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..vidhi..

@..vidhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

it was fabulous ...really hot!!!!
loved the ending!!!
u write really well...

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Hey ...
That was sooo HAWT ...
I'm still blushing :$

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

This OS was simply mindblowing..

I'm having exams,so plz forgive me for the short comment.

bigad gayi ho tum

itni hot OS..😳

I'm blushing..

ASYA's wild love making was soo sensuous and amazing

The best part about this OS was Asad's proposal with a bed tea.

That was quite unexpected but a beautiful surprise indeed.

I loved this OS to the core.

I wish Asad miyan may loose control like this some day with Zoe.😉

You are a wonderful writer darling...

Keep up the good work..

Before I kill u may better read my SS.😆

love ya

Muah!

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rkbala

@rkbala

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Awesmmm...! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was so hott , so hott , so hott , that i can't say ki kitna hot tha ! 😉 ☺️

luv u dear ! 😃 😳

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supriya.ipkknd

@supriya.ipkknd

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR
This OS was simply mindblowing..
I'm having exams,so plz forgive me for the short comment.
bigad gayi ho tum
itni hot OS..😳
I'm blushing..
ASYA's wild love making was soo sensuous and amazing
The best part about this OS was Asad's proposal with a bed tea.
That was quite unexpected but a beautiful surprise indeed.
I loved this OS to the core.
I wish Asad miyan may loose control like this some day with Zoe.😉
You are a wonderful writer darling...
Keep up the good work..
Before I kill u may better read my SS.😆
love ya
Muah!

Thank you So Much Asma!

I was fed up with the eye sex in the show! 😆

Yaya! I have already read the first part

*Off to read the rest*

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suchitra

@AmaZaynGirl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

dat was so damn hot...!!
fantastic updte...luved it

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supriya.ipkknd

@supriya.ipkknd

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: stellababes
Res
*unres*

Yaaay! First comment!

Koi AC chalao! That was smokin' hawt!!!

Ek din mai 2 hawt updates!! What more could a girl like me want???

Amazingly written, Suppi! Lagta Hai jab mujhse bahana banake washroom mai baithi thi to dimaag mein itna amazing idea aa gaya!! I'm proud of u re!

I love this story! N I love u!

Jaldi update karna! Nahi to tujhe khaa jaoongi!

Yours truly,
Chudail...! : P

AC chala le khud. Lazy Ass 😆

M nowhere close to Fizzi to please uska naam leke mera mood off mat kar. 😆

Aur Kya! Washroom me bethke yahi sab to soch rahi thi ! 😳

M not updating this. Hmmphhh.

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pinguunique

@pinguunique

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

*blush* *blush*

That was so hot and cute at the same time!!

You should write more OS/FF!!

P.S. thanks for the PM :)

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supriya.ipkknd

@supriya.ipkknd

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: giee

OHHH MYYY GOODNESSS

Babe this was HOTTT like seriously VERYYY VERRYYY HOTTT ☺️
*hormonal rush*
I am feeling all mushy mushy now 😳
and the shocker was
HE PROPOSED TO HER ?????????? 🥳
*dil jumping jumpang*
my fav. line "Its only you I ever wanna make love to "
I loved it woman 👏
FABULOUS writer you are 👍🏼
and muaaah to you
chumeshwari update
And thank you for updating sooo sooon 😃

And this for the dedication 😳

P.S - I love you