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pslove

@pslove

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Its really nice...

update soon...

👏

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Omg i loved this part!!!!

Althought u didnt update that soon but the wait was worthit!!

Cant wait for the next part..

Loved the way asad always being there for her when kavin kamina is doing such low acts!!!

Jladi update karna!!

Loved it very much

And ya thx for the pm

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

A wonderful story...
I am catching up with it...
Please pm me next time...

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Hey, I just loved this update.. Just fabulous.. You know this song from teri meri love story is one of my favorite and also the story of raghu and simaran aka KSG and anita was my favorite. I just loved their short and sweet love story and this song just added more sweetness to it.. The same it did here.. I could imagine asya under the rain and this song being played.Perfect... Loved it.. 😳

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teddy25

@teddy25

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

This was such an awesome part 😳 I love Asad in your story..he is such a sweetheart, compared to the angst filled Asad we are getting in the show..

I hate Kavin but his presence is acting like a catalyst in your story. 😆 so I can bear him for a few more parts...but if he again try to pull some cheap tricks again, I will be happy to watch Asad breaking his nose...

Next part plz😃

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Awesome part.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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Parneet

@ParneetS

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Awww loved the part.. I hope they realize their feelings soon :)

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Omg tis is just awesome...so beautifull...totally luv it...
U describe the full scene beautifully...brilliant writting...
Luv the way asad stood by zoya all the way n she feeling comfortable wit him...luv the way the planback fire back to kevin...
Thx fr the pm n please pm me for the next part...
Please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

I simply loved the update! This is one of the only ffs I've read which is so contrast the actual story yet the most steady and serene. Ur usage of words is so good! I have no words for ur update. Ur simply awesome !😃