NEW UPDT - SS - Asad's proposal pg8 pt 3

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Divi.C

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

GOSHHH...ITS SUPERB.. I LIKE THI NEW AAK...

CONTINUE SOON... JST CANT WAIT FOR NEXT..

NOW ASAD WILL LIE 4 KISSES... HAHAHAHAH...

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Santhosh Banda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

"Zoya was astounded...did they clone you without the Akdu and tehzeeb gene in you??? she countered."

Hahaha.. That Was Damm Good.. Awesome Update...

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Alveena12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

hahaha this is so cute...i love this side to Asad, please update soon and pm me when you do

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a.sharma

@a.sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

OMG... MA ... superb ... dis is jst awsm... keep updatting frequently... eagerly waiting for ur nxt part... i jst luv dis AAk nw... 😊 even our usualy bold zoe went weak... 😉

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Tanupreet Kaur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

it was splendid but somehow felt it wasn't entirely u.. ur writing style is a bit different or may b im thinking to much.. it was grt..:)

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

That was so sweet that Asad brought Zoya back to the meteor shower place !! This two are so cute together and Tanveer has no freaking clue what's really going on, it's so funny !!

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Prajakta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

hey, nice story. plz update soon and pm me if possible.

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Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Wow! Wat a story..read all the three parts. I m loving it. Hope u update the next part soon.

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Excellent Update!

Loved it to bits! ❤️

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Sunshine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Aphroditefallen
it was splendid but somehow felt it wasn't entirely u.. ur writing style is a bit different or may b im thinking to much.. it was grt..:)

hahaha you got me there...

it was never meant to be more than an OS. Part 2 and3 just happened...no plot there really that's why it feels the way it does...

Want to take a breather from daily life and write something more in the lines of Winding Down With Zoya..not right now though.

Thank you for liking my work and keeping me honest!