AsYa FF: Together at last [part 12 updated+note]

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

OMG THIS WAS SUPER AMAZING!

Zara is such a cutie being all 'im not talking to you' 😆

Zara and Asad met and Zara didnt really like him, eh? Oops...

Asad Zoy met! Omg! Poor Zoya :(

Loved it the whole rain feel!

Update soon-ish, Far! 🤗

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

good one...waiting eagerly for asad and zoya to meet..

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vibha01

@vibha01

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

wow... it was superb !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

waitin for the next part...

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Laiba

@-Laiba-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

nahiii!!! u cant leave us hanging like tht -_-" all u writers are hangers u_u'! im nt tlking to any of u again nw !!!!! but thr part was fantastic! very new and freshh :) continue soon

love, Laiba

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Sophia

@sophie420

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

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Far, This is really your first SS? Cause this is just AMAZING!!!

Read all 4 chapters and loved it!

Loved the following lines:

"Only pedophile's go to the park and Go On Slides. What' wrong with you Imaan" 😆

"Yeah, the floor, where the fun's at, the other floors are boring" He said stretching the word boring.

"Okay'" Asad said as he looked straight ahead, but his eyes showed he was still confused.

* That moment when you don't understand what your friend means; but at the same time don't want to know more about it!

"You can't say the S word in front of little kids" She said

* I had a similar incident with a kid, except a different word, know how it feels!

And Are you a stalker? I love Zaara, she is so cute!!!

And it took me a second to understand what the LO and VE tattoo meant, and the picture made a clear understanding! I was too focused with cutey Zaara and the rest of the SS to pay complete attention to the tattoo!

And Asad and Zoya's meeting...😲

I live in NY too and I remeber how rainy it was a few days ago! Worst Weather!

Continue soon and do pm me when you update!

~Sophie :)

Edited by sophie420 - 12 years ago