OS-forgetful Asad(Part 2 page 5)

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hello QHians 🤗
Asmita here 😊
well...this is my very first OS...I have written FF's but they r all incomplete ones 😆
pehle hi bata doon am just loving this show and that inspired me to write this OS. 😳

Part 1

'Allahmiya!whats wrong with him?',Zoya exclaimed as she threw the phone on the bed...Asad was not answering her calls...she sat on the bed, disappointed...her eyes glistened...Asad had promised her to take her out and she was ready and excited but all her hopes washed off...it was 8.p.m.and Asad was not answering any of her calls. Zoya gave up all her hopes of going out with Asad for the very first time.
Najma came in and asked,'what happened...bhaijaan did not answer the call ?'...zoya got up and went the window...she said in muffled voice,'no'...Najma went and stood beside her and said,' aww..bhabi don't be upset...chalo we will go out together'...zoya moved away and said,'thanks tamatar' and smiled briefly...then said,'But I don't want to go'...Najma nodded knowingly and smiled,'Ok but atleast come for dinner'...Zoya said in a low voice,'ok..you go am coming'.Najma left the room and a distressed Zoya.

Before going for dinner...Zoya again called Asad...'Hello' ...finally the voice came from the other end...but before Zoya could say anythng Asad said in a gruff voice,'I am in a very important meeting now...don't disturb me.' saying this he cut the call and Zoya could only hear the beep sound.Tears started rolling down her cheeks...she muttered,'how can he be so rude?doesn't even remember his promise.' with this she again threw the phone...dashed off her tears and went for dinner.

Dilshad and Najma were waiting for her,they felt bad seeing Zoya distressed and sad.to cheer her up Dilshad said,'Let your hubby come I'll scold him...how dare he hurt my Zoya.' Zoya smiled a little and Najma served her food...Just then the door opened and Asad Ahmed Khan entered.He looked angry.Zoya too was simmering with anger.

Dilshad and Najma could feel the tension that was rising in the room,Zoya got up and left while the other ladies went to Asad.his eyes followed zoya and without saying anything he too went to his room.Najma and Dilshad were tensed.

when Asad entered...he saw Zoya standing in front of the window.He shouted,'zoya what has happened to you?Why were you disturbing me sooo much?so many calls?I have lots of work...I don't sit idle in the office...For God's sake don't disturb me so much.I__' But he stopped when Zoya turned towards him...She was furious and tears rolled down.Asad was taken aback. Zoya spoke with quavering voice,'Mr.Khan...do you remember that you had promised me something?I have no interest in calling so many times,I was ready and wanted to know when you were coming...but you__' Zoya failed to speak anymore and turned away.She was hurt and Asad could feel and see that.He closed his eyes for a second and muttered under breath.He did not know what to say..he stammered,'Zo-Zoya I-I__' he was stopped halfway by Zoya..she turned towards him with cheeks stained with tears and eyes still moist,'You don't like me calling you...fine I won't call you from tomorrow.' and went and climbed up on the bed and went to sleep. Asad kept looking at her...he did not what to do...how to lessen her anger,he said under breath,'such a big punishment for this mistake.'
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To be continued...
frnz please share your views about this piece of writing 😛
[p.s-this is completely my own work.]

from Asmita
with Love.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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a great one, waiting for the next chapter
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Awesme! Pleej continue soon!❤️
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loved it.plz update soon and pm me

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nice one... continue soon... dn't frgt to pm
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eagerly waiting for next chapter, plz update soon😊
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Itni jaldiii end kyun kiya 🤔 koi nahi please update it soon!
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Awesme! Please continue soon!
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Very nice..ab asad kaise manayega zoya ko..continue soon..pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow they're married...well you've got me hooked already!!!
Aww Asad never forget a dinner date with your wife...it can be nasty😉
Waiting for the next chapter already!!!!
do continue soon...

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