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Aparichit

@Phenyl

Sparkler

+ 15

Posted: 12 years ago

#311

Seriously Fuji how do u write so well..Ur stories make me feel as if im watching a movie infront of my eyes..update the next part soon

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#312

I love it.. It screams pain , hurt and misery... Do continue soon!!! I m hooked to this story.

Dee

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anushka

@anushka2112

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Speechless dear awsommmee piece of writing... so many emotions... flashback was heartwrenching...
Waiting for next part
pls continue soon...

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

really going well. i'm loving the way you're moving the story ahead, but wat happened to Dilshaad dat hurts Asad so much? plz cont soon no u didn't write bad at all. this was just wat was expected to happen at that fateful night.

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

hey faiza...i jst love ur this story...its a new & refreshing...i can understand u need to plot...pls continue soon & update it soon...i guess thsi story will turn out into more thn 20-25 chapters...oh god...let c...but love it yr...thnks 4 d pm...continue kr yr...jaldi..

pari

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#316

the update made me cry 😭

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Livingfree

@Livingfree

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Loved it. Beautifully written as always 👏

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#318

no words about the updates of this FF!

its just above all the FFs SS n OS i read!

very few writers can pen down something that can make me cry n this FF is one of them! plus i was listening to the song jo bheji thi dua whie reading this update and damn i couldn't stop myself from choking up

beautiful beautiful beautiful! this deserves the best SS/FF of the week hands down!

~ Sadie!

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#319

omg tis is a great udate..

just luv it...

the emotion tat u have shown in the story is just mind blowing..hw zoya felt fr her bro...wat asad felt fr his mum...wat rashid felt fr his son is just superb...the way u potray them is just awesome... n ayaan who run away frm his responsibilite nw havea new responsibilities given by asad...

it just freaking awesome...ur really a brilllaint writer...

thx fr the pm...

please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next update nwondering hw will asad n zoya confront each other...

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#320

Res

I can't tell if the girl in the beginning was Najma or Nikhat... but I'm assuming it was one of Asad's or Ayaan's sisters? I have a gut feeling it's Najma. Poor soul, separated from her brother 😔 Whyy ??

And I like how you delved a little more into Ayaan's past and his feelings towards this whole situation. Poor guy. Forced to be indebted to a man he loathes, but somehow manages to find respect for in the oddest of situations (meant to say in the last update, but forgot LOL too much else going on!) But I found it surprising (just a tad, it does really make sense) that he lives so close to Asad.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE that you finally introduced Rashid's point of view. It's really hard to hate him now. Still confused as what is going on. BUT love how you're slowly revealing both their pasts.. but I missed Zoya's a little in this one.. but it's ok I know you'll reveal it soon enough.. maybe in the next one? 😳

ANNND I'm sooo glad you showed that she heard his blood curling scream (gives me goosebumps every time I think about him in that state ) and how she realized he was also broken.. and he in turn realized that they shared a similar kind of pain and fear in their eyes. It was soo sad but so comforting at the same time. I hope there'll be some kind of interaction between them under different circumstances.. but you're the writer so I'll leave it to your brilliant judgement 😉

As always heart wrenching and beautifully written update 😃😃😃

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Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago