Asya S.S. Irresistible! CH. 5 updated - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Now who is that 'HER'?? Kabab mein haddi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
awesome man!!!
i can't wait for.the next part!!!
i wonder who is her that assad is mentaly talking to him self about hr..
plz i.hope the won't be back
anyways loved it..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww mwah part was suprb part yar hahaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsm yr
M so vry excited abt d play part to get enacted by asad n zoya...
Update soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love it please continue soon :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWWW the way he kissed her dimple was just TOO DAMN CUTE! And now they'll be in the play together! LOVED IT!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res


-------UnRes---------

Thank you soo much for Dedication !!!

Zain & Najma asked so many questions to Them , didn't give a chance to answera them !! And they even started calling them Babbi and jiju !! *so sweet*

Awwwiieee Zain grabbed Najma's hand and left !! * I ship them so much ,they are shoo cute together*

I though Hafza was going to play evil role here but THANK GOD she is not !!

OH MY GODNESS 😲😲😲

He kissed her Dimples OMG that's was cute and romantic !! *Blushing*

"Asad to Zoya : Nice dimples Zoya *He whispered in her ear and left*
Zoya ( thinking ) : He just kiss'd me! his lips ... Sweet... Wait Zoya No No"

Eekkksss I love them so much !!


And on top Zain took picture when Asad was Kissing Zoya, awww thanks to zain they have their first kissed Pic !!

Love how Zain was teasing Asad , keeping on pouting like Mawwhhh :'* and their cute little fight and Asad calling him Chotu*love brothers bonding*

Now who Is that "Her" that remind him of Zoya please yar don't bring anyone between Them :'/ !!!

HahhHahahah Zain is soo funny Asad Kisses his teddy bear !! 🤣🤣

Yeshh yeshh yeshh PM Choose Asad and zoya for play !! *again thanks to Zain and Najma*

Awww Zoya the story for Najma and zain!!<3*soo sweet na*but Everything went wrong !!

Can't wait for next update and play !
Once again thank you soo much for dedication !!

Sophia <3


Edited by sarun314 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
awesomeee...can't wait!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww it was such a cute update...
eagerly waiting to see h wwill asad n zoya agree to do the role...
thx fr the pm...please continue sooon...
eagerly waiting fr the next update...
Edited by jazsidhu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Hey guys <3
This is the last chapter for Irresistible
Thanks for supporting me and giving me lovely comments
Dedicated to alll offf youuu readers <3
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Zoya : NO!
Najma : Zoya? What's wrong? Are you okay?
Zoya : Najma ... c-c-can you come here for a while?
Najma : sure
Zoya whispered in Najma's ear : Najma yaar... Asad'll kiss Zoya!!
Najma : What?
Zoya : I mean .. In the story ...
Najma : so what? He kiss'd you yesterday too
Zoya : W-W-What? You saw everything?
*Zoya was shocked as hell*
Najma : Duh! Everyone could see you not only me, Hafza or Zain.
Najma ignored Zoya's reaction and went up to Asad and said :
*Hey Asad ... You guys should go, Pm's calling you two*
*Zoya and Asad left*
Najma : Zainnn!!!!!
Zain : What? Why are you so excited???
Najma : it's about the story! Asad and Zoya -
Zain : wait, before you tell me somwthing new and surprising, let me call Hafza as she's one of us too
Najma : o-okay
Najma ( thinking ) : Hafza?What the heck! Can't I just tell you everything now? She's one of us... my foot! Anyways sorry Hafza ...
*Zain saw Najma's face and smiled*
Zain ( thinking ) : Perfect! her name suits her ... Tamatar! Look at her face it's all red + she's pouting, she looks cute!!!
Zain : Najma
Najma : Hmm
Zain : tell me what you were going to tell me
Najma : but you said Hafza -
Zain : she's not picking up her phone
Zain ( thinking ) : I lied for Najma ... ? Wow
Najma : okay.. So it's that ( in the story) Asad will KISS Zoya!!! And that's why Zoya was shocked after she found out they're the main characters in the story!
Zain : Really? OMG WOW -
Hafza : what's going on?
*Zain told him everything and both of them hugg'd each other*
Najma ( thinking ) : i'm one of them too, then why didn't they hug ME?
Najma was busy thinking about how left out she was feeling and didnt realize someone had hugg'd her! She looked up and saw Zain smiling at her
Zain : Ur one of us, so here's a hug for you
Najma ( thinking ) : Did I say it out loud? No I didn't right? then how did he? Oh I get it!! Heart communication! God Najma stop it U R Day-dreaming! ( As usual )
*On the other side*
PM : Zoya and Asad... You guys are going to perform right?
Asad & Zoya : Yes ma'am
PM : So I want you to start choosing the other characters and I want you guys to make it musical, get it? Add some dance!
Zoya ( thinking ) : Dance? Does that mean I'm going to dance with Asad???
Asad : Um, When will we start practicing?
PM : after you find out who are the characters.
Zoya : Okay Ma'am
PM : tht's it. You may leave now
Zoya : Thank you Ma'am
*Zoya and Asad left*
Zoya : Asad, do you know how to dance?
Asad : Not that much, why?
Zoya : who will be our dance teacher then-
Hafza : I'll be your dance teacher.
Zain : Yup, Hafza's good at dancing! Like really good!
Zoya : Sure :)
Zain ( thinking ) : Wow PM made it easier for us!
Zoya : So, let's go to the cafeteria and decide who are the main characters. Najma, Zain and Hafza, please help us.
Najma : i'll be back
*Najma left*
Zain : Um, you guys go ahead i've something to do
*Zain left*
Zoya : So let's start practicing
*On the other side*
(Zain went to check if there was a letter today. As he went, he saw Najma standing there, putting a letter into his locker)
Zain : N-N-Najma?
Najma : Zain?
Zain : ( shocked ) it's y-y-you?
Najma : ( nervously ) Ah no... I ... What are you talking about?
Zain : You're the one who gives me letters and stuff...
Najma : Letter? whatare you talking bout?
Zain : Please Najma tell me the truth
Najma : I-I-I * she took a deep breath* and said ... Yup... It's mee...
Zain came towards her, Najma got scared as she thought he'd be really disappointed. Najma : Zain I'm so-
Najma was going to say something but something left her speechless, Someone hugg'd her, Z-Z-Zain? He hugged her
Zain : I love you
Najma: what?!
Zain: thanks for writing to me! I love reading them
Najma: so... Your.. Telling me that you dont mind its me?
Zain: ofcourse not! Infact im happy that it turned out to be you.. I guess i was feeling something for you.
Najma: za-in!!!!! (she hugged him) im so happy
Zain: calm down najma!

On the other side, hafza was teaching asad how to dance while zoya watched them in jealousy.

Hafza: not like this asad! its like..(dancing with him while teaching the step) this do u get it? After this, do the sway with ur partner okay?
Asad: okay..
Hafza: okay now i'll teach you the next step..
Zoya: hafza dont you think i should be the one dancing with asad since i'm his partner?
Hafza smiled and said : sure why not?

Zoya went to asad while taking his hand in hers and placed it on her waist. She placed her left hand on his shoulder and grips his other hand in hers.

Asad: are you jealous zoya?
Zoya: why would i be jealous? I just wanted to learn the steps.
Asad: ahan?

He once again did the steps wrong and hafza came to them complaining about asad is doing the wrong step again and that she'll teach him

Zoya: dont worry hafza. I'll teach him you can go if u r getting late.
Hafza: Um, okay then i'll be going then.

*Hafza left*

Asad: why did you send that poor girl away, she was just trying to teach.
Zoya: poor girl? Did you see how she was coming closer to you. That not teaching okay ! she was just taking a chance!
Asad: come on admit it zoya!
Zoya: admit what?
Asad: that you are jealous.
Zoya: jealous of what?
Asad: other girls coming near me.
Zoya: no
Asad: yes jealous
Zoya:no
Asad: yes jealous
Zoya:no!
Asad: no
Zoya: yes jealous!

Then she realized that she just blurt out the truth...
Asad: ahan! Gotcha! You are jealous!
Zoya turned red and started blusing.

Asad: you're blushing?
Zoya: no...
Asad: Zoya i feel like kissing you

Zoya was so shocked at his sudden outburst but was quite happy hearing that. While asad was afraid she would reject him so he didnt wait for reply and kissed her.She felt in heaven when he kissed her. He pulled her near by her wrist and deepen the kiss. She moved her hand to his neck and then in his hair. They were pulling each other closer and frantically kissing eachother as if it ended, their life would end.
They draw back from each other and smiled. He gave her a light kiss once again and a larger curve formed on her face this time. He knew she was enjoying this which means she feels for him.

'Aham aham' they heard some voices behind them. As they turned, they saw zain and najma standing there holding hands.

Asad: what are you both doing here?
Zain : Najma came here to practice, and as we came.. Hmm something caught outr attention
Zoya: Um... aham! I can see someone holding hands...
Najma : zoya... Woh...
Zoya : me and asad are girlfriend boyfriend so we can do anything we want but i dont see why you guys are holding hands..
Zain : Najma is MY girlfriend so why cant i hold her hand?
Asad : girlfriend? Since when? Why didnt you tell me?
Zain : chill bro! It just happened.
Asad : Ookay? lets go for dinner. The four of us together.
Zain : nahh.. You enjoy.. I want to spend some time alone with my tamatar.
Zoya : ahan! Najma so u r rejecting me? Your best friend?
Najma : nahi zoya I-
Asad : it's okay, I want to spend some time alone with Zoya too, you guys go ahea
Zain: okay then we'll get going..
Zoya : See you! Have fun!

*Zain and najma left*

Asad : so...
Zoya : so?
Asad : where do you want to go?
Zoya : anywhere
Asad : okay, lets go
Zoya: so? Were are you taking me?
Asad : somewhere..

*He took her to the beach*

Asad: zoya take off ur shoes.
Zoya:why?
Asad: just do as i say...

Both of them took of their shoes and placed them aside. They were standing watching the sea. Asad slip his hand in hers and enfold her hands in his. She looked at their hands and then towards asad who was giving a bright smile. He lead her towards the water while holding her hand.

Asad : lets play a game...
Zoya: what game?
Asad : any game..
Zoya : truth-truth game?
Asad : sure..

Zoya: you go ahead first.
Asad: you remind of someone
Zoya:who?
Asad:no questions yet. Your turn
Zoya: i felt happy when zain and najma teased us even though we were not togther.
Asad: the day I met you, I started believing in love at first sight
*Zoya smiled and said*
Zoya: i didnt know that you exist when I wrote the story, and the day I wrote the story, I unexpectedly met you
Asad: question time. What do you want to ask?
Zoya: who do i remind you of?
Asad kept quiet for a few minutes, he said :
Asad: my ex-girlfriend..

Zoya P.O.V:

What does that mean? Does that mean he doesn't love me? Is he interested in me just because I remind him of her?

He saw the sadness on her face and instantly, he knew he had to tell her that he loves her before she leaves. She was about to let go of his hand but he didnt allow her instead he held it more tighter and pulled her closer.

Asad: she's dead Zoya ... its not like what you are thinking. I'm not interested in you because you remind me of her- maybe yes that was what I thought before but not anymore. You are different. You are not her and thats why i love you. I love you the way you are., just the way you are.

He truned and saw tears in her eyes.

Asad: im sorry but i didnt wanted to lie to you. I dont want our relationship to start with a lie. I-

But before he could give his further explanations, she hugged him tighly and he hugged her back.

Zoya: thank u for telling me the truth Asad... Im happy that you didnt hide anything from me. 'She smiled at him'

She draws back and free him from the hug. They gaze at each other with 64 inch smile on their faces. He slid his arms through hers and hugged her while she moved hers around his neck. He place his forehead with hers and slowly leaned in further to smach he lips with his.

The day passed like this, they were holding each other's hand and talking about how they felt about one another when they met for the first time.

*On the other side*

Zain : Tamatar
Najma : Hmm
Zain : When did you started liking me?
Najma : remember when you saved me on the first day of college ?
Zain : Yeah and ?
Najma : and I started liking you from then onwards
Zain : the first day of school? Why didn't you tell me directly instead of writing letters to me?
Najma : I thought you wouldn't like me as i'm not that beautiful
Zain : who said so? You're the second most beautiful girl in this world.
Najma : second? Who's the first one? Is it Hafza?
Zain : Hafza ? *He laughed* why do you think it's Hafza?
Najma : you don't love her?
Zain : No and idiot, the 1st most beautiful women in this world is my mom, who can it be besides you?
*Najma smiled and hugged him*
Najma : I love you
Zain kissed her forehead and replied : I love you more :)

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That's it peeps!!! <3
Hope you lik'd it <3
Thank you sooo muchhh once again <3

Alien <3 ( my name's Asma btw )

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