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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Reserved. Will get back once I finish reading the entire thing. :D

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Faiza,

Just read the whole thing, in one shot! LOVE IT!

Amazing! You described the emotions really well; especially when Asad was having flashbacks when he was visiting his mom's grave. Update Soon!

~Sophie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Hey!

I read the whole thing in one go and i really love it...

Update Soon and plz pm :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Update update update update update update update update 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa
res!!!
hey dea!!

actlly d cmmnt iv posted ws 4 d last part n il b back sooon aftr I gv a reading to d recent updt!

im back!!😃

wt an awwwsm updt !!!!!👏

ayaan zoya scene ws cute!!!😳

aaahaan our strong zoya is back!! wt a spirit man?!! returned d card? I mean seriously ?!! amaaznnn!!!👏

aawww hes thnkng bout her again n again!!!

man im loving ur storrryyy more n moooreee!!!

WT D?? u stopped it here????? nooo!!!!

I don like cliff hangers!! 😭

u caaant do ths to me!!!

if im nt rong thn zoya's life in danger n AAK to d rescue!!! aaahhh I jst love these kind of scenes!!!

pleeeach updt it na pleeeach!!

btw tnkooo 4 d PM!!

LOVE U 4 RITNG THS HELL INTRSTNG STORY!! CMMON GIMME A TIGHT HUG!!

Awww im so glad you're liking the story dear!!! Really encouraging comment! *big hug*!

😃

I hope you like further chapters too😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: awesome
awesome part
loved it

Thank you so much. 😳

Originally posted by: princeegoyal
superb as always...love it yr...
pls update soon...ur story smthing i m stick too...love it
pari

Thank you im glad you're liking it! Thanks a bunch, Pari 😃

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
wow it totally awesome...just luv it...
oh no a cliff hanger wonder wat will asad do nw n hw will he protect zoya...
please continue soon n please pm me fr the next update...
eagerly waiting fr the next part waiting to see hw asad will react n wat will zoya do...

Yes cliff hangers do come along the package of such FF's sadly. 😆

I will defo pm you, dear. 😃

Originally posted by: Cindrella3
You are just amazing Fuj.🤗 This oe is so intense and I'm waiting for Each chapter impatiently. Please continue soon.😊

Call me Faiza 😳 thankyou sooo very much, im glad you like it! 😃

Originally posted by: janestone6
Why why why did you stop there?
This was a super duper update :). 🤗

Thankyou sooo much. 🤗

Guess i just was in a mood to you know make people curious. 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: ABBY92
I'm glad Zoya had decided to start afresh and I looking forward to seeing how Asad is going to deal with the way Zoya affects him. But first, I can't wait to see how Asad makes sure that Zoya doesn't go back to that God forsaken place !!

Life goes on like they say. Lets see if it does for Zoe or life got other plans. I myself hope Asad saves her. Lets seee. 😳

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
That was brilliant !!!

I'm so glad that Ayan and Zoe are now comfortable with each other :)
Aha !!! Asad's mind is just preoccupied with Zoe !!! ;)

Now I'm so lookin' forward to read Asad's reaction when she'll demand Zoe back !!!

Living under the same roof, they kind of had to. Plus look out for Ayaan, he's an important character in my story.

Haha yes. Poor him. Hope you like the next update. :D thankyou for the lovely comment.

Originally posted by: ...OohLaLa...
Finally Zoya is happy..just what i wanted to see.I love how Zoya and Ayaan are bonding.Looks like its going to take time for Zoya to be comfy with Asad.Update the next part soon.

Well after what happened that night, it kinda had to be that way. 😔

But then again, can the ones destined to be together stay away for long? ;)

Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-
lovely update Faiza...

Thankyouu, Yaari! 🤗

Originally posted by: Enchantress
I was stalking.. Ahh.. I love this story.. Really.. Its as if I come here every now and then to see if it is updated.. Loved the chapter.. Its full of mystery.. I love it...

Please continue asap , can't wait.

Dee

Awww. Im glad you like it that much, Dee. Im really glad you enjoying it! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
Wow

Awesome update

I am sure Asad would put up a fight against that lady

Plzzz update soon

P.s. do pm me when you update plzzz... Didn't get one this time

Will definitely pm you. Yes sorry i pm-ed everyone a day later, lazy me! :/

Thankyou so much for liking it 😃

Originally posted by: laizu
When I read your this story, then I have no words to praise except this

Oh My, that means alot to me. Thankyou so much! 😳

Originally posted by: sweetone
i am so in love with this story even though this is my first time of commenting. you're really doing a great job. more ink to your pen and a very big thumbs up. and please, i have one humble request, please can you update everyday. please, please and please.

Everyday gets a little difficult with my swimming and piano classes and then the internship. 😔

But i update evey alternative day. 😃 im glad you're liking it dear 😳

Originally posted by: Jassieg
Wow..I m loving it..though I fear for zoya..I know that asad will save her but still the drama that will take place...is just not going well with me...if u know wat I mean...

Loved the discussion of young asad to his mother about naming the baby Zoya.

Now he has another girl named zoya in his life..I hope asad and zoya meet without zoya having fear in her.

Hope you post the next chapter soon.

Zoya is indeed a blessed name in his life. Is the person blessed too? Thats the story. ;) im glad you like it! 😃

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
That was superb. Who is this 'sir'??? Hopefully we'll fine out soon. Noor and Najma convo was funny. I can totally imagine me and my bestie doing all that:P Noor is such a sweetheart still:D Zoya didn't accept the card? :( Asad the reason you can't stop thinking about her is cuz she's the one for you bigboy! Ayaan is so nice adn LOL! He's surprised at Asad's behavior. Just wait and watch what happens next Ayaan Miyan!;) OH MY GOD! That lady called told him she wants the girl back!:( NO! Im sure Asad won't let her go!

Thats the million dollar question. And i cant reveal it now can i? 😆

Im glad youre liking it, dear. Thankyou so much for the lovely comment 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: srilu_123
great one

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: youth_showsfan
hey sorry for late reply was busy
coming to all d updates
they were amazing
totally loved them
loving d way story is progressing
its becoming interesting day by day
noor was zoyas friend na? now she s najmas
friend oohh everyone seems to get connected
wrong move they r unleashing d lion n asad
by asking zoya back
update super soon
nd thnx for d pmz

Oh no worries at all. 😃

Im glad you're liking it. Btw i would like to point it out to you that the intro you read that day of the girl yearning for his brother, that was Najma and not Zoya. Hope that clears it😳

Originally posted by: hilly
LOVING the updates, dammit !
they're just out of the world, fantastic.

although.. this is a dark FF... it gets me all happy seeing that you've updated. seriously loving the turn that you've made .. a thoughtful, yet still depressed asad. i'm glad that he's not as vicious as he was in the beginning and his mind has sidetracked a bit .. to Zoe.
Awh @ the flashbacks :'( he's really tormented . Awh @ najma as well :( they're all tortured someway or the other.
oh man ... now 'they' want Zo back ?! she just got sparked with hope. I love how thankful she is .

can't wait for the next update ! you're rockingg this <33

Afterall, Asad too is a man though damaged. Thankyou so much for such encouraging comments. These are what literally make me go on, cuz i get so nervous when i update. LOL. 😆

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
awesme update!!!

Thank You! :D

Originally posted by: sowmy18
awesome update!and u hanged me on a cliff im telling u!😳
eagerly waiting for ur next update!😃
dontforget to pm me!😛

Mission accomplished! 😆 will defo pm. :D

Originally posted by: sasir
nice. continue soon. but its a cliffy now who is this mystery man. how can asad save zoya? plz update soon

The mystery man shall remain a mystery for now. 😆 i hope yre liking it. :D

Originally posted by: s120
Beautiful beautiful! 👏 Both the parts were fantastic. I absolutely love how this story is progressing. Love how you explain everything so brilliantly. All the characters are so well etched out. Its always a delight to read your stories. Looking forward to the next update 😃

Thank you so much. I love reading your comments. Infact i rather await your comments, really. Thank you! Im glad you're liking it 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: deedeez
This is just a fabulous story. The plot, characters, circumstances that they are thrown in.. just perfect..!. Very well done.. Every day i keep hoping for an update :)

Thank you! 😳 Aww im glad you like my story. 😳

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
have i commented? i dont know! 🤔 what a fool i am!

ur update was great as usual! ur story has many layers in it and i'm loving it! the drama, the angst, the hurt everything is described to perfection! the emotions i could feel it! and yikes that bitch (mind my language) wants Zoya back i'm sure Asad will let that happen over his dead body!

i really like this FF! one of favorite and well it might sound lame but i luurrrvvveee grumpy cat and whenever i like a story i give the writer a

GRUMPY CAT APPROVES!

here you go faiza! this FF is really U-H-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

~ Sadie!

Hahaha Sadie! 🤗 if grumpy cat approves, i bet its okay! 🤣 thankyou so much for such awesome comments darling! 🤗 yes she is a bit*ch aint she? :( thankyou sooo much! 😃

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond
amazing! looking forward for next part! im anxious to see what asad will do! update soon plz

Thank you. Will update soon. 😳

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy
Super-duper Brilliant! Just like always!!!
Now who on eaarth is this "SIR"?? I m hating him already!!! Kiski itni himmat jo Zoya ko wahan rakhe aur Asad se alag kare??!!
I loved this part!! How do you write so well yaar??!Please do continue soon!!!

Buahaha! Bring in the hate! 🤣 thank you so much. Wll do 😃

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