You are mine, only mine - an asya O.S - Page 3

Wish we had scenes like this in the show too
Then it would have been awesome
just loved it

aye not fair plz continue i want the next part !!😭

Originally posted by: Laila2009

You OS started off really well - in fact I loved it, but then you killed it for me in the end. Zoya's outburst was so immature and childish. It looked tacky and gave her image of a spoilt brat which left a bitter taste in mouth at the end. I would have much rather Zoya refuse the coffee instead of fight for it; politely decline it would have been better. And Asad did not bring her any food? Just black coffee - come on - the girl has not eaten.

It would have been virtually perfect for me without the temper tantrum at the end with Zoya going on about you're mine.

Thank you Laila. I sometimes feel that unless she acts like this once, this akdu ahmed khan will not sudharega nahin. It is like smacking some sense into him. That's all. I will keep in mind about not rushing the end when I write another story.

Asad took a step to stand next to her "Ms.Farooqui, you think it will be alright if I hugged you?"

awww that was super cute😳

Loved the ending awwh awwh awwh awwh still smiling awwh

Cute os...😊

Like jealouse zoya so much...😃