#1 AsYa(KaBhi)FF: Fallen in the Trap of Love (link to #2 pg 148)

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treasure11

@treasure11

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

Amazing update dear !!!!

The asad - ayan scene was well written !!!!!👍🏼

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-RM-

@-RM-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Waiting for good things to happen :(

Ps. It was written beautifully. The pain.

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

u r back with a bang😃

superb update ramya👏

each line and word was written very well

the way u write emotions

it was soo real

whole scene played before my eyes when i read them

asad proved that he s soo stupid,dump and a man without mind and heart😡😆

flashback is amazing👏

rashid🤬

he deserves hell😡

Asad, sometimes, people who we love, leave us. They betray us. We can't always have everything that we want in our lives. We have to make sacrifices at one point of our life, or the other. We can't run away from destiny.

well said by dilshad👏

emotional update

asad ruined his life

and tanveer again suceeded in her plan

do cont soon😃

Edited by CHOCOSWATHI - 11 years ago

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DancingBell

@DancingBell

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Poor Zoya...Asad too...but what he is doing is not right...

Waiting for next update...

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: snehasya
HE IS doing injustice to her she has the right to know and what did she meant by shell be gone forever
cliffy situations I hope he sees beyond hatred his love for her is much more than his hate for her father

I know, he's being an absolute idiot but soon he'll regret it.:)

And abt the gone forever part, that u gotta wait and see 😉

Like I said before, I wasn't planning on ending a 20 chapter story on a sad note.😳