AsYa OS- The Night With Her[Posted on page 7] 17+

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

The like button is not working😡 but that's okay I guess because I really liked this. Technically speaking, there were a few awkward descriptions which interrupted the mood of the story but overall, it was really good. Writing physical love scenes is not easy and not everyone can do it. I tried once and it was so awkward reading it because it was so...boring and bland. There were no emotions.

I'll be checking out your index next 😊

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Awesome.. *hot* *hot* ☺️

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

AWWHHH, It was sweet that Asad proposed Zoya at the end of it all !!

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598470

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Woww that was hot, thanks for the pm :)

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

this was really nice. I loved Asad's last line in the os.

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Yummylicious ☺️ ❤️

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Amazing update!!! Loved it! It certainly was pree damn steamy out here!! ☺️ I thought I was gonna melt from all this! Beautiful! The last bit ...so sweet! Update as soon as possible!!! T'is too good!