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sowmya18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

loved ti!

continue soon..!

can u send me a pm please??

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Tanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Ooh, the flashbacks are so intriguing and I love the progress of your story - it's very realistic 😊

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lDirectionerl

@lDirectionerl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Awesome!
You update finally! *dances with joy* 😆

That was one hell of a chapter! Awesome!
I have so many questions..Who is Zoya's brother? And why is he kept away from him? Dilshaad has another child na, where is he/she now? Where is Rashid? Goodness I'll stop now! 😛

Update soon!

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aashiqua

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

ur writng is awesm..i jst love it..u portray emotions nicely..

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Jinal3patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

ooh i love this one!

so so so intriguing! :D

u r a fantastic writer Faiza <3

oohh i think the girl in part 6 at the beginning was Najma...

so Asad thinks Rashid "raped" Dilshaad because she died 😔 while giving birth to Najma right? I think I am kinda getting the storyline bt i dnt knw :P

I can't figure out Zoya's past though...Asad and Zoya they are both so sad,they have both faced so much in life,if only they tried to get to know each other better! :)

Update soon and please pm me :D

can't wait to read ahead :D

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kiki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

wow ! loved it
i love this chapter👏 . it's awesome ! OMG! you are an amazing writer faiza
everything was portrayed so beautifully. i have so many questions right now
who's asad's sibling & where is she/he?who's zoya's brother & how did she end up in that cell?
hope to get all answer in the coming chapters
thanks for the pm & pls update the next part asap

kiki

Edited by waitingforyou - 12 years ago

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..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

wow fab update!! so whose sister was she in the first para??aayan's or asad's???

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penfriend28

@penfriend28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

read all the parts in one go...

excellent is the word to desribe how u potrayed their pain and emotions...

every character in ur story has depth ...

waiting for next update...

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-RohitMaxwell-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#349

amazing part Faiza... loved it..

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little.princess

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Posted: 12 years ago

#350

Nicely written chapter.. Kind of emotional.. U gave us a small sneak through of each character.. Firstly I thought that girl is Zoya and she's having a flashback.. Bt seems that's Asad's sister..

What has happened that he hates his father and make him stay away from his sister?? Too curious 2 know.. Hope to read the nxt part soon.. Keep up the gd work..