'TERE ISHQ KI CHADAR' Asya New FF part2 page 3 have a look n

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Hi friends i got a great idea of a new ff here is the concept:


Concept:


They were friends but she was in a disguise to him . She was on a mission with him and for them but still unknown to him , they were each otherlife but a part of life was unknown to them .


The story is in ancient types . He became a king after his fatherdeath . Zoya known as zyna to asad was his friend and a rajkumari in disguise of a normal girl to him . She was living her life to fulfil a mission, a promise and she needed him in her battle . Will they able to stand with each other and fight the battle ? Will they ever become lovers from friends ?


Note: do read the concept and comment if u want me to continue it and i will need help in siggi and vm for this ff plz do help
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHARACTERS:

Maharaj Asad Ahmed Khan:

king of ajmer


Ayan Ali:

best friend of Asad and right hand


Sameer Abbas:

best friend of Asad and left hand and army chief of army of ajmer


Rajkumari Zoya Fateh Awan:

a mystery to be revealed


Alisha khatak:

best friend of zoya and her secret keeper and love interest of Ayaan


Aliya mir khan:

same as Alisha and love interest of Sameer


Bilawal khan :

enemy of zoya and her father also mystery

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Posted: 12 years ago
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INDEX
Part 1: page 2
Part 2: page 3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love the concept...pls pm me when you update...😊
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"Tere Ishq Ki Chadar"

Part1:

Metals are striking against each other but one of them is right and the other had to loose the battle of truth, honour and rightfulness.

Two army are fighting but one is right and the other is fight for the lies of him

One side there is a army of maharaj Asad Ahmed Khan against the maharaj akram wali . maharaj akram was the greatest enemy of late maharaj Rashid ahmed khan who was father of Asad. Maharaj akram wanted to expand his kingdom by snatching , he was the role model of lies deceits and evilness . maharaj Rashid ahmed khan stopped him every time and in his last battle he also defeated akram again but that pawn of devil stabbed him in the back and killed Rashid ahmed khan .

Asad was very devasted after his father death and he planned to defeat maharaj akram and give the honour to his late father and here they are standing against him in battle field . Asad and Akram are fighting but akram losses the battle and asad slays his head and wins the battle .

Asad was a honest and humble person, instead of becoming the king of Amair(akram kingdom) he give akrams son to become the king and tells him to be honest and nice to his praja and dnt follow the path of lies like his father and he leaves with his army .

"mubarik ho maharaja ap ko fateh"says two man in early 20's

"tum dono kabhi baaz nahi atey masti karney se"says Asad

"kya yaar itni baari jeet key baad to haq banta hia hamara "says Ayan his right hand

"aur waisey bhi jeet ki khushi to banti hai asad"says sameer his left hand and best friend

"hmmm…..agar tum dono mera sath na daitey to yeh nahi hota apney pita ko diyey gay dhoka ka badla aj pura hua shukriya tum dono "says Asad

"chal Asad wo hamarey bhi kuch tey hamerey pita ki jagah they aur apney parivar par koi musibat kaisey daik saktey hain hum "says Ayan

"aur waisey bhi hum teeno ik hi to hain phir shukriya kyun "says Sameer

"ab yeh jhoota mooh maat banao aur chalo hath dho lo aur khana khatey hain "says asad with a smile

"bigra rahis ho sachi"says both friends together to asad who turns red after hearing this name

"arre koi laal ho gaya hia yahan sharam se gusse se"says ayan teasing Asad

"nahi ayaan yeh gussa nahi pyar hai kyun asad?"says sameer joining ayan in the fun

"bakwaas maat karo kuch bhi nahi hai chalo ab "says asad trying to avoid the situation although he loves to be called by this name but by only one person his love whom he meet in the mela last time and they became friends but friendship led him to love .he is sacred to admit his love to her .

"asad hum jantey hain sach ab to jeet gaye hian hum yeh yudh ab darr kis baat ka ab ki baar us se miley to keh daina "says sameer put a hand os his shoulder turning asad to face them

"haan asad teri ankhon mein dikta hai ab dair maat karna kehney mein yeh na ho koi aur ley jaye usse "says ayyan giving him a realty check

"nahi"shouts asad

"aisa kabhi nahi hoga wo meri hai sirf meri mein marr jayun ga uskey bina , pata hi nahi chala kab wo ik aam larki se dost aur pyar ban gayi par agar wo nahi samji mere pyar ko to …"says asad

"tu pagal hai asad uski ankhon mein nahi nazar ata hia tujhey "says ayaan

"aur nahi to kiya kitni baar wo baghi apni ghar se sirf tujh se milney key liyey , har waqt tere hi jeet ki dua mangti hai , sirf tujhe sochti hai aur tu kehta hia wo nahi samjhe gi tujhe"says sameer

"sachi wo mujhe apna banaye gi "says asad feeling happy

"apna to tab banaye gi jab tu ussey apney dil ki baat kahey ga "says ayaan

"ji janab jaldi kar ab dair maat karna ghar ja kar ussey sandesh baijna aur wo ajaye tujse milney and phir apni dil ki baat kehna ussey"says sameer

"intazar bara muskil hoga par ab ziyada nahi kuch dino mein wo meri hogi "says asad and hugs both his friends

"chalo merey bohta bhook lagi hai "says ayaan holding his stomach both asad and sameer laughs at him and moves towars their tent to eat dinner

on the same place in the kitchen where the food is cooked a young and a beautiful girl is smiling to herself

and mix something in the food and take the food toward the maharaj tent and serves the food to the the king and his friends

tri take the first bite and shouts for water .after drinking water trio are looking at the girl in the goongat.

"yeh kaisa khana banay hai apne"says ayaan with a little anger

"kiya hua ji khane ko maine too itna acha se banay tha "says the girl

"acha aur yeh apne humney marna ka irada banay tha kiya "says sameer with red due to the spices

"na ji mein kyun marun apko marney ka kiya maza "says the girl

"sach sach batao tumne yeh kyun kiya "says asad sternly

"wo kiya hai maharaj kisi ne humse kaha tha khana aisa bohat swadish hota hia "says the girl

"yeh swadis tha ya zehar ki tarha karva "says asad

the girl take out the ghoongat and says "agar nahi tha to merey khaney mein kyun tum sab ne yeh jhol kiya tha yaad dilaun kiya bigrey rahis "

"zyna tum yahan"says asad with a shock and hugs her tightly

ayaan and sameer are watching them how they hugged each other and are happy been in each others arms

"uho uho "says ayaan and sameer together and asad leaves zyna quickly

both didn't want to embariss asad infront of zyna so they leaves him

"tum yahan kiya karahi ho zyna "says ayaan

"tum ab bhi bewaqoof hi ayaan dikh nahi rahai masti karahi hoon"says zyna and sameer and asad laughs at him

"uska matlab wo nahi zyna par tum is waqt yahan kaisey "says sameer

"tum bhi na sameer sawal bohat pasand hian har waqt sawal kartey ho mein yahan tum sab se milney ayi hoon "says zyna looking at the trio

"kaisey ayi tum jungilli billi"says asad

"bhag kar "says zyna and the trio laughs again at her habbit of running away

"tum phir bhagi mana kiya tha maine ghar par kisko pata chala to kitni dant parey gii tumhey "says asad

"heheheh…….nahi parey gi daadi ne mil kar bhagay hai mujhey "says zyna

"kiya tumhara daadi ney, par bhag kar kyun ayi bata kar nahi asakti thi mehal mein sab ko"says asad

"ijazat lainey mein bohat waqt lag jat aur itna waqt intazar nai kar sakti thi tum sab se milna mein "says zyna

"aur wo kyun "says ayaan knowing why she is here but want to make asad happy

" tum sab ko jeet ki badahi dainey sab se pehly mein hi daina chahti aur waisey bhi mere bina tumhari jeet adhuri hai "says zyna

asad and the other two feels happy for having soo true friendship who doesn't think about her self fisrt but thinks about them and their happiness.

"waise khana kaisa laga maharaj ko "ask zyna with a little mischief

"tum baaz nahi ayo gi apni shaitanion se"says asad with a smile

"na tum sab ko kaisey chor sakti hoon akir haq banta hia mera"says zyna with a giggle

"haq to banta hia"says ayaan and sameer with smirks looking at asad making him red again

"acha chalo khana banwatey hian aur khatey hain "says asad

"ruko uski koi zaroorat nahi hai alisha aur aliya khana layo andhar "says zyna and her friends bring the food inside

"yeh par tumne to khana mein masala diyey they na "says ayaan

"mein zara khan karab nahi kiya tha yeh thora sa mazak kiya tha apna badla liya tha "says zyna and other two girls laughs at them and they also laugh and start enjoying the night .after food they are enjoying the dance of some banjaran .

"zyna janey ki tayari hogayi hai "says aliya in zyna ears but asad hears it

"kahan jarahi ho tum "says asad and every one looks at them

"wapis aur kahan jayun gi "says zyna

"subha mein chor ayun ga par abhi nahi jayo gi thora waqt to bitao na hamery sath"says asad with a puppy face

"badhai daine ayi aur ab jana hia agli baar lambey waqt bitayin gain sath"says zyna with a tease

"nahi aj tum nahi jayo gi mein nahi janey dunga aur yeh mera kahri faisla hai "say asad

"tumhari aj tak kaun si baat maani hai jo aj manun gi"says zyna with a smirk

"mein maharaja asad ahmed khan kabhi haar nahi manta samji"says asad with a smirk other smiles at them as they are back on the jeet track

"ahan…….to yeh baat hai ab to mein jayun gi aur tum mujhey rook nahi payo gaye lagi shart"says zyna to asad

"maharaj wo jotishi ayi hain apse milney abhi"says a sainik

a lady enters in their tent and they all gets very shocked afer listening her new akash vani

Note: hope u all like it and do comment plz

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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds interesting!
do continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice...please continue..would love to read about zoya's story and how asad finds out
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it...!!!👏 Please continue soon and do pm me when you update.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ronnie-

sounds interesting!
do continue 😊

thank you dear 😉
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thank you dear

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