AsYa ff: Moments in Time: Last Chapter Pg 55 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh so Tanveer was in this as Asad's first wife? Interesting...i am really getting intrigued by this FF, please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wOw AAK a playboy 😳 and He is the biggest star of the hindi film industry!

What a twist that was 👍🏼 I loved the start...Gosh I can't predict anything. This is making me mad...please tell me how they fall in love...plzzz

I wanna know 😃 You'll update soon na ? 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note: For those who i send Pm: I am really sorry for sending you the wrong link. it was my mistake😭
Chapter 2

"Ayaan' Where are we going? It been half an hour you are driving. Atleast tell me what is going on"

Ayaan couldn't help but to smile at an impatient Humeira while she pouted like a child.

"Chill yaar. We have already reached the place"

Humeira looked at the direction he was pointing and saw a small but beautiful home there. Like a lost puppy she followed Ayaan. They reached the door and knocked awaiting some response from inside. After about two minutes or so an old man came and opened the door.

Ayaan: "Hi Uncle. I am Ayaan and this is Humeira. We are journalists. And we are writing an article about Asad Ahmed Khan. Since you were very close to him, can you help us?"

That old man looked at them, surprise clearly written in his face. He beckoned them to come inside.

Old man: "Well' What you want to know about him? He is like my own son. Infact he and my son were really close friends. He used to come here every weekend'"

Humeira: "Uncle, where is your son now? Can we meet him?"

That old man's face fall hearing that. Humeira looked at Ayaan with confusion.

Old man: "I am sorry Beta. He died last month in an accident'"

A lump formed in Humeira's throught as she realized that she had bring up a sad topic.

"I am really sorry uncle' I didn't mean to'"

"It's ok Beta'. Let's come to the point. What you want to know about Asad?"

Humeira: "Uncle, we are working on an article about love. We would like to know about his love story if he has any'"

Ayaan: "Ofcourse we know he has many'"

Humeira glared at Ayaan while the old man looked at them amused.

Humeira: "I am sorry uncle. Please don't feel bad about what Ayaan said. He is a little apprehensive about the term 'love'."

Old man: "Its ok Beta' it happens' and by the way Asad's image infront of the public is also like that'but I will tell you who Asad really is' he is not that what you see. You can't judge a book by its cover right? The same way you can't judge a person by what you see. We often tend to see and perceive things which we want to. But it doesn't mean that we are always right."

Ayaan: "So uncle, do you mean that Asad is not bad that afterall?"

The old man chuckled at his question. With a slight glint in his eyes he told,

"I will let you know who the real Asad is'Before that let me tell you a story' a story which is filled suspense, thriller, romance and heartbreak' a sweet love story which will touch your heart' but let me warn you, if you are an emotional person keep your handkerchief ready' because you will never know, you may fall in love with the characters of the story like many of us did'"

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A beautiful girl clad in jeans and top stood in the open terrace of the shopping mall, her arms wide open as if she is embracing the fresh air. A cool wind whizzed past her making her hair dance in an unknown rhythm.

"Zoya'"

The sudden voice broke her trance as she opened her big doe eyes. With annoyance clearly written over her face, she turned towards the source of that voice.

Zoya: "Kya hai Njama? Won't you let me feel the fresh air also?"

Najma: "You are enjoying this 'fresh air' for the past 20 minutes. We are waiting for you to come. Our shopping is over."

Zoya: "Oh nahi' Do we have to go this fast? Can't we stay here some more time please?"

Najma chuckled at Zoya's puppy dog face expression.

Najma: "Zoya ji' if we leave you here like this, you will never come. So let's go' everyone is waiting for you. Chal chal'"

She started dragging a frustrated Zoya while Zoya whined like a child.

Soon the duo joined their friendship gang who was waiting for them infront of an ice cream shop with Zoya's favorite chocolate ice cream. Her anger melted away as her eyes fell on the ice-cream. Quickly snatching away the ice cream she started eating it. Her friends couldn't help but to chuckle at her childish antics.

Everybody's attention soon turned to an announcement going on in the mall. It was regarding an opening of some new restaurant. The announcer was announcing regarding some games and the winner of the game will get a chance to meet a special surprise. A curious Zoya decided to participate in that game with the encouragement form her friend. Needless to say, she emerged as the winner. Now it was time for her special surprise. The organizers told her to follow their lead. An apprehensive Zoya looked back at her friends who were standing in the crowd. They nodded their head in assurance. Feeling relieved, Zoya followed the organizers' lead. As she entered the restaurant, her eyes sparkled seeing the decorations over there. There were flowers and balloons everywhere. The deserted tables indicated that the surprise was indeed special. They lead her to a round table with two chairs facing opposite to each other. There was one person sitting opposite to her. At first she couldn't make out who it was as the light was too dim. Soon the light changed to bright. Her breath got stuck seeing the person infront of her. she couldn't believe her eyes. She pinched her hand inorder to assure that she was not dreaming. She could see him chuckle seeing her reactions.

"Asad Ahmed Khan? Is that' is that really you? Or am I dreaming?"

He was amused by the girl infront of him. When the restaurant owner approached him for promoting his new restaurant in Hyderabad he couldn't say no to him as he was his friend. Even though he hated the idea of meeting a random girl, he had decided to do that for his friend's sake. And as he sat there waiting for that lucky winner to come all he could see was a girl clad in jeans and top following his friend nervously. She sat in front of him mumbling a small thanks to his friend nervously waiting for the surprise. As the bright light fall upon him reveal9ng his face, he could see the girl's face wide in shock. He smirked knowing the effect he had in girls. After all he was the superstar. Every girl go crazy over him. This girl was no different. But least he know that he was utterly wrong.

Zoya saw the amused look in his face and understood that she got carried over by the excitement. How could she not be excited, Asad was her favorite hero. It's not that she admire him for his looks, it's just that she admire him for his acting skills. He was a born actor. That's all mattered to her.

Zoya (nervously): "Hi' I am Zoya... sorry for behaving that way' you see' I am surprised'"

Asad (Smirking): "It's ok' I can understand'"

Zoya: "Well' I never thought that I will be able to meet you' this was really the biggest surprise I have ever got'"

Asad: "I know. I can guess that'"

Zoya: "You know, you are an amazing actor' I love your work' the way you portray your emotions is beautiful' I won't tell you are the best actor I have ever seen' if I say so, that will be wrong. I have seen many actors who are far far better than you in many other film industries. But I can see the potential in you' you can do better' I hope your acting along with wise selection of scripts will help you surpass all the expectations'"

It was Asad's time to be left shocked. She was not what he thought her to be. He thought that she will tell how much she loves him, how much crazy she is over him etc. etc. and here this girl is giving him her honest opinion in the process hurting his ego. For the first time in life, he didn't felt bad. Instead he thanked her for the honest criticism.

By the time waiters arrived with the food. She looked at Asad confused and tehn at the owner.

Owner: "Mam. You are the first customer. Please do the honor of having the dinner with our superstar Asad Ahmed Khan"

Zoya's eyes grew wide in this remark. She was least expecting this. She got up from her chair startling Asad and owner. She fumbled with her words.

Zoya: "I' I am really sorry' It was soo sweet of you to give me this opportunity' but I am sorry' I can't' well' it's my friend's birthday today and I am gonna have dinner with her'"

This was the second time Asad was amused with this girl' she turned down an offer which any other girl would die for. Similar expressions were adored in the owner's face.

Owner: "mam' are you really sure? I mean' I am talking about a dinner with The AAK"

He emphasized his each word hoping that this girl will realize what a blunder she is about to make. This didn't go unnoticed by Zoya. Controlling the sudden anger surging through her she denied the offer again politely. Murmuring a soft 'thank you' and 'sorry' to Asad she walked towards the exit to join her friends who were waiting for them eagerly. Asad looked at her retrieving figure. Never in his life he got a huge blow on his ego like that' but still he was smilng'

Edited by rosamale - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Ok i was actually NO LIE I was actually checkin to see if u updated before i got ur pm
And haha Asad got turned down lol aaw
Sounds interesting more and more i read
Keep up updating day by day LOL
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: HallyH

Ok i was actually NO LIE I was actually checkin to see if u updated before i got ur pm
And haha Asad got turned down lol aaw
Sounds interesting more and more i read
Keep up updating day by day LOL

thats soo sweet of you😃 and sorry for the wrong link😭 i was reading your post before updating the ff. and guess what, i had send the link to your post to everyone instead of sending mine😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosamale


thats soo sweet of you😃and sorry for the wrong link😭i was reading your post before updating the ff. and guess what, i had send the link to your post to everyone instead of sending mine😆



lol I didnt get that link
But i got this oh well it doesnt matter
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Awesome first meeting, I must say you are an amazing writer dear. Loved the update. And Thanks for the pm too. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
That was really good!!!! Pls continue and pm and buddy me pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like it , nice concept please pm me when you continue

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