A HOLLER UNTO 4L!***

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am not just irritated with Tannu, but the entire last sequence.😡 (I have loads of patience for Tannu, BTW.😉)
What was the hurry?😡

HERE IS MY 8 Point Plan that could have made the epi better.

1.Zoya's twirl should have zoomed in on her expressions.

2. Asad should have been shown to be in a trance, watching her.

3. There should have been a 'ZOYAAAH' howl from Asad-* most impt*

4. A kiss on the forehead was mandatory.

5. Dilshad and the rest should have been shown to rush in randomly and not in a preplanned way.

6. Asad should not have said,"I don't know how to thank you"- He should simply have been speechless and given a nod of gratitude.

7. He should not have walked up to Tannu. He should simply have stayed with Zoya and said the very same dialogue*s. It would not have killed the romance of the entire epi. It is important to NOT LEAVE YOUR VIEWER with a bad taste in the mouth, as you are wrapping up the epi.The very same anti- climax could have been obtained , making the hero less of an idiot.

8. Asad should have been the first one to notice the burnt rope.
Why is it that only the women have brains? 😲 What makes Gul such a man hater?😆

C'mon, guys, Pull up your socks!

I agree that the MS required a Herculean effort, but you can't falter towards the end of the show. The last impression is the lasting impression,- don't mess it up.

It really looked like you were in a hurry to wrap it up and call it a day, and you ended up making the viewers feel your weariness.

Feel free to add on...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I totally agree with you.
1. A man in love should look more in awe with his bride, not only whe his mum is watching.
2. He definitely should have been the pne to save her.
3. He should have held Zoe's hand through entire tanveer fiasco.
4. Zoya should have been given better clothes. The dupatta and the sharara had no connection
5. Considering that it was QH mahasangam, there should have been a longer dance for Asya, we wanted to see them sizzle, not Arjuna or Ayaan
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello! Good to see you back 😃

Great post. Agree with the pointers. Love especially the 3rd and 7th point. ZOYA dahad should have been there. And to add to your list, we could have had a scene between Nikhat and Asad. She was just ignored. We could have had some family interactions rather than Billi dominating most of the Mahasangam.

And I can't tell you I am at the fag end of my patience with Billi. The new SBB spoiler wants me to scream out in frustration. 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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totally agree...especially the 7 th point...
if he would have said the same thing standing by Zoya...I dont think the fans would have been so disgusted...and the effect also got.
same with the twirl...it didnt look as part of the dance...it's as though she is waiting for the chandelier🥱
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaktipreeth

I totally agree with you.

1. A man in love should look more in awe with his bride, not only whe his mum is watching.
2. He definitely should have been the pne to save her.
3. He should have held Zoe's hand through entire tanveer fiasco.
4. Zoya should have been given better clothes. The dupatta and the sharara had no connection
5. Considering that it was QH mahasangam, there should have been a longer dance for Asya, we wanted to see them sizzle, not Arjuna or Ayaan


Thanks, shakti.

I agree so much with you.

Arjun: I guess if you are not used to the show, it makes no sense. I have some idea about the show, so it was not that bad. He is a fantastic dancer too.😊

Ayan: Again, this is the first time I saw the new Ayan, since i have been away- I welcomed him from the bottom of my heart.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup

I am not just irritated with Tannu, but the entire last sequence.😡 (I have loads of patience for Tannu, BTW.😉)
What was the hurry?😡

HERE IS MY 8 Point Plan that could have made the epi better.

1.Zoya's twirl should have zoomed in on her expressions. Yep..would have made it a lot more nicer

2. Asad should have been shown to be in a trance, watching her. True! Poori romance ki Editors and CVs ne band bajaadi!!

3. There should have been a 'ZOYAAAH' howl from Asad-* most impt* Again..same as above!

4. A kiss on the forehead was mandatory. I WAS EXPECTING IT! SO imagine my disappointment when he suddenly leaves and goes towards Tannu and holds her hand infront of everyone..!! YUCK

5. Dilshad and the rest should have been shown to rush in randomly and not in a preplanned way. LOL..can't say much about that..

6. Asad should not have said,"I don't know how to thank you"- He should simply have been speechless and given a nod of gratitude. This sounds loadz better

7. He should not have walked up to Tannu. He should simply have stayed with Zoya and said the very same dialogue*s. Atleast THAT!! He would have looked less of a nutcase when saying this chandelier was supposed to fall on Tanveer! Dr Neil and Arjun were probably thinking 'Tanveer was no where near the chandelier..are you out of your mind?' and Purvi and Nandini would be wondering 'So did we just save the wrong woman? Damn it.. Super hero powers wasted!' It would not have killed the romance of the entire epi. They killed even the little bit of romance that was present!!! Honestly.. It is important to NOT LEAVE YOUR VIEWER with a bad taste in the mouth, as you are wrapping up the epi.The very same anti- climax could have been obtained , making the hero less of an idiot. Couldn't have put it better myself. Hero makes himself look like such an idiot.. people then wonder we always only blame him..

8. Asad should have been the first one to notice the burnt rope. That guy was busy looking at Zoya. But as Rithvik rightly said in an offscreen segment.. 'Hero ka kaam kya hota hai yahaan pe?' I mean.. The women saved Zoya.. Nandani noticed the rope.. Purvi talked about the eye. What on earth were the guys doing then?
Why is it that only the women have brains? 😲 What makes Gul such a man hater?😆

C'mon, guys, Pull up your socks!

I agree that the MS required a Herculean effort, but you can't falter towards the end of the show. The last impression is the lasting impression,- don't mess it up.

It really looked like you were in a hurry to wrap it up and call it a day, and you ended up making the viewers feel your weariness.

Feel free to add on...😃



Plus.. I think they should have shown a purpose for Nikhat. I mean, her coming..and not even dancing was absolutely POINTLESS! Poor Archana Taide was probably wondering 'this is such a waste of time for me.'

Oh.. I also have a question. When Razia insulted Tanveer in front of so many people, Was Nikhat around? If so, shouldn't she have recognized Tanveer and told everyone she has a bad eye?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: s120

Hello! Good to see you back 😃


Great post. Agree with the pointers. Love especially the 3rd and 7th point. ZOYA dahad should have been there. And to add to your list, we could have had a scene between Nikhat and Asad. She was just ignored. We could have had some family interactions rather than Billi dominating most of the Mahasangam.

And I can't tell you I am at the fag end of my patience with Billi. The new SBB spoiler wants me to scream out in frustration. 😡


Ah,Shreya!

Was wondering whether to Pm you, but I really feel bad writing this up. Sit down to watch something with a lot of expectations, and they really let you down at the end...I was really bugged.

Billi- I guess I have experience with past 4L shows, I have not many expectations there, not yet.🥱

FAMILY INTERACTIONS: You are bang on! They wasted Nikhat. There was no need to waste all that screen time on Tanveer planning and that Daastan lady helping her out. What rubbish!😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: neenabinu

totally agree...especially the 7 th point...

if he would have said the same thing standing by Zoya...I dont think the fans would have been so disgusted...and the effect also got.
same with the twirl...it didnt look as part of the dance...it's as though she is waiting for the chandelier🥱


Thanks, Neena.

PRECISELY! It looked like she was waiting for the chandlier. She should have been shown to be lost!
Does it require that much of brains to show something so simple?😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup


Ah,Shreya!

Was wondering whether to Pm you, but I really feel bad writing this up. Sit down to watch something with a lot of expectations, and they really let you down at the end...I was really bugged.

Billi- I guess I have experience with past 4L shows, I have not many expectations there, not yet.🥱

FAMILY INTERACTIONS: You are bang on! They wasted Nikhat. There was no need to waste all that screen time on Tanveer planning and that Daastan lady helping her out. What rubbish!😆



I know. I have never been so disappointed with any epi as I had been yesterday. The only positive outcome I felt was that Ayaan witnessed the equation between Asad and Zoya but who knows maybe he has partial amnesia and later conveniently forgets about what he saw and falls for Zoya 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanaa629



Plus.. I think they should have shown a purpose for Nikhat. I mean, her coming..and not even dancing was absolutely POINTLESS! Poor Archana Taide was probably wondering 'this is such a waste of time for me.'

Oh.. I also have a question. When Razia insulted Tanveer in front of so many people, Was Nikhat around? If so, shouldn't she have recognized Tanveer and told everyone she has a bad eye?


Sanaa,

THEY WASTE THEIR ACTORS! SUCH IDIOTS, I TELL YOU!

Like you said, what is the point n Nikhat being there, other than a few steps with Ayan?


To answer your Q, Nikhat was not there when Raziya insulted Tanveer. Only Raziya had attended that function from their side. It was like a party or something and not a wedding function.

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