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Posted: 12 years ago
hey wen will u update???? waitin frm ages...
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Originally posted by: Curiousmind

This is a really nice story. Keep it up and update soon. Thanks for the pm.

thnx for reading it ...glad that u liked it
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE.
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.Sorry sorry sorry for such a late update ..but i hope some of u still remember my ss .
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On the eve of independence day ..i think i must make u free from my torturous writing ...so its the last part part of this ss.
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Ab aur nahi pakaa sakte aapko .
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So thanx in advance for reading .hope u like it .and sorry once again .
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UPDATE 5 -- ''ASYAlicious night continues '' (16+)
.Recap : asad and zoya's confession and night in hut
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.now .
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UPDATE 5TH last part...
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Zoya was under asad and their lips were engrossed in their first kiss ever .
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At first zoya was in shock but later she enjoyed and reciprocate the kiss with complete passion and desire .
Asad started sucking and biting on her upper lips while zoya was on his lower lips ,they switched lips again and again ...later asad demanded entry into her mouth after teasing him she eventually paved the way for his tongue .their tongue fought for the dominance .they were feeling so breathless but no one was actually wanting to break the kiss ...after few more minutes both broke the kiss .they were panting hard but their face was shining with the feeling of satisfaction.
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Asad moved his head towards her long slender neck and placed a trails of wet kisses and with the hand which was on her waist he pulled the single string of choli which made the choli loosen and her back completely bare .
Asad slided the sleeves of her choli which easily slided bcoz it was already opened and placed kisses all along her bare shoulder and arm ...while zoya was busy moving her one hand in the hair of asad and with other hand she was living her dream to touch the six-packs of mr.khan without any obsatcle of clothes between them . Asad moved her head towards her completely visible cleavage and kissed in her valley .he kissed at the sensitive point where the neck and the upper chest meet but drowned in passion he actually bite her there ..he heard a groan from her . He saw tears forming in her eyes due to pain of the bite ..he looked at what he did ..the place completely turned purple .he immidiately licked that place and blow air on it .
He felt really bad and he moved away from her body and sat down on the edge of bed . He has tears in his eyes .
Asad: zoya , i m sorry .i didn't did that intentionally .i must keep a check on my passion ...i m really bad ..it must be hurting
.Zoya: shhh mr.khan (putting her finger on his lips)..aapko koi haq nahi mere asad ko rulaane ka . Mujhe yeh bite nahi aapke aansoo jyada hurt kar rahe hai ..aur jahan tak is bite ki baat hai toh yeh mere body pe nahi hogi tab mujhe jyada bura lagega.
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(Asad with his teary eyes looked into her eyes)
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Zoya : haan mr.khan yeh toh humaare pyaar ki nishani hai aur aise nishaan apse paane ka haq sirf aur sirf mera hai ..(wiping his tears) aur khabardaar jo mere asad ko rulaaya toh mera asad mujhse itna pyaar karta hai ki woh galti se bhi mujhe hurt nahi kar sakta . And i love this hickey but love the person more who gave this hickey on me (and with this she slanted her face towards him)and kissed him on his lips .
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I love u mr.khan and i want more of this kind of sweet pain mr.khan .
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Asad: zoya ...
.zoya: shhh ...kuch nahi boliye mr.khan
.and he turned asad down and now zoya was above him .she started kissing his long neck and bare chest ..then she placed kissed on each and every six of his six-pack abs.Her every touch of soft lips seem like feather touch and ticklish on his abs .he was loving this soft torture but it turned him more on ..he hold zoya's waist tightly and rotated ..now zoya was under him again.
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He moved towards her navel and placed soft wet kisses there ..she was moaning his name in pleasure ..
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Asad moved his hands down and now he was playing with the zip and string of her ghagra ..
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He pulled the strings of ghagra which loosened it .
As it was sliding down asad found it very hard to control his desire to be inside her .
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Asad: zoya may i??
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Zoya: plzz mr.khan abhi nahi ..
Asad moved away from her body and lay beside her .
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Zoya: mr.khan aap naraaz ho gaye kya ?? Mr.khan mere zindagi par mujh par aapka haq hai sirf aapka ..but main chahti hooon ki hum apne iss rishte ko apne ghar mein apne kamre mein next level par le jaaye na ki yaha kisi anjaan jagah ..
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Lekin agar aap chahe...
.Asad: (put finger on her lips) main tumse naaraz nahi ho sakta zoya , kabhi nahi . Lekin i m shocked yeh dekh kar ki ek mindless creature itni samajhdaari waali baat kaise kar sakta hai ..and he giggled
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Zoya: (smacking his arms) mr.khan aap..na...jaaiye mujh ko aapse koi baat nahi karna.
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Zoya turned back and she stood on floor and tightened her ghagra string and was trying hard to tie the strings of choli again..
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Asad(came and stood behind her): he took the string of choli from her hands ...
His touch shivered her .he started kissing her bare back while tieing the string and whisphered in her ear
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Asad: i love u zoya
zoya: maine kaha naa mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni. And mujhe aapke help ki koi zarurat nahi main khud tie kar loongi .
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Asad: arre waah bhalaai ka zamaana hi nahi raha ..ek toh help karo aur gussa bhi jhelo.
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Zoya: accha toh biwi ko mindless creature kehna ko aapke dictionary mein bhalaai kehte hai .
.ek baar mindless bola tha toh teen wishes poori karni padi thi .
Aur ab phir bola hai toh ek bonus wish poori karni padegi.
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Asad: confession karke yeh murga toh halaal ho hi chuka hai ab ek aur wish ...okay but mujhe bhi ek cheez chahiye .
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Zoya: yayy one more wish ..so happy i m boliye aapko kya chahiye .
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Asad kissed her lips again and said: yeh chahiye mujhe .And he lifter her and put themselves in bed and slept peacefully in each others embrace .
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NEXT MORNING
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Asad and zoya wore their original attire and started their walk down the hill for the car parking.
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Zoya: aapko dard toh nahi ho raha hai pair mein kal jal gaye the ..
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Asad: no zoya woh toh kal ke kiss therapy ke baad hi theek ho gaye the.
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Zoya: aww mr.khan aap so nahi rahe the uss waqt ..mr.drama ahmed khan.
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Asad: no zoya main toh bas intezaar kar raha tha apni biwi ka to come upto my face and ki...
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Zoya: mr.khan aap pehle hi theek the ab toh bakhuda kitne besharam ho gaye hai .
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Asad: tumhi ne badla hai ab toh zindagi bhar jhelna padega.
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Zoya: mujhe qubool hai ..
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Like this way talking and teasing each other they reached down
They moved to their car and zoomed off to their house .
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IN KHAN's MANSION
asad and zoya reached their house and greeted by ammi and nazma.
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Ammi: kahan gaye the tum dono?
Zoya: woh pahadi waale dargaah gaye the ammi.
Asad: haan woh zoya ko jaana tha wahan net pe dekha tha inhone so ...
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Ammi: woh theek hai beta but mujhe aur najma ko shopping pe jaana tha toh zoya ko bhi le jaaye .
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Zoya: yayyy! Shopping mr.khan i m going anyway.
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Asad: maine kab mana kiya aapko jaayiye .
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Ammi: asad tum dono kuch jyada hi khush dikh rahe ho aur jhagad bhi nahi rahe ho ..kya baat hai ??
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Zoya and asad both turned red after hearing ammi's remark .

Both: aisa kuch nahi hai ammi.
And they blushed again seeing their timing
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Ammi and nazma chuckled .
Asad: mujhe kuch kaam hai main aa jaa raha hoon room mein .
.IN ASYA's room
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Zoya: mr.khan hum log jaa rahe hai shopping bye .
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Asad: theek hai but 7 pm se pehle aa jaayiega
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Zoya: waise mr.khan aapki woh bonus wish baaki hai so ...my wish is u will make dinner for us tonight .and make sure no cheating no order from hotel.
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Asad: what ?? No u can't do this to me .
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Zoya: u have to ..ab tak toh saare wishes mere liye saza aur aapke liye mazza ban gayi thi ab iss punishment ka maza lijiye ...bbye
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KHAN's ladies in car
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Nazma: zoya bhabhi aap bhaijaan se 4th wish aisa kya bol rahi thi ??
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Zoya: woh kya hai tamatar aapke bhaijaan ne mujhe mujh jaise genius ko mindless creature kaha tha toh yeh unki punishment no.4 thi .
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Baaki 3 punishment mein unko maza hi aaya but iss baar unhe real punishment milegi .
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Ammi: what's the three wishes??
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Zoya: 1st one was to take me out for day out whole day breakfast to dinner and that too according to my choice but unhe waha pe kuch foreingers babe mil gayi drool karte huye unpar ..unko maza meri saza..
.2nd wish was to send me pizza coke etc.bcoz he was busy that day so much so it was easy one.
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And 3rd was dargaah one ..where he confessed and then due to heavy lightening and rain we have to spend night in a small cottage and mr.khan in romantic mood again unke liye mazaa an...d...me...
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Zoya bite her tongue when she realized that what she was going to blabber .
And she in embarrassment covered her face with her palm.
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Ammi: kya asad, romantic, cottage ,rain,night,,ohooo issiliye toh inn dono ke shakl pe itni chamak hai subah se jab se dargaah se laute hai .
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Nazma: bhabhi howwzz my bro in romantic avtaar ...kyunki humne toh unhe kabhi romantic movie dekhte huye bhi nahi dekha ..tell us ???hmmm
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Zoya: phoophi aap bhi and tamatar shut up warna bhaijaan ko keh dungi ki tum romantic movies ke baare mein baat kar rahi thi.
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Nazma: nahi nahi ..we r just kidding bhabhi.
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Ammi: accha yeh to bataao what's this 4th one which u seem to be punishment for him?
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Zoya(smiling widely): i asked him to prepare dinner for us tonight .
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Ammi: again mazza for him not saza.
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Zoya's grin vanished
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Zoya: kya huya phoophi??
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Ammi: zoya asad beside having a degree in artitechure ,he is the topper of IHM,mumbai .
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Zoya: what ?? Means he know how to cook very well afterall he has done hotel mangement too .
Oh nooo
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Ammi : ur plan fails once again.
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Zoya: plzz aap dono meri help karo iss plan ko success karne ke liye...mr.khan jo kuch bhi banayenge kitna bhi accha banyenge aap log plzzz unke food ki khoob criticise karna plzzz..
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Ammi and nazma: done .
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Zoya: thanx ab aayega maza.
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KHAN's mansion
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Zoya, dilshaad ,nazma returned home.
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They were amazed to see the table ready for dinner in a very elegant and ASAD's manner .
Zoya: wow mr.khan set up toh bahut khoobsurat lag raha hai .lagta hai khane mein gadbadi ko overshadow karne ke liye hai .
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Asad: think as u like.
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Whole khan khandaan set themselves for the dinner .
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Ammi and zoya served the food and zoya winked her to remind her abt their plan.
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Asad: ammi taste kariye toh plzz. Aur zoya aap bhi .
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Ammi: asad yeh kya kiya hai tumne issmein toh kitna namak hai .
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Zoya hit nazma with her legs under the table to continue with their plan.
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Nazma: bhaijaan lagta hai aap na khanaa banana bhool gaye ho .
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Asad's bright face instantly start loosing his smile.
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Zoya: mr.khan maine kahan tha na aap ke liye yeh punishment hogi but issmein itni mirch hai yeh toh humaare liye hi punishment ho gayi .
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Asad stood from his chair without even taking a single morsel and went straight to his room.
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Ammi: zoya yeh le ab toh asad naraaz ho gaya.
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Zoya: but ammi food is so tasty that i find it very difficult to criticise it.
.Nazma: woh to hai bhabhi but ab bhaijaan ko yeh bataayega kaun ki we r just joking ..he hadn't even eaten anything .
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Ammi: jiska plan hai woh .
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Zoya: mar gaye ..ab jaakar unhe manaana padega ..ho gaya appoiintment with mr.gussa ahmed khan.
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Ammi and nazma: best of luck zoya ...tum jaao asad ko manaao hum toh toot pade iss delicious food pe .. Mera beta hai hi kamaal ...kya khana banaya hai ?? Wah!
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Zoya: enjoy kijiye mera toh band bajega ..
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Zoya entered their bedroom with their plates of dinner
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Zoya found asad near the window ,his back was facing her .
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She silently placed the plates on the table and moved towards asad .
She hugged him from behind.
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Asad turned towards her due to sudden hug .
Zoya saw asad's eyes brimming with tears.
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Zoya: yeh kya mr.khan aap ladkiyon ki tarah ro rahe hai .
Asad: woh dinner ..disaster..actually...i m bad at this
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Zoya: kisne kaha u r bad at this ..u r the best and ur food was the bestest .
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Asad: mera mann rakhne ke liye kyun bol rahi ho zoya.
. Zoya: woh actually ..mr.khan yeh sab mera plan that aapko punishment dene ka issliye maine phoophi and nazma to kaha food ka criticise karne ke liye .
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Asad: nahi i m sure food was awfull so..
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Zoya: u come with me towards that window and see.
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Asad and zoya saw nazma and ammi enjoying their food to the core .
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Asad wiped his tear and moved to zoya
.Asad: u devil !!! I m not gonna leave u now ..u r gone zoya.
.Zoya ran away from asad .
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Asad: tumne plan karke meri band bajaayi .ab toh tu gayi .
Zoya: mr.khan cheating aapne ki hai..mujhe kya pata aap hotel professional bhi ho .
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Asad: to mohtarma aap cheating karegi ??
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Zoya: sorry na ...plzzz look at my puppy face .
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Asad: but ek condition pe u have to feed he dinner tonight .
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Zoya: my pleasure bbas aap mujhe bhagaana band kijiye ..kitni der se ringa ringa roses khel rahe hai ..i m tired of this circle bhagam bhag.
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Asad: okay calm ...chaliye lets have our dinner .
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Both sat to have their meals .
Zoya start stuffing morsel in his mouth and vice versa .
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Asad put a spring roll in her mouth and as soon as she bite from her side asad put the other end of roll into his mouth .
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Zoya was shocked but could'nt say anything due to food stuff ..asad start chewing from his side ..and zoya in amaze couldn't move her mouth to eat ...
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asad reached near the end from his side ..just a few inches away from her lucious lips ...after that zoya chewd the last little bite of spring roll and they end up having a very cute kiss .
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Kiss later grow more and more passionate with asad nibbling and sucking her lips .
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After few moments ..
Zoya: toh mr.khan aapne iss sazaa ko bhi apne liye mazza bana hi liya .
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Asad : abhi kaha abhi toh poori raat baaki hai zoya !!!.
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He winked and smirked at her.
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Zoya: mr. Khan aapne khaane ke liye new technique sochi ... The kiss technique .
.toh maine bhi ek nayi technique sochi hai romance ki ...
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Asad: then show me the demo plzzz
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Zoya sensually comes closer to his face ..and whispher : close ur eyes...
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Zoya cupped his face..asad could feel her breathe on his face fanning him .
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Suddenly she left him and jumped on the bed .
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Asad not feeling her opened his eyes and found her jumping on bed.
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Asad: zoya yeh kya kar rahi ho ??
.Zoya: mr.khan romance ka naya technique MR.OCD ahmed khan ka superclean bed ko mess karna..
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Asad: come down.
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Zoya: no not at all ..and she pulled the bed cover and throw it .
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Asad: will you plzz stop ..?
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Zoya: rok sakte hai toh rok lijiye ..
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Asad swiftly moves towards the bed and glared her with anger .
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Asad: last time warning ..utariye bed se .
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Zoya show tongue towards him and jumped once again ...
.asad infuriated pulled the bed sheet and which causes zoya to loose her balance and fell directly into asad's arms.
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Asad: ab mujhe chidha kar toh dikhayiye mrs.messy ahmed khan.
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Zoya: utariye mujhe ..
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Asad: no !! And he moved towards bathroom
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Asad made her lie down in bath tub and put on the shower .
This made zoya all drenched .
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Zoya: yeh kya kiya ??.
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Asad: ab kijiye paani ke saath romance .
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Asad swiftly ran out of bathroom and closed the door of bathroom from outside .
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Zoya shouted: mr.khan darwaaja kholiye .
.Asad : nahi aap aaram kijiye mujhe abhi room set karna hai .
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Zoya: aap kholte hai ya nahi ???.
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Asad: no chance .
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Asad in 10 minutes put the room in its earlier state ..meanwhile
Zoya took shower as she was already wet and left no choice .
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Again zoya started shouting.
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Zoya: mr.khan ab kholiye plzz ..mujhe thand lag rahi hai ..mujhe pneumonia ho jaayega ..main marrr...
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Before she could complete ..asad opened the door .
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Asad: phir aisa kuch kaha toh main khud ko bhi maar lunga kyunki aap ke bina main nahi jee sakta .
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Zoya: sorry mr.khan ..but woh aap darwaaza nahi khol rahe the so ..
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Zoya found asad's eyes checking her from top to bottom in just a bath robe .
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Zoya: hatiye mr.khan i m going to change ..apke kaaran mujhe itni raat mein baath lena pada .
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Asad : haan that was a bad punishment ..actually na i should company u inside then ur punsihment will be complete .
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Zoya blushed : mr.khan aap na kuch bhi ..
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And she tried moving towards closet ..
.Asad caught her by her wrist .and pulled her towards himself ..she banged towards her hard core chest .she closed her eyes tightly.
Their torso touching each other ...zoya's heavy breathe and up down movement of her chest was well felt by asad .he was happy seeing his affect on her .
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Asad whisphered : zoya aaj toh hum apne room mein hai so no excuse for tonight .
Zoya couldn't say anything except a little sound came from her : hmmm.
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Asad picked her in his arms and start moving towards their bed ...
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Zoya : ASAD i love u.
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Asad: i love u too ...and he laid her lightly on their bed .
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Zoya: mr.khan light toh band kar dijiye .
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Asad: nahi i wanna see ur face when i enters u ,when u moan my name all night .
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Zoya pulled him towards her and hugged him tightly .
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Zoya: asad u make my life worth living ...
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Asad kissed her on her lips : zoya u r my life .
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Zoya: plzz asad make me all urs in all senses tonight ...i can't bear this anymore .
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Asad: u r mine and only mine ...
.Asad pulled the sheet above themselves .
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And rest u all gutter minds can think but i can't write .
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THE END / THE BEGINNING OF NEW LIFE .
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Thanx a ton for all who read my ss and supported me to the core and special mention to all those who bear my laziness in updating and be patient towards my late-lateefi and not frequent updates .
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I love u all and thanx for reading my crap and wasting ur time .
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Eagerly w8ing for all ur comments, criticise ..everything welcome .
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Plzz do hit like button if in anyway i m able to entertain u .thank you once again .
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THANX
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Edited by sgksg3 - 12 years ago
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LOL on the part where Asad got upset with all the girls for criticizing his cooking but loved the cheeky ending to this SS !!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ABBY92

LOL on the part where Asad got upset with all the girls for criticizing his cooking but loved the cheeky ending to this SS !!

glad that u liked it ...thanx a lott for the comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb...but it came to an end...love asad..he is so cute..& gang of ladies..superb..asya romance...well u left on our gutter minds...😆😆

do write more such stuffs...& pm me

pari
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Originally posted by: princeegoyal

superb...but it came to an end...love asad..he is so cute..& gang of ladies..superb..asya romance...well u left on our gutter minds...😆😆

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do write more such stuffs...& pm me

pari

thanx for the comment

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