FF - Aashiqui - Pa3/Pg11 - 05/24/13 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
This is so good.. Najma I love this najma...

Continue soon and pm me ...

Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: angelgirl_a

Thank God that somebody put some sense in Asad in your story!!! Go najma


Yup, in my story Najma drilled some sense into her brother.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: malini1996

wow i totally loved

and u wrote the emotions sooo beautifully

do continue soon

and do pm me


Was it enough? I mean the emotions displayed, I try to make it perfect.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Enchantress

This is so good.. Najma I love this najma...


Continue soon and pm me ...

Dee


Me too. I love this Najma and her boldness. I feel that is missing in Najma truly in the show.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65


Part Three

Song: Tadap Tadap Ke
From: Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam

"Bejaan Dil Ko
Bejaan Dil Ko
Bejaan Dil Ko Tere Ishq Ne Zinda Kiya"

Asad reach the airport. He search madly for Zoya, but he doesn't find her. He learn the flight took off. His thoughts of loosing Zoya came true. He also double check if Zoya board the flight and it shows Zoya checked in with Zeenat, but his mind kept on thinking about Tanveer and her deeds of harming Zoya. His faith destroyed him completely. He was highly wrong doubting that someone wanted to kill Tanveer not Zoya. It was Zoya from the beginning. He feels disgust trusting Tanveer and today destiny gave him huge punishment. He deserve every bit of tadap. Slightly his heart told him Zoya can't leave him, but his mind for once wants Zoya to be on the flight. Her safety means thousand death he's feeling at the moment.

Asad leave from the airport. On the way, he got call from nearest hospital. His heart thump loudly "Phir Tere Ishq Ne Hi Is Dil Ko Tabah Kiya" he reaches quickly to hospital recalling his every moments with Zoya. His fear clench onto him tightly. He broke every traffic single just to reach hospital.

"Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya"

Asad rush inside the hospital madly. Everyone stare at Asad, but his eyes searching for his beat. He reaches the room nurse guide him, but once he saw the reflection his eyes turn red in anger. He shouts "tum" he heard "Jammy" he gave heck about her and turn to leave when doctor shouts in anger "how can you leave your wife when she just gone through huge miscarriage" Asad for sec he melts (thinking about child, but suddenly he got confuse why Tanu state about miscarriage when she isn't pregnant or was she), but remembering Tanveer's deeds got him more angry and withdraw Doctor's hand from his shoulder "if you want to live than move out of my way. She ain't my wife. My wife is and only Zoya Farooqui. Understood!"

Tanveer: How can you say that, Jammy?

Her tears effect everyone in the hospital narrating her story to entire staff before Asad's arrival. Plus the female doctor attending her pregnancy supporting Tanveer fully cause of black cash.

Hospital Staff: What type of guy is he? His wife just confess her big lost and he's declining her as his wife.

Asad just ignore them and turn to leave when Feroz stop him. His smirk indicate his victory he's dying to get. Asad gave him his famous glare and turn to leave when Feroz "Asad Ahmed Khan, you have always lecture me regrading law and today you are going against law. She complains that you have been ill treating her and cause her misfortune of loosing the baby. Your child" Asad got extremely anger regarding every moments he trusted Tanveer over Zoya and now she betray his friendship.

He roar: What proof does she have indicating I am her husband because I have every (looking deeply in Feroz eyes) every proof against Ms. Tanveer that she isn't my wife" before Feroz can demand anything Mr. Dhurandhar Bhatawdekar surprise to see Asad.

He greets Asad "how are you doing my boy and how is your wife Ms. Farooqui?" Asad gave his cute dimple wala smile to Mr. Dhurandhar Bhatawdekar and glare at Feroz "didn't you hear what Mr. Dhurandhar Bhatawdekar said my wife's name Ms. Farooqui and he know that person over there isn't my wife. Right Mr. Dhurandhar Bhatawdekar"

Mr. Dhurandhar Bhatawdekar: Officer you have mistaken, Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan isn't married to his childhood friend Tanveer, but Ms. Zoya Farooqui and the marriage itself took place with my approval.

Feroz and the hospital staff lower their head. Tanveer frown turn into shock "when did Jammy got married to Zoya? Where was I?" she asked herself in her mind.

Asad: Mr. Dhurandhar Bhatawdekar thank you for clearing out huge misunderstanding and thanks for revealing the truth. Some people are blind like me in trusting wrong person.

Mr. Dhurandhar Bhatawdekar: Its always good deed to reunite two lovers and Mr. Khan you may pick up your marriage certificate from my office.

Asad: Its my pleasure.

Mr. Dhurandhar Bhatawdekar left. Asad bark at the staff "now may I leave, but I promise to shut down this hospital. Its Asad Ahmed Khan's promise. One more thing, I don't know who was the father of her child cause she has bad reputation like her mother" storm out of the hospital recalling him and Zoya signing the marriage certificate under Mr. Dhurandhar Bhatawdekar pressure.


Inside the hospital...

Tanveer couldn't believe her ears. Jammy never brought up her mother's name and today he taunted her.

Hospital staff began insulting Tanveer. Tanveer growl and leave in angry. She wanted to settle scores with Zoya. She trying hard to book herself ticket to New York, but she couldn't without getting a visa.

Her every plans succeed for pass five days and now her plans are failing. To get Jammy, she even aborted her child only to get Jammy to feel guilty for her and accept her, but the opposite happen. She kept on walking down the streets shouting in the rain "Zoya, Zoya, Zoya... the name always irritated me and when she's gone yet Jammy can't forget her" The biggest shock she got is Jammy already married to that beep. She promise to kill Zoya with her own hands the day she meets her again... its a promise.


Asad bang his fist "how could I be stupid? I trust the wrong person. Why can't I never listen to Zoya for change, but my ego always boast up believing she's wrong cause she's opposite me" his anger on himself.

"To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein"


Najma and Dilshaad worried for Asad. Zoya had call them last time boarding the flight. Dilshaad got emotionally talking with her and promise her that nobody can take her place in their lives. Zoya also cried hanging up saying Ammi before disconnecting. Dilshaad hug Najma.

Najma looking upwards finding broken star so she can wish and get her wish granted.

Najma forcefully made Dilshaad have her food "please Ammi. If you won't eat than Zoya will feel bad, but Ammi I feel now everything going to be fine. I've trashed Tanveer's belonging in the dustbin. I don't want her things in our home"

Asad came home without meeting his sister or mother's eyes.

Dilshaad: Asad!

Najma: Bhaijaan

He just ignore them and lock himself inside his room. Najma about to go behind him when Dilshaad shook her head against the idea "beta, let him be alone. He just got through many betrayals in his life from destiny and his only friend he trusted" Najma agreed with her mother.

Najma mutely question her mother and Dilshaad answered her question with smile.


Five days later...

Zeenat saw Zoya sitting day and night in her room. Hardly eating anything. Just looking lost in her own thoughts.

Zeenat share her worries with Anwar.

Anwar: Don't worry, Zeenat everything is going to be fine.

Zeenat: How can things be fine? Zoya, truly loves Asad and without him look at her state. She hardly eats, say her meaningless poetesses or either meeting her friends.

Anwar: Zeenat soon our Zoya would be normal and forgot Asad like a bad dream.

Zeenat: Hope! You are right, Anwar. Cause I doubt Zoya going to forget Asad. She'll never forget him.

Next day, Anwar passing by Zoya's room. He saw her condition worst. She kept on crying and looking at Asad's picture. Anwar change his mind and decide to spend quality time with his Zoya.

He enter Zoya's room.

He sat beside her and touch her shoulder.

Zoya stare at him for sec than turn back starring at Asad's picture.

Anwar: Zoya

Zoya just listen to him.

Anwar: Zoya, I know you are upset lekin life doesn't stop after incident and it keep on moving. Forget Asad like bad dreams and start your life freshly.

Zoya burst out crying "I can't forget him" Anwar cup Zoya's face "Why can't you forget him?" Zoya recalling her every moments with Asad "ts hard Juju! I tried to forget him, but I can't. He's everywhere in my dreams, my soul and my heart. It beats for him. I never understood my feelings for him, but now when I am far away from him I can't forget him. I can't forget my own husband. I can't Juju" her Juju shock hearing husband and Zoya kept on repeating herself until darkness surrounding her eyes. She slowly close them repeating Asad's name.


"Zoya" Dilshaad and Najma heard Asad's scream. They got worried for him.
Edited by MistiofMistz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
will Asad defeat Zoya's death? I hope soo!

YAYYY! Love the strong character of Najma. Atleast she is speaking in the ff, we barely get to see her speak these days
Please do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
oh my... It ws so good...so touchng... Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Omg! Truly unbelievable. I m so astonished that asad and zoya got married.

However the pain is unbearable. Hope they reunite again.

Post soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
OMG!!!!! Cliffhanger?!? :O :P Loveeed it!!! Amazing chapter! At least Zoya left even if for a lil while ...Asad deserved it! But I want her to come back or no better yet! Asad should go to New York! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
oh god...tanveer aborted the child just to get what she wants😲 is she even human..she is disgusting😡
poor asya both are suffering...😭

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