Both in a hurry in their respective cars to their destination "Arriety Restaurant and Bar." Zoya and Asad were bysu admiring the rain that was falling outside their car windo. They seemed to have a flashback of their first meeting.

***

Flashback:

Like always Zoya was late for her class and was running towards her class when she bumped into someone. He was a tall guy with a well shaved face and a well built body and his eyes were hyptonizing chocolate brown.

"Allah Miya, don't you have eyes?" sasked Zoya with anger.

"Yes I do. But I am new here and I don't know the directions." The stranger said.

"So,what can I do you you….(reading his ID-card) Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan."

"I have'nt told you to do anything. You go your way and I'm going mine."

"Allah Miya, can't you even say sorry?" said an annoyed Zoya.

"Okay, Miss Farooqi you need to stop your Rajdhani train. I am really sorry."

Saying this both of them went towards the opposite directions unknown of the fact that they were meant to be together.

***

"Time has changed a lot now." thought Zoya. She was busy looking outside the window when her driver told her " Mam, our brake has failed and I am not able to stop the car."

" What the hell? Now what are we going to do? I should ca;; someone immediately" said Zoya and started to call someone."

"hell…."

Before she could complete her sentence, the car collided into a tree.

"Hello….Hello…" came the voice from the other side of the phone.

People gathered around the spot and started to help them. Someone picked up the phone. "Salaam walekhum."

"Walekhum Salaam."

"Ji aap kaun bol rahe hai ? Yahapar ek accideny hua hai. We are taking them to the Sanjeevani Hospital. Aap jaldise waha pohochia."

The mobile fell from his hand. What Zoya had an accident. He was in a dilemma.

"Driver,take me to Sanjeevani hospital." said Asad.

The driver hurried the car towards Sanjeevani Hospital noticing his master worried and tensed like never before.

***

He ran to the emergency room as fast as his legs could take him. He was afraid if anything will happen to her. All their beautiful moments were coming as a flashback in his mind.

"Sister, any accident case has come here just now." he asked to a nurse.

"Yes,I think it's room no. 206. Actually,it was not too serious. Just some scratches and cuts. They were indeed lucky as no one survives such an accident.

Asad ran to the room no. 206. Zoya was sitting at the bed all tensed. But as soon as Asad entered the room Zoya's tension turned into happiness.

Asad ran to Zoya and gave her a bear hug.

I am so sorry Mr. Khan. I ruined our first valentine. I am really very sorry." said Zoya tears forming in her eyes.

"No, Zoya. You did not ruin anything. We will celebrate our Valentine day here only." said Asad.

"Here only?"

"Yes. So Zoya can I have a dance with you?" asked Asad offering his hand.

"The pleasure's all mine." They danced on the tune of their heart.

After the dinner,they had strawberries which was lying in a bowl on the table.

Asad was searching something when his hangs fell into a ring. A diamond ring he had brought to propose Zoya.

"Zoya,please close your eyes. I have brought something for you."

Zoya closed her eyes while Asad kneeled on the floor with the ring in his hand.

"Zoya, will you marry me?"

Zoya was shocked to hear that. She didn't knew what to answer.

"Can you do a little fast my knees are aching."

Acting to be thinking "Yes or no."

"What is there to think?"

"Yes,Asad I will marry you."

He slipped the ring into her finger whose veins were supposed to reach the heart. The diamond ring was of no match before the natural beauty standing in front of him.

***

THE END

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Entry No #31


OS: Forbidden love
How beautiful and important is the day of Eid! But, it turned out to be a disaster for some...
A full thirty day after the Ramadan comes Eid. Especially for the Muslims it is the day when the feeling o festiveness is around. The day looks more dazzling and brighter to wish the world a happy Eid. Every one wakes up early and have a bath to go all clean and pure to pray for Allah.
******************
As usual the Khan's and the Siddiqui's were being ready for their visit to the mosque.
'Zoya, get ready fast.', said Humeira.
'Humeira bagam aap chaliye ham abhi ata hain.', said Zoya.
*******************
'Bhaijaan, aap kitna time waste karenga. You take time to dress up like a girl.
'Tamatar, please do not disturb me.'
'Bhaijaan, hum mashjid ja rahe ha party ma nahi itne bhi dress up maat kariye.'
'Okay, Tamatar. Go and tell the driver to take the car out or we are sure to be late.'
*****************
This day was special for Zoya and Asad as they were going to tell the truth about their love for each other and meet each other's family.
They reached to the mashjid in time. On the marble floor of the mashjid was spread many carpets. And there were row-upon-row of worshippers as far as the eye could see, spilling and praying before the mosque courtyard. This was the place were neither status nor money matters.
It was the only place where people came with pure heart to worship the Allah as in the eyes of Allah everyone is equal even if it is a multi-millionaire or a beggar.
The prayer gets over and the men embrace each other.
In the crowd of thousand there were two lovers finding each other.
Finally their search was over and they were in the embrace of
Each other. Somebody was ot going to tolerate it. Zoya and Asad were separated from each other.
'Zoya, what are you doing darling? Do you even know who he is? He is the son of our enemy Dilshad.', said Razia.
'Enemy.'
Just at the time Khan's and the Siddiqui's arrive at the place.
'Asad why are you here standing with them? We are not supposed to talk to them. They are our enemys.'
'Why both of you are talking of rivalry? Can't we all be together again for the sake of me and Zoya? We love each other.', said Asad.
'Have you lost it? What are you speaking? Zoya is it true?', asked Razia with anger clearly visible on her face.
'No, Razia bi it's true. We love each other and we are never going to let this rivalry of yours come between us.'
'When, I am alive I am never gonna let that happen.',said Dilshad.
'Please ammi. We cannot live wout each other and can't we just forget the past.', said Asad tears forming in his eyes,
'No, we are never gonna let you that.'
'I said it before we are not gonna let this rivalry come between us.
Saying this he rushed to the river bank were they always used to meet.
When they reached their Asad took out a diamond ring from his pocket.
'I thought I will make you wear it in front of every one but they are not gonna agree to this so Iam here making you wear it now.'
'Mr. Khan but what will we do next?'
'Enough of the questions.'
He slipped the ring into her finger.
He grabbed her and jumped into the river officially engaged.
******************
Tomorrow the dead body of the two lovers was found in the river by the local people.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Entry No #32


FROM LIPS TO HEART

Maulana : kya apko Qubool Hai ?

flashback:

It's been two months now that both Khan families' life has changed and peace was back.

Mr Dhurandhar extends Zoya's visa after she confesses him her love for Asad which he believes of course as he witnessed their love during their fake engagement drama. Slowly Zoya got to know Tanveer's true colors and her evil intentions. And of course once again she brought the truth in front of Asad's eyes.

Tanveer had no choice but to narrate the whole truth and not only hers. Razia and Siddiqi got arrested, and Asad warned Tanveer to leave India forever and never come back otherwise he wont hesitate to put her in jail as well.

After all this, both families were in good terms. Asad started to talk to his father but still called him by his name. Ayaan fell in love with Humaira after she stood up against her parents for his family's sake and it touched him. Zoya was very happy to find out that she has a sister and they shared an exceptional bond but she never left Khan Mansion, Dilshad didn't let her go as she loved her like her own daughter.

Today was a special day for all of them. They were celebrating Eid and everyone was supposed to come at Asad's place.

Preparations were going on as some guests were also invited, Asad had left for the Eid prayer and here Dilshad and Najma were taking care of everything. Zoya comes home and gets happy seeing them.

Zoya: Eid Mubarak! (she hugs Dilshad first)

Dilshad: Eid Mubarak beta (she then hugs Najma)

Zoya: Eid Mubarak tamatar

Najma: thank you! tumko bhi

Zoya: main aap dono ke liye kuch laayi hoon (she gives a box to Dilshad and another one to Najma)

Dilshad: Zoya…yeh kya hai?

Zoya: Phuphi aap dekho tho sahi (both open their gifts and gets pleasantly surprised)

Najma: wow!! It's so beautiful Zoya (she smiles)

Zoya: pasand aaya tumhe?

Najma: haan! Thank you so much Zoya yeh chudiyan mujhe bohut pasand hai (she looks at Dilshad who was staring at the earings)

Zoya: kya hua Phuphi? Apko earing pasand nahin aaye?

Dilshad: arre nahin Zoya..yeh tho bohut khubsoorat hai

Zoya: apko pata hai Phuphi jab maine ye earings shop mein dekhe tho mujhe apki yaad aa gaayi (Dilshad caresses her cheek)

Dilshad: par Zoya…beta I'm sorry humne kuch nahin liya tumhare liye aaj ke din

Zoya: Phuphi..apne mujhe itna kuch diya tho hai…maa ka pyaar, ek family, itni saari khushiyan…(Dilshad smiles and Asad comes home with two bags in his hand. He had wished his mom and Najma this morning before leaving but Zoya wasn't there)

Zoya: salam aleikum (she brightly smiles)

Asad: waleikum salam

Zoya: Eid Mubarak Mr Khan

Asad: Eid Mubarak Miss Farooqi (Najma notices the bags in his hand)

Najma: Bhaijaan yeh apke haath mein kya hai?..aap bhi gifts laaye ho? (Asad looks at her confused)

Asad: main bhi matlab?

Najma: dekhiye naa Zoya bhi humare liye gifts laayi hai (a very slight almost invisible smile draws his lips seeing how much Zoya cares about his family. She always tries to make them happy and he loved this quality of hers) Bhaijaan? (he snaps out of his thoughts) kya soch rahe hain? Gifts dijiye naa (he gives Najma her gift and the other bag to his mom. He had bought a neckless for Dilshad and salwar kameez for Najma)

Asad: agar pasand nahin aaya tho batana main change karunga

Najma: nahin Bhaijaan mujhe bohut pasand hai..aur dekhiye naa Zoya ne jo bangles gift ki hai iske saath match bhi kar raha hai..aap dono ki taste kitni milti hai (they look at each other embarrassed but Zoya was the first one to break the contact)

Zoya: Najma tum ek kam karo tum..aaj yahi pehen lo (liking the idea she smiles)

Najma: theek hai main abhi change kar ke aati hoon (she rushes to her room. Dilshad and
Zoya notice that Asad has not bought anything to Zoya. She feels hurt for a second thinking
that even after all that time she still was just a guest for Asad)
Dilshad: asad..tumne Zoya ke liye kuch nahin laaya? (Asad looks at Zoya who seemed worried
now)
Asad: voh..actually..(before he could even finish Zoya cuts him)
Zoya: Phuphi its okay rehne dijiye..vaise bhi mujhe gifts ziada pasand nahin..
asad: Miss Farooqi apka gift apke room mein hai
Zoya: sach? (she gets really happy) I mean..(controling
her joy) itni takleef uthane ki zaroorat nahin thi Mr Khan (Dilshad smiles at her childish behaviour)

Dilshad: jao dekho kya laaya hai Asad ne tumhare liye

Without wasting another second she rushes to her room. Dilshad slightly laughs and Asad follows Zoya. Her door was opened and he finds her starring at her gift with her eyes widened. He was lil bit confused as he didn't know if it was a good sign or not. He clears his throat to point out his presence and she looks up.

Asad: any..problem?

Zoya: hun? (looking confused at him)

Asad: voh actually…Miss Farooqi maine socha shayad apka maan kare aise kapde pehena aaj…but agar apko kuch aur pehena hai tho…(he couldn't find the right words to explain himself) I mean main apko force nahin kar raha…(Zoya was watching him confused thinking why he was like that. He wasn't able to say a simple thing to her) what I'm trying to say is..(she cuts him trying to help)

Zoya: Mr Khan apne yeh lehenga mere liye Eid ke liye gift ki hai? (he had bought her a beautiful sky blue lehnga with pink shades and silver embrodery and that's why she was starring)

Asad: ji…matlab..apko pasand hai tho aap pehen sakti hai..agar nahin hai tho…

Zoya: bohut achi hai Mr Khan (she smiles at him and he felt relieved) aap chahte hain ki main isse aaj pehen loun?

Asad: haan (she raises her brow) matlab..agar apka maan kare tho, main force nahin kar raha

Zoya: Mr Khan ab jab aap mujhe iss mein dekhna chahte hain tho main zaroor pehen lungi (they both look at each other in shock, Zoya more than Asad, who was actually amused) matlab apne itni takleef uthayi hai tho..main itna tho kar sakti hoon (Asad was about to leave but Zoya stops him calling him back) Mr Khan ek minute (he turns back. And from her cupboard she takes a box and offered it to him)

Asad: yeh kya hai?

Zoya: ek chota sa gift apke liye (he takes it and sees a watch inside) voh meri waje se apki watch kharab ho gaayi thi naa (he remembered how she tried to fix Tanveer's bathroom feeling jealous) aur don't worry yeh waterproof hai tho aap jab chahe usko apni wet look se geela kar sakte hain (he slightly smiles)

Asad: thank you Miss Farooqi (and he leaves)

****

Ayaan, his family and the guests were here. Asad was spending his time with his baby bro and he was very happy that now they didn't need to meet secretly anymore. Nikhat, Nuzat, Najma and Humaira were having fun together. Zoya finally made her entry. She was looking gorgeous in her lehenga. As nobody was used to see her in traditional clothes, they were quite surprised..but more than anyone Asad was amazed. He couldn't take his eyes off her, he for sure tried several times but the very next second he found himself starring back at her. He was trying hard to keep control over his feelings because if he listened himself she would be in his embrace right now. Ayaan moves his gaze towards his brother and smiles seeing his condition. He knew Asad was in love with Zoya but he just won't admit his weakness. He moves closer to Asad and whispers in his ear.

Ayaan: Bhaijan aap ghoore kyun rahe hain Mona ko? (coming back to his sense he looks at Ayaan embarrassed)

Asad: kya?...main kisi ko dekh nahin raha main tho bas…(he cuts him)

Ayaan: rehne dijiye Bhai mujhe sab pata hai (Asad gets annoyed)

Asad: kuch ziada hi smart baan gaaye ho aaj kal..

Zoya greets all the guests with her warm smile and hugs all her loved ones to wish them Eid. Everyone just loved her in this kameez and she actually loved wearing it.

Najma: Zoya tum inn kapdon mein bohut ziada achi lag rahi ho

Zoya: achi tho lagungi hi tamatar yeh lehenga hai hi itni khubsoorat

Humaira: akhir humari behen ki choice hai tho lehenga kamal ki honi hi hai

Zoya: thank you so much (she smiles) par yeh maine nahin kharid li hai yeh tho gift hai

Humaira: acha? Kisne gift kiya apko?

Zoya: well issi baat pe ek sher harz hai (she smiles)

Maana hai choice hai mera lajawaab jab nobat aati hai kapdon ki

Maana hai choice hai mera lajawaab jab nobat aati hai kapdon ki

Par joothi nahin hoon main aur sab ko kehna padega

Iss baar yeh ek gift hai aap sab ke bade Bhaijaan ki

Shukriya, shukriya (the girls look at Zoya surprised)

Nikhat: yeh Asad Bhaijaan ne diya apko?

Zoya: haan! Shocking naa? main bhi bohut shock hui thi dekh kar (she looks around and saw Asad with Ayaan and smiles) main abhi aati hoon zara Rabart se bhi milun

She walks toward them and with every step she was taking Asad was feeling tensed. They heard her famous shayari and now that she is coming he was sure Ayaan would take advantage of the situation and embarrass him.

Asad: main abhi aata hoon (he wanted to leave but Ayaan holds his arm)

Ayaan: arre Bhaijaan rukhiye tho voh bechari tho humare pass aa tho rahi hai (he holds him tight and Zoya stops in front of them with her killer smile which was working on Asad also now)

Zoya: hey Rabart!

Ayaan: hi Mona..aaj apne sab ko hairaan kiya apni naayi avtar mein (she smiles)

Zoya: well..ab itni khubsoorat gift mili hai tho pehena tho tha..hai naa Mr Khan? (he didn't say anything and she was checking his clothes surprised that he was in black again) Allah Miyaa! What's wrong with you Mr Khan? (Ayaan looks at Asad confused who checks his clothes before looking at Zoya in question)

Asad: kya hua apko?

Zoya: Mr Khan aap aaj bhi black pehen ke aaye hai

Asad: maaf kijiye par mujhe rainbow baan ne ka koi shauk nahin (he said annoyed)

Zoya: rainbow? Matlab main rainbow baan ke aayi hoon Mr Khan?

Asad: nahin maine apko nahin kaha main…(she cuts him getting dramatic as usual)

Zoya: tho kya kaha apne? Rabart tumne bhi suna right? (he nods in a yes looking at Asad) dekha! aur Mr Khan apko yaad dilaoun yeh kapde aap laaye hain mere liye tho agar apki choice rainbow jaisi hai tho iss mein meri kya galati hai?!

Asad: Miss Farooqi aap meri baat ghalat samajh rahi hai..maine kaha mujhe aise colors pasand nahin yeh nahin ki yeh app pe achi nahin lagti

Zoya: tho matlab main iss dress mein apko achi lagti hoon? (she cutely asked)

Asad: ji (Ayaan smiles in shock at Asad, who realised what he said) matlab..apko aise kapde suit karte hain (Zoya smiles she loved to see Asad uncomfortable in front of her)

****

A couple of days past but Asad and Zoya still have not confessed their feelings to each other. Infact they did not even dare to call each other by their names. Zoya badly wanted to of course but how could she? If Asad was being so distant with her how could she change her manners without being questioned?

She was standing near the bay window of her room admiring the moon.

Zoya: yeh Mr Akdu Ahmad Khan bhi naa..kabhi bhi kisi bhi kam ko le kar pehle kadam nahin utha sakte..pata nahin ek entire company kaise chalate hain…kab se iss ghar mein reh rahi hoon, guest se family baan gaayi hoon lekin phir bhi Miss Farooqi Miss Farooqi karte rehte hain!

Allah Miyaa apne Mr Khan ko aise kyun banaya? Kya voh kabhi mujhe yeh keh nahin paayenge ki main unhe pasand hoon bhi ya nahin?..kab tak mujhe hi sab kuch karni padegi? Iss mamle mein tho unhi ko kuch karna chahiye naa? please Allah Miyaa aap meri madat kijiye naa…

Here Asad wasn't sleeping either and just like Zoya he was standing near the bay window looking up at the dark sky enlightened by the moon and the stars.

Asad: jiske bare mein sochna bhi mere liye impossible tha pata nahin voh kaise ho gaaya..aur voh bhi Miss…Zoya se (he rubs his forehead) ab pata nahin kaise uss se apni dil ki baat keh doun?..jab bhi koshish karta hoon tho…(her voice rings in his ears when she always said he was emotionally challenged) actually voh theek hi keh rahi hai main sach mein emotionally challenged hoon..pata nahin kyun jo maan mein hai voh keh nahin paata

He deeply sighs. Suddenly the same thing strokes the mind of both of them.

That night when Zoya went alone to watch the shooting star..these two said a few things to each other but also they wished something that actually came true. Zoya remembered when Asad wished her to fall in love with someone who will teach her tehzeeb and tameez and will fix her brain. And Asad remembers when Zoya wished him to fall in love with a girl who wears jeans, who's stubborn, open minded and does not listen to his rules.

Asad: I can't believe it really happened...

Zoya: I can't believe it really happened…

****

In the morning Zoya was angry at Asad. She did not want to talk to him as he wasn't ready to open his heart to her. In the breakfast table she only talked to Najma and Dilshad avoiding him openly.

Zoya: pata hai Phuphi aap hum sab se itna pyaar karti hai naa ki apka pyaar breakfast mein bhi dikhayi deta hai (she smiles at Zoya) ab dekhiye naa aap mere liye strawberries bhi laayi hai I just love them (she eats one and enjoys it to the core) yummi! Phuphi issi baat pe ek sher harz hai (Dilshad smiles)

Dilshad: irshaad..

Zoya:

Strawberries are red, pasand hai mujhe unka taste,

Strawberries are red pasand hai mujhe unja taste,

Yeh dilwalon ke dil mein pyaar ka rang hota hai,

Sivaye ek bande ki kyunki carry karte hai itna bada sa pattar voh

In his chest!

Shukriya, shukriya (Dilshad looks from Zoya to Asad waiting for a fight to happen but Asad rubs his forehead trying to control his envy to riposte) par sach mein Phuphi kuch log aise hote hain ki pyaar ke bare mein jaan na tho door unko pyaar feel tak nahin hota (she throws a cold glance at Asad and then looks at Najma) Najma tu meri behen hai naa?

Najma: of course! Kyun?

Zoya: kyunki mujhe tumhe ek advice deni hai as a sister..tum naa kabhi ek akdu aur gusse wale type ke ladke ke saath shaadi mat karna! (feeling related to the conversation he looks at Zoya tuned) shaadi tho door uss se pyaar karne ki bhi sochna mat tum samjhi

Asad: Miss Farooqi aaj apko yeh pyaar aur shaadi ki baatein kyun sujh rahi hai? (she does not even look at him and continued)

Zoya: trust me tamatar aise logon se pyaar karna bekar hai kyunki voh tho kabhi kuch kehte nahin..aur tum tho bilkul meri tarah ho a fun loving girl tho ek akdu ke saath bilkul match nahin karegi..jhel nahin paogi usse (Najma was confused thinking why she was saying all this)

Najma: lekin Zoya main tho…(before she could say anything Zoe cuts her)

Zoya: haan! Tum tho already aisi situation mein ho..I mean already ek aise insaan ke saath reh rahi ho iss ghar mein (Asad was sure now she was referring to him)

Asad: Miss Farooqi aap…(not ready to listen she cuts him again)

Zoya: Phuphi mera breakfast ho gaaya main room mein jaati hoon theek hai?

Dilshad: sure jao beta (she leaves the dinning table totally ignoring Asad who gets mad at her.)

****

Zoya was in her room busy on her ipad. Asad was still upset for her behaviour so when he passed her room he stopped there. Seeing that she was doing nothing pissed him off even more, he knocks at the door and Zoya turns to see who it was. Seeing Asad at the door she didn't pay any attention to his presence and got back to what she was doing.

Asad: can I come in?

Zoya: main busy hoon Mr Khan aap baad mein aaye please (he really gets annoyed now so enters in anger)

Asad: what's wrong with you? (Zoya throws her ipad on her bed and stood up to face him)

Zoya: kyun? Ab kya kiya maine Mr Khan?

Asad: I should be asking this..aap subah se mujhe avoid kar rahi hai aur breakfast ke wakht mere bare mein pata nahin kya keh rahi thi

Zoya: apke bare mein?(she gave him a confused expression) main Najma se baat kar rahi thi

Asad: haan par apka matlab main tha right?

Zoya: Allah Miyaa what's wrong with you Mr Khan? Apko kya lagta hai mujhe sirf apke bare mein baat karni hai? ya phir mere maan mein sirf aap hi rehte hain?

Asad: main aisa kuch nahin keh raha..main bas jaan na chahta hoon ki aap mujhe aise ignore kyun kar rahi thi?

Zoya: kyun apko bura laga ki sab ka dhyaan aap pe nahin tha? ya phir apko iss baat ka bura laga ki main dhyaan nahin de rahi thi apko? (Asad looks at her surprised. Once again she had trapped him with her questions. Zoya was waiting and hoping for him to express something about his feelings at least here)

Asad: nahin..actually…

Zoya: actually!...exactly Mr Khan issi liye main apse baat karna nahin chahti..aap voh actually keh ke chale jaayenge wapis..tho kya faida apse baat karne ka jab aap kuch keh hi nahin sakte? Apni dil ki baat nahin keh sakte (he lowers his gaze. He knew his unexpressive nature annoyed her to the core but how could he change overnight)

Asad: dekhiye Miss Farooqi..

Zoya: no Mr Khan aap dekhiye…aap chahte hain ki main apse baat karun par aap tho kuch bolte hi nahin so from now I won't talk to you till you don't express yourself in a normal way (he could get angry at her but he couldn't blame either)

Asad: as you wish Miss Farooqi (saying this he leaves for office. And still in shock Zoya was watching him)

Zoya: Allah Miyaa what's wrong with this man? As you wish bol ke chala gaaya! (she crossed her arms) fine Mr Khan ab main bhi dekhti hoon ki kab tak aap meri silence bear kar sakte hain (she smiles mischievously)

****

The day comes to its end. Asad comes home after his work. He heads towards the kitchen as he was feeling thirsty. He pours a glass of water for himself and accidently drops some on the floor. He rolls his eyes and decides to clean it up in few minutes. He was peacefully drinking his water when his Miss Musibat came towards the kitchen. She stops and hesitates for a second wondering whether to go or not, then thought why should she avoid him? it was up to him now if he wanted to talk he had to express himself. She started walking again and Asad realised she was walking where the puddle was. He was hesitating to warn her as she didn't want to talk and if he says anything she won't let him for sure. He couldn't let her just walk on it, he had to do something.

Asad: Miss Farooqi..

Zoya: don't talk to me Mr Khan! Aap bhool gaaye maine kya kaha apse subah?

He closes his eyes for a second in desperation, this stubborn girl just won't let him talk and she was walking faster now. He had no choice but to rush towards her. Zoya walks on the puddle and slipped. Shutting her eyes under the fear to fall she suddenly felt a strong arm behind her back. Slowly opening her eyes she finds Asad just a few inches away from her face. A very slight smile on his lips he was lost in her big brown eyes. She tightens her grip on his muscular shoulder, she couldn't take her eyes off him. It wasn't a daily routine to be so close to the man she was madly in love with, so she didn't want that moment to end so soon..but slowly she felt herself being pulled back and find her balance. Asad didn't say anything he was waiting for her start her drama as usual. She fixes her hair and then looks up at him.

Zoya: aap bata nahin sakte the ki yahan pani gira hua hai?

Asad: I tried lekin aap mujhe baat karne kahan deti hain

Zoya: oh really? then why do you think I'm upset with you..aap kabhi baat karte hi nahin

Asad: aap baat karne ka mauka tho dijiye pehle..khud kabhi chup reh nahin sakti aur kisi aur ko baat karne hi nahin deti (her eyes widened with his accusations)

Zoya: Allah Miyaa! Main apko baat karne nahin deti?

Asad: agar aap todi der pehle meri baat sunti tho almost ghir nahin jaati (having a point on that she couldn't argue here)

Zoya: that's because mujhe apse baat nahin karna tha..lekin aap apni problem ki waje se mujhe blame mat kijiye aap emotionally challenged hai ismein meri koi galati nahin hai okay (seeing him rubbing his forehead she started babbling to herself) ghirne vali thi aur instead of saying Zoya ye iss haal mein bhi Miss Farooqi bol rahe hain..koi aise kaise ho sakta hai? agar mera surname Farooqi nahin inke height ki tara kuch lamba sa hota tho im sure 5 mins naam lete hue waste karte (asad looks up at her)

Asad: kuch keh rahi hai aap?

Zoya: ji nahin! mujhe apse kuch bhi nahin kehna…actually pata hai kya apko naa ek camera leke ghoomna chahiye tho jab apko baat karne ka maan ho tho record kijiye jaise ki apne ek baar kiya tha mere jaane ke wakht…and now I'm leaving aur mujhse baat mat kijiye aap! (she leaves from there angry)

****

After the dinner as Zoya didn't want to talk to Asad he took refuge in the garden. He was thinking about the small incident of the kitchen. Having Zoya in his arms for just a moment was the best thing of his day…he wished he could tell her how she makes him feel when she is around but alas he just couldn't...he also remembers how she complained to herself about the fact that he does not call
her Zoya but Miss Farooqi...yes Asad had heard that also. He was lost in his thoughts when
he felt a hand on his shoulder and when he looked up he finds his mother with his coffee
mug. Offering it to him she sits besides him on the bench.

Dilshad: Asad..beta tum yahan kya kar rahe ho akele?
Asad: kuch nahin ammy bas..aise hi...
Dilshad: Zoya ko lekar pareshan ho? (Asad looks at her surprised)
Asad: nahin ammy..main uske bare mein kyun sochunga

Dilshad: Asad..apni ammy se jooth bologe tum? main dekh rahi hoon kaise subah se Zoya tumhe ignore kar rahi hai...kya hua hai tum dono ke beech phir se? (Asad sighs rubbing his forehead)

Asad: ammy kya apko bhi lagta hai ki main mentally challenged hoon? (she looks at him surprised)

Dilshad: nahin Asad aisa kuch bhi nahin hai...bas tum har kisi ki tarah apni dil ki baat asaani se nahin keh pate ho..lekin iss mein koi buri baat nahin hai

Asad: mujhe lagta hai Zoya ko bura lagta hai jab main usse Miss Farooqi bulata hoon. Apko lagta hai ki mujhe usse uski naam se bulana chahiye?

Dilshad: mujhe lagta hai ki Zoya ko uski surname se bula kar usse aisa lagta hai ki voh abhi bhi yahan sirf ek mehman hai familly member nahin (Asad takes a sip of his coffee not sure about what to do) tumhe mohobbat ho gaayi hai Zoya se naa? (he looked at his mom in horror. How did she know about it? nobody was supposed to infact, and here she is talking about his love life with such a calm and normal expression)

Asad: ammy yeh app kya bol...(she cuts him)

Dilshad: dobara jooth bolne ki koshish kar rahe ho mujhse? Asad maine pyaar tumhare aankhon mein dekhi hai jab Zoya aas paas hoti hai (he does not dare to meet her eyes that embarrassed he was feeling) bohut pyaar karte ho naa uss se? (she smiles. Asad didn't say anything) beta tum doosron se apni dil ki baat share nahin kar sakte main samajhti hoon..lekin main tho tumhari maa hoon naa...tum apni maa se bhi kuch nahin kahoge? (he couldn't hide his life's most important truth from his mom anymore. He slowly looks up at her with his desperate eyes)

Asad: pata nahin yeh sab kab aur kaise ho gaaya ammy...maine kabhi khwab mein bhi nahin socha tha ki mujhe mohobbat ho jaayegi..aur voh bhi….mujhe tho yeh bhi nahin pata ki Miss Farooqi mere bare mein kya sochti hai

Dilshad: maine Zoya ki aankhon mein bhi tumhare liye pyaar dekha hai Asad..lekin jab tak tum usse bataoge nahin aur poochoge nahin tumhe iss baat ki haqeeqat pata nahin chalegi...aur beta ek baat tho pakka hai Zoya beshak ek modern ladki hai lekin voh kabhi bhi tumse pehle apni dil ki baat kahegi nahin..tho jo kuch karna hoga voh tumhe karna hai (he slightly smiles to his mother for her support and wondered how this is gonna happen with his not so expressive nature)

Asad: shukriya ammy..mera saath dene ke liye

Dilshad: Khuda hum pe mehraban ho gaaye hain aur mujhe akhir Zoya jaisi bahu milne vali hai tho saath kaise naa doun apne bete ka (she kisses his forehead) tum chinta mat kar theek hai?

Asad: ji...

Dilshad: andar chalein?

Asad: ammy aap jao main toda aur yahin pe rukhta hoon (she nods and left. Asad sighs deeply. His mother gave him hope again and it felt good)

****

One evening, Zoya came home but no one was there. Dilshad and Najma were out at a friend's place and she didn't know where Asad was, probably at office she thought. She went to her room put her bag and her ipad then came back in the kitchen to drink water. She suddenly hears a noise coming from nowhere, and a lil scared looks around. Thinking it was nothing she switches on TV but didn't find anything interesting. Again she hears a noise and the next moment all the lights went off. She stands up in fear trying to switch on TV but it wasn't working.

Zoya: who's there? (she asked scared. She takes a few steps and takes a vase from the table to defend her) listen..main darti nahin okay (looking around) and I have a weapon so just come out (the lights turn on and a very scared Zoya frozes at her place and drops the vase which breakes into pieaces. After a second, she takes a deep breath in relief but it does not last for too long as she hears a voice coming from no where.

Voice: kuch wakht pehle ek ladki meri zindagi mein meri sab si badi musibat baan ke aayi..ek bohut hi ziddi aur pagal kisam ki ladki (it didn't take too long for Zoya to recognize the husky voice but she wasn't able to see him) jahan bhi jaati thi ek problem create karti thi..main sochta tha ki voh New York se aayi hui ek badtameez, immature aur irresponsible insaan hai lekin...lekin wakht ke saath mujhe realise hua ki main kitna ghalat tha..meri soch kitni ghalat thi uske bare mein (Zoya's eyes get wet. For the first time Asad was confessing his mistakes to her) asal mein voh bohut hi pak dil ki hai..humeshe doosron ki khushi ke bare mein sochti hai aur unki madat karne ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakti hai..par main yeh kabhi samajh hi nahin paaya. Humesha usko har baat pe danta, bura kaha..har chiz ke liye ussi ko zimmedar samajhta tha yahan tak ki uspe haath..(he stopped, his heart and soul were overwhelmed with guilt) jab ki uski koi bhi galati nahin hoti thi..(she remembered that one time he slapped her. Even thought he apologized and she forgave him he always felt guilty about that) uski waje se aaj mujhe mere Abbu mil gaaye..mere bhai behen..meri Ammy aaj pehle ki tarah khush hai aur...aur usne mujhe pyaar karna sikhaya..(she heard those last words very closely so she turns around and finds Asad standing behind her. Her eyes widened in shock) zindagi bhar pyaar mein naa padne ki koshish ki maine, infact kabhi socha nahin tha ki mujhe pyaar ho sakta hai..lekin meri zindagi mein aa kar tumne sab kuch badal diya Zoya..pyaar ke naam se hi darta tha main..kyunki maine sirf dard paaya hai usmein aur main nahin chahta tha ki meri tarah koi aur yeh seh le..lekin pyaar kitni khubsoorat hai..kitni pak aur Allah ka diya hua tofa hai..yeh sab tumne samjhaya mujhe (tears were rolling down from Zoya's cheeks. It was just too good to be real..this man in front of her couldn't be THE Asad Ahmad Khan. The Asad she knows can't express his feelings and here he was confessing his love, and that to her she thought. Asad took a step forward) janta hoon ki maine tumhare saath bohut ghalat kiya hai aur jab kuch kehna chaha voh kabhi keh nahin paaya lekin...lekin aaj keh raha hoon. Keh raha hoon ki tum mere liye kiya maayne rakhti ho Zoya. Ki ab humesha yahin dua karta hoon ki Allah kabhi bhi tumhe meri nazron se door naa kare (he takes another step) ki aisa ek bhi pal nahin guzarta..jo main tumhare bare mein sochta nahin (he takes another step and now was just inches away from her. Zoya was paralized and so lost that she didn't even notice the distance between them was reducing) ki jab tum mere pass hoti ho tho meri dhadhkan tez ho jaati hai…

He was whispering now as they were too close. He took his last step because there wasn't any space left between them anymore. With a very gentle gesture he wipes her tears with his finger and takes her hands in his to rest them on his heart.

Asad: I Love You Zoya..(he whispers. Slightly smiling, she closes her yes to feel the pleasure of those words coming from her dream man) I Love You really very much...(she slowly opens her eyes still smiling, and looked into his teary eyes filled with so much passion and love for her) aur agar tumhe qubool ho tho...(he takes out the diamond ring Dilshad had gave him at the time of their fake engagement. He kneels down on one knee still holding her hand) tho kya tum mujhse sach mein niqaah karogi Zoya Farooqi? Mujhe iss duniya ka sab se khush naseeb insaan banaogi meri biwi baan kar?

It took Zoya a moment to realise what was happening. Asad was proposing her again..but for real this time. She wipes her tears coming to her senses and slowly kneels down so she can face him)

Zoya: Mr Khan...(she whispered. And after a second her voise raises) apko mentally challenged kya bola aap tho kuch bhi bolne lag gaaye! Mujhe tho laga aap chup hone vaale hai hi nahin kitna bol rahe the aap! (Asad looks at her in disbelief. He was proposing her and instead of saying yes she was complaining about the fact that he finally confessed his feelings) apko kya laga Mr Khan? Ki aap mujhe yeh sab kahenge..apni dil ki baat batayenge tho main bhi apse pyaar karungi? Apke saath niqaah karne ke liye tayaar ho jaoungi? (her voice was raising progressively) Bohut badi ghalat fehmi hai apki!..apne mujhe itna pareshan kiya, itna sataaya aur baat!...baat tho aap kabhi kar nahin paate, sirf voh actually bol ke nikal jaate! (Asad rubs his forehead in desperation. She'll never change he thought) itni choti si baat kehne ke liye apko kitna wakht laga, Allah hi jaane ke dobara kab aap kuch bol paayenge! Main tho…(he cuts her as she wasn't ready to stop her nonsense)

Asad: ZOYA! (he shouts and she became quite)...mujhse niqaah karogi?

Zoya: jab itne pyaar se pooch rahe ho (she sarcastically said) tho qubool karungi hi naa! (both smile to each other and without wasting another second Asad makes her wear the ring. He then helps her to stand up) actually I was wrong..apke dil mein pattar nahin seena hi tha par aap bas kuch bol nahin paa rahe the..(she cutely said and Asad rubs his forehead rolling his eyes)

Asad: Zoya seene mein dil hota dil mein seena nahin..actually ab samajh nahin aa raha ke poori zindagi kaise bardasht kar paounga tumhe (Zoya's mouth forms a O and she hits him on his chest. He laughs seeing her expression) mazak kar raha hoon (she smiles and he gently drops a kiss on her forehead before wrapping his arms around her to hug her tightly)

flashback ends

Maulana: kya apko Qubool Hai? (she discretly smiles)

Zoya: Qubool Hai...

Everyone gests happy and claps as the union of Asad Ahmad Khan and Zoya Farooqi was complete now. They started hugging each other. From under her red dupatta Zoya looks at Asad and winks at him. He smiles shaking his head.

The niqaah ceremony was over and slowly the guests started to leave one by one. Only Khan pariwaar was left now and specialy the youth who were busy with the newly married couple.

The girls were with Zoya in Asad's room waiting for her husband while Asad and Ayaan were heading toward the room. And Ayaan kept pulling his legs for fun. Asad opens the door and saw Zoya sitting in the center of the bed in her red joda, her dupatta covering her face. The girls smile seeing the groom. Ayaan did not let another second to get wasted and ordred to all to leave the room.

Asad closes the door and looks at Zoya who was quietly waiting. He slowly walks towards her and sits on the bed near her. He smiles seeing her so calm and so quite actually, he wasn't use to it..slowly he takes off the dupatta to admire her beauty. Her face was glowing, she was world's most beautiful bride he thought. She slowly looks up at him and his heart skipped a beat watching her big brown eyes highlighted with the kajal..as she was smiling her dimple has appeared and Asad gently carresed it with his finger.

Asad: dimple pad gaaya hai (he whispers. Zoya smiles)

Zoya: issi baat pe naa ek sher harz hai! (he knew she won't be able to stay quite for long)

Miss Farooqi se baan gaayi Mrs Zoya Ahmad Khan,

Miss Farooqi se baan gaayi Mrs Zoya Ahmad Khan,

Yeh Asad bhi kya chiz hai..finally uspe bhi meri dimple vaali smile ne

Kar diya apna kam!

Shukriya, shukriya, shuk..(Asad grabs her hand and puts his finger on her lips)

Asad: aap aaj ke din toda chup reh sakti hai please? (she removes his finger)

Zoya: kyun? Niqaah ke din ladkiyon ko baat nahin karni chahiye?..ya phir aaj ke din bhi koi old type wala idea..(before she could say more Asad bends and kisses her cheek. She looks at him shocked)

Asad: kuch keh rahi thi? (she was trying to speak but was too shocked)

Zoya: nahin..main tho...(he kisses her forehead)

Asad: tum kya? (he whispers)

Zoya: kuch...(he reaches the other cheek and kisses it. Zoya closes her eyes in pleasure)

Asad: kuch…? (she wasn't able to utter another word)

Asad slightly smiles, he finally found a way to shut her mouth. He moves her hair backward and bends a lil to kiss her neck. Zoya hesitantly rests her hands on his chest feeling breathless and loosing her balance. Asad slowly faces her and gently rubs his nose against hers..she opens her eyes and smiles. His gaze moves slowly toward her lips..the next moment he pressed them against hers and soon the soft kiss turns into a wild and passionate one. Zoya's hands move from his chest to his hair and she was pulling his closer. Without breaking the kiss Asad helps her lay and he lies on top of her…

They spend the rest of the night expressing their unconditional love for each other and became one in every ways possible…

END

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Entry No #33
-Loving You, Always-

oOo

Everything just had to be perfect today. First wedding anniversaries were like one of the most important celebrations for a woman after her marriage. And for men? No one ever thought about it. I mean, why would guys like wedding anniversaries? Spending money unnecessarily on their wives! But for me, money doesn't matter. It never did. Actually, it did when I was striving to provide for my mother and baby sister after my father abandoned us. But after I met her, money was the last thing I had in mind. First thing being sex. Nah, just kidding! First thing being love. Love. Sounds so pure and so beautiful. Just like how she was. An epitome of beauty with the right amount of smart and sassy. Yep, that's my wife. Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan.

Tonight I was going to do it right. Right from the dinner, to the dancing, to the seduction, to the foreplay and until the sex. Oops! I meant making love, she preferred it that way. She said it didn't sound cheap. Probably. So I'm gonna be smooth tonight. I'm gonna let her see a different man today. Not a man who only works, eats and sleeps. It's time she deserves better!

I saw my wife enter the living room of our apartment with a few bags in her hand. She kept them down on the floor and looked up. The sight leaving her surprised. The whole room was beautifully lit up with dimmed lights and white curtains. An essence of freshly plucked strawberries and chocolate syrup filling up the atmosphere. That's it. Nothing too exotic or appealing. Her jaw was hanging mid air and she was staring at me stunned.

I walked up to her and went down on one knee in front of her. Her lips finally curved in to the world's most beautiful smile I had ever seen. Her eyes twinkled like the holy stars and she gladly placed her hand in mine. I didn't say a word and just kissed her hand softly, just above the wedding solitaire adorning her finger. She grinned and watched me as I got back on my feet. I offered her my arm and she accepted it with ecstasy. I walked her to the dinner table and made her sit down.

We shared a silent dinner amidst giving each other eager looks. The atmosphere and the aroma was one strong aphrodisiac, messing with our heads and bodies. As I gulped down the last of my champagne and saw her finish hers, I walked up to her and pulled her closer. I put on her favorite music and we danced like never before.

I brought her closer to my body if that was even possible. Our foreheads collided softly and our noses brushed. She linked her arms around my neck and I squeezed her waist, almost telling her how much I wanted her in that one moment. She pressed her weight on me giving me the required reaction and I pulled her up in to my arms. She was as light as a feather, beautiful inside out. I took her out to the Patio of our house and put her down on the white mattress which was laid out for us. I walked away for a second and bought a big bowl of strawberries and chocolate syrup. Her eyes turned dark with desire but the desire in her eyes was nowhere close to the desire in my eyes. I sat down next to her and peeled off her over coat and my shirt. She closed her eyes as I picked up a strawberry and trailed it down her neck. I replaced the fruit with my lips and kissed her long slender neck. She whimpered in pleasure and turned around to kiss me. But I didn't let her, not yet.

I picked up another strawberry and dipped in a bowl of chocolate syrup. I placed one end of it in my mouth and beckoned her with my eyes to gobble the other end up. She sighed and moved ahead, placing her lips on the strawberry. I groaned as I felt her lips so close to mine and hurriedly placed my lips on hers. The rest was magical. The chocolate and the strawberry created a beautiful rhythm in my passion and we spent the rest of the night loving each other.

Just when she was on the precipice of releasing herself I looked at her in the eye. She was impatient but cooperated.

"Happy Anniversary sweetheart, I love you." I whispered over her lips and kissed her again.

oOo

Edited by .Rinnie. - 12 years ago
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#35
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We thank all the forum members enthusiasm for this contest and all the writers for wonderful response and all their hard work in giving us so many good entries! 😃
So voters please do read all the entries before placing your vote, I know there are many but all of them are outcome of the writer's hard work 😊



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Edited by .Rinnie. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Reserved :D
OMG ! So many! :P

P.S. I think you missed entry No. 33.
Edited by supriya.ipkknd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
res

ive just read 10 for now n im tired! all of u guys have put in so much effort😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
RES
Wow u guys updated finally..I used to chk every day!!! Finally..I'm into hibernation mode and will read every OS!!

unres

I think I'll go with entries #21 AND #22 both were very different in their concept and ideas.
( a piece of advice to the writer of #22... if you are reading this - It's not Ummi..it's Ammi.)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg so many :D I'll res it for now.
They all were very well written👏 its so not fair to only pick two.
For me entry 1 and entry 20 were the best
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Finally ...I ll read all tonight 😆

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