#1 AsYa(KaBhi)FF: Fallen in the Trap of Love (link to #2 pg 148)

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Aashka

@Chillichick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

loved it though it was a heartbreaking one...! Fab portrayal of emotions...! eagerly awaiting d next..! ;)

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Ramya dear what have you done...

You've made me an emotional wreck😭😭

Your writing was brilliant👏 every scene touched a cord in me...

The flashback with Rashid leaving Dilshaad was superb...

This left me shattered just as the title of this chapter suggested...Awesome...Just super Awesome...

You know...I actually could feel Asad's turmoil and Zoya's pain...I felt like grabbing something and squeezing the life out of it

You left me in awe dear👍🏼

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rhythmsangh

@rhythmsangh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

no zoya deserves then why so cruel with her???

but nice update

waiting for ur next 1 also

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

a superb update...

zoya deserve to know the truth...

the precap is amazing...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx for the pm n do pm me for the next part...

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

very good update..continue soon...😊

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@Shona1493

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

amazing update

😊

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Revelio

@Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI
u r back with a bang😃
superb update ramya👏
each line and word was written very well
the way u write emotions
it was soo real
whole scene played before my eyes when i read them
asad proved that he s soo stupid,dump and a man without mind and heart😡😆
flashback is amazing👏
rashid🤬
he deserves hell😡
Asad, sometimes, people who we love, leave us. They betray us. We can't always have everything that we want in our lives. We have to make sacrifices at one point of our life, or the other. We can't run away from destiny.
well said by dilshad👏
emotional update
asad ruined his life
and tanveer again suceeded in her plan
do cont soon😃

Thank u so much aditi!

I finally feel like I'm back home 😃

I'm so glad that I was able to make u feel what I wantes u to. That's something that every writer wants and I finally feel like I've got to that point. I was grinning like an idiot while reading ur comment 😃.

Whatever u said abt Asad, that is word. 😆

Oh Tanveer, never mind her, she's always whooping when she thinks her plan has suceeded but then the next minute it turns to be the world's biggest and most embarrassing flop 😆.

Thnx again :)

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Revelio

@Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187
That was Superb but Sad update..
Y is Asad doing this with her..
Whats her fault if her father is Ghafoor Ahmed Siddiqui?
Precap is interesting..
Continue soon..
Thnx for PM..

Thank u! :)
Basically, Asad isn't using his brain and as usual, his mind reached to his mouth b4 his heart cud and he spoke absolute hogwash...as usual 😆. N when his heart reaches his mouth, he's gonna be like, "damn, what have I done? I really need to apologize to ms. Farooqui. "...as usual 😆.

Urghh, I just realized I've been spelling ghafoor as gaffur all the while, curse my spelling. I only noticed that I'd made that mistake after seeing ur spelling, so thnx for that 😳.

N thank u again! :)

-Mariam-