AsYa FF: Give your heart a break Chp 6 FINALLY up and Authors note pag - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
That is great
Thanks for the pm hun
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wwwoww! Awesome update. Poor zoya..not even sure about her feelings. Can't wait to read further.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh fahad is so cute and i thnk he wil act as a cupid...anywy i am lovng him..thnks 4 pm and dis update as i undrstand ur stuff at school
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ok so I'm just catching up on this story and I have to say I really really love the plot! Very hatke and I love reading stories with a different type of plot! So I think ill go from part 1

Part 1 –

Ok I'm always a fan of Ayaan and Zoya's bonding. Although they aren't Rabart-Mona here but their friendship is something I really admire. Nothing like jammy and his one-eyed BFF!

Smarty pants Zoya is and will always remain to be my favorite. She is an English teacher? How cool is that!! :D great part I must say

And Ayaan and Humaira are so cute trying to set her up with their friends! That's so sweet!

Ok Asad was right the staff can be pretty mean at times! That lady at the front desk was such a …… (hope you get my meaning behind the dots :P)

Asad is such a sweetheart and well flirting comes naturally to him doesn't it. He cant seem to help himself. And man, Zoya does ramble a lot nai? I mean while reading I was saying stop stop stop don't you like need to take in a breath? Haha! You know I really liked the way Asad was checking out Zoya! Oh la la! ;) and he is a gym teacher!! Can that be anymore hot? All sweaty and stuff (ok I'll stop myself before I go into details about just how hot can he be☺️)

He welcomed Zoya so sweetly and this line "Welcome to St. Teresa's High School. The place where the students drive better cars then you, and the faculty are all old, snobs." Asad explained.

Just cracked me up! Nicely written, a very witty answer btw! Great job on the part 1

Part 2 –

Zoya thinking whether Asad is single or no was sooo cuteee! ^__^

She thinks she comes with a lot of baggage but then who doesn't? and that guy who fled just because zoe is a single mom was a douchebag! And well I'm glad he fled, I cant see my AsYa with any1 else! Lol! You know after the part where she mentions she had gone out once and she was drunk and everything was a blur, I don't know why I had this feeling that maybe, just maybe fahad can be Asad's child! You know drinks and a broken heart are a deadly combo! Ooh it would be so fun if that's the case! But then neither Asad nor Zoya seem to recognize each other so I guess I need to scratch that off! (if you take demands by any chance then will you be kind enough to take my demands into consideration first?? Just kidding!😆)

The students can be just as snobbish and mean as the faculty! Seriously what type of school is it anyway? Or is it just how students and faculty behave in NY?? And Asad was just so sweet to help his damsel in distress yet again. I'm really liking AsYa's lunch dates, such a normal thing to do yet so adorable! (Ok I'm hopeless when it comes to AsYa)

I loved it when Asad had no qualms about Zoya being a single parent unlike the other jerk. He was tres cool about it!

Whoa have I written a short novella as a review or something? I'll continue with the reviews of part 3,4 and 5 in the next comment!

I'm sorry if I'm bugging you with my freakishly long reviews! I usually give a one line comment! Don't know what overtook me to write an essay!

~ Sadie!😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
res for part 3,4 n 5

unres ~

Part 3 –

Ahhahahaha Asad was behaving like a teenage girl in love! Isn't he such a sweetheart! That was so lovely and cuteee! And Ayaan actually came just to have breakfast??? Oh god that was damn funny.

Aww Asad was waititng for her at lunch!! And zoe is right, mac n cheese really is the food of the gods haha! Really liking the way Asad knows that Zoya is different then the rest of the girls he has slept with. He respects her and values her and that's really nice.

And you used Beautiful soul by jesse in this part!!!! Can I hug you? Oh what am I asking? Come here *Takes you in for a Sadie special hug*

Zoya is really gullible she actually thought his middle name is stud! :P

The interaction between Fahad and Asad was very cute and while writing this line I realized their names rhyme! Did you plan it *wiggling eyebrows* :P

Part 4 –

Fahad is just getting adorable-r chapter by chapter! I'm in love with that cutie pie! ^__^

I don't understand why is Ayaan so against this relationship! Yes he fears Asad will just use her like he did but then the poor guy is trying! I feel bad for him.

And c'mon their flirting was cutee not at all bogus! Lame, yes but not bogus! Ayaan will always be Ayaan and that's the reason why I love him (although CVs have literally butchered the previous Ayaan with the exit of Rishabh)

Although I must say I'm liking this protective streak of Ayaan towards Zoya. He is acting like her Big Bro and it's really great to read!

Part 5 –

First things first! Hope you ain't (sorry ain't is not a word ) aren't getting bored already of my 'essays'? Well even if you are, you have no option but to read em! Hehe!

Ok coming to the part, I have a question! Is Asad following Zoya?? Haha stupid lame-ass question I know it's just that he's everytime around Zoya. It's like he is omnipresent but only for Zoya! Did I make any sense? I guess not! Lol

Ooh I a babysitter Asad is also hot (well for me anything and everything about him is hot so I guess you might get tired of reading this word)

Fahad's questions were really matured for a four-year-old! Aaj kal ke bacche so advanced nai? When we were four I didn't even know what dating meant!

Humaira and the other chick's fangirling reminded me of Dilshad and najma's fangirling! Speaking of which are you planning to introduce Dilshad and Najma in your story?? I would really like to read about them as well!

Well that's about it! Please update soon or do you want me to spam this thread again with my essays?? Hehe

PS – I just noticed that my reviews (part1 n 2 combined) has 1,083 words! Its like I have written a whole new part for my FFs haha. Continue soon please and pm me if possible!

Sadie xx

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Ok so I'm just catching up on this story and I have to say I really really love the plot! Very hatke and I love reading stories with a different type of plot! So I think ill go from part 1

Part 1 '

Ok I'm always a fan of Ayaan and Zoya's bonding. Although they aren't Rabart-Mona here but their friendship is something I really admire. Nothing like jammy and his one-eyed BFF!

Smarty pants Zoya is and will always remain to be my favorite. She is an English teacher? How cool is that!! :D great part I must say

And Ayaan and Humaira are so cute trying to set her up with their friends! That's so sweet!

Ok Asad was right the staff can be pretty mean at times! That lady at the front desk was such a '' (hope you get my meaning behind the dots :P)

Asad is such a sweetheart and well flirting comes naturally to him doesn't it. He cant seem to help himself. And man, Zoya does ramble a lot nai? I mean while reading I was saying stop stop stop don't you like need to take in a breath? Haha! You know I really liked the way Asad was checking out Zoya! Oh la la! ;) and he is a gym teacher!! Can that be anymore hot? All sweaty and stuff (ok I'll stop myself before I go into details about just how hot can he be☺️)

He welcomed Zoya so sweetly and this line "Welcome to St. Teresa's High School. The place where the students drive better cars then you, and the faculty are all old, snobs." Asad explained.

Just cracked me up! Nicely written, a very witty answer btw! Great job on the part 1

Part 2 '

Zoya thinking whether Asad is single or no was sooo cuteee! ^__^

She thinks she comes with a lot of baggage but then who doesn't? and that guy who fled just because zoe is a single mom was a douchebag! And well I'm glad he fled, I cant see my AsYa with any1 else! Lol! You know after the part where she mentions she had gone out once and she was drunk and everything was a blur, I don't know why I had this feeling that maybe, just maybe fahad can be Asad's child! You know drinks and a broken heart are a deadly combo! Ooh it would be so fun if that's the case! But then neither Asad nor Zoya seem to recognize each other so I guess I need to scratch that off! (if you take demands by any chance then will you be kind enough to take my demands into consideration first?? Just kidding!😆)

The students can be just as snobbish and mean as the faculty! Seriously what type of school is it anyway? Or is it just how students and faculty behave in NY?? And Asad was just so sweet to help his damsel in distress yet again. I'm really liking AsYa's lunch dates, such a normal thing to do yet so adorable! (Ok I'm hopeless when it comes to AsYa)

I loved it when Asad had no qualms about Zoya being a single parent unlike the other jerk. He was tres cool about it!

Whoa have I written a short novella as a review or something? I'll continue with the reviews of part 3,4 and 5 in the next comment!

I'm sorry if I'm bugging you with my freakishly long reviews! I usually give a one line comment! Don't know what overtook me to write an essay!

~ Sadie!😆

Oh My God!! Now THAT is what i call a review😆!! Im so so so glad you had the time to write that!! And pfft, your're not buggin me!! i loved the whole 'essay'! im giving u a straight A for that👏😆!! Thank you sooo much! glad ya like it!! waiting for your other review!! love ya!❤️
-Sharyn!😃
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Oh My God!! Now THAT is what i call a review😆!! Im so so so glad you had the time to write that!! And pfft, your're not buggin me!! i loved the whole 'essay'! im giving u a straight A for that👏😆!! Thank you sooo much! glad ya like it!! waiting for your other review!! love ya!❤️
-Sharyn!😃


sorry i fell asleep, will post the next comment at night😃
Edited by --starstruck-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW WOW WOW WHAT AN UPDATE!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!! LOVED FAHAD AND ASAD'S BONDING!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sharyn jaani... what a beautiful update darling... you are so talented kamini... 😆 loved FaSad bonding... Fahad Asad duffer 🤣 update soonish
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RiDz_rox

Sharyn jaani... what a beautiful update darling... you are so talented kamini...😆loved FaSad bonding... Fahad Asad duffer🤣update soonish


Thank u re kameeni 😳 me lauves you! Achha laga ki tune padha... 😃

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