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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

This is amazing! Poor Asad. Ayaan doesn't even trust his cousin can change. That's really sad. But I can understand where Ayaan is coming from. I mean she's like his sister. But I do find it odd that they knew each other all their lives and Zoya and Asad never met. Very odd. Or maybe just a coincidence?

And OMG Fahad is just too adorable! I can picture him playing basket ball and hugging Asad. I wanna eat him up! Zoya was so cute hugging him. I loved that part. My favourite in the whole update.

I really hope Asad is able to get through to Ayaan, and that he doesn't hurt Zoya. I wonder if that guy who's Fahad's father will make an appearance any time soon? I'm hoping not, but a part of me knows it would help the story's depth.

Loved this hun! You are very good at creating a story out of thin air and making it seem like i'm reading this after ages. And your imagination is through the roof! I could never have imagined them in a school, as teachers. But you've managed to create an alternate universe in which it's completely normal 🤗

Update soon!

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Alveena12

@Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Well Ayaan's reaction wasn't expected, I thought he was gonna be the one to get them together, but he's going the opposite way here 😕

I loved the flirting going on between Asad and Zoya, it was so cute and I couldn't help but to laugh at Ayaan's 'Get a Room' innuendo, that was funny 😆 I also think that the bonding between Asad and Fahad is so cute and Asad would make a good father figure to Fahad

I hope Asad and Zoya get together and Ayaan realises that they should be together and he doesn't stop them

please update soon and pm me

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Wow

Caught up with chapter 4

Glad u mentioned pms later cause i was wondering how come i haven't got one yet

Loved the way Ayaan was protective for Zoya

Zoya- Asad- Fahad bonding was awesome

Simply loved it

Gr8 job

Update soon

Looking forward to the next part eagerly

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janestone6

@janestone6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

This was one hell of an update. I loved how they were flirting. Aww Ayan was adorable protecting his sister.

So Asad was a playboy or is a playboy? Who is Fahad's father? I hope the next update has answers to these questions.

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Asya0910

@Asya0910

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!! please continue soon... For some reason i didn't like Ayaan. I know he wants the best for Zoya, but wasn't he the one who told Zoya to move on, and Asad ask out the girl. I loved Asad and Zoya ( as always)... Asad and Fahad were so cute together. It was like he was his real father.