You are mine, only mine - an asya O.S

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Such a lovely OS, loved Zoya's jealousy and how Asad handled it in the end !!

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I cant help but smile... goodl please continue

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Champa2012

@Champa2012

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Thank you all.
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Niharikapriya10

@Niharikapriya10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

very nice...part 2 plz...😊

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

You OS started off really well - in fact I loved it, but then you killed it for me in the end. Zoya's outburst was so immature and childish. It looked tacky and gave her image of a spoilt brat which left a bitter taste in mouth at the end. I would have much rather Zoya refuse the coffee instead of fight for it; politely decline it would have been better. And Asad did not bring her any food? Just black coffee - come on - the girl has not eaten.

It would have been virtually perfect for me without the temper tantrum at the end with Zoya going on about you're mine.