Dilshaad-Asad Conversation: with translation Uptd - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I wouldn't have changed a word of what you have penned. THIS is exactly the way I want it - realistic, Asad-like and just what we want Dilshad to say to her son. We know and she should too that Asad will prolly say the opposite of what he feels specially after Zoya's last words of clearing any 'such notions' from his head. That memory still fresh and his own denial mode will lead him to refuse Zoya and I want Dilshad to reply the way you have written so to bring Asad to realization.
Well written. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Allah miyan Mein dua karoongi that this only happens :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bheegi👍🏼..you are such an optimist...such a sweet and beautiful scene...👏🤗


Dilshaad: wondering *why do I only get idiot men in my life ...this bloody Rashid...the darned khamoshi gene...git*

"bolo na bolo na Asad ...mohobbat nahin kartein"

Zoya: thinking * Mr.Khan...joker...say it out or I'll smack you hard*

Asad: thinking * she's such a hawtie, and...much smarter than I am, technology savvy..way more than I can hope to be..she even knows how to laugh...wonder how that feels...*

"woh actually "

Zoya : * phir se woh air actually * "phuphi. toss kartein hain"

Dilshaad : *knows secretly Asad will cheat* "haan haan"

Tanveer : she gives up...* rolls eyes* *he'll cheat again *

Asad : so excited he doesn't have to do anything and he'll get what he wants yet again * yes yes..where is the khota sikka *

Toss...happens...Asad cheats... nikaah of A and Z settled

"Asad Ahmed Khan kya aapko Zoya Faarooqui Qubool hai?"
"woh actually..."



Edited by qhid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome di...i wish you could be writer...you have an awesome writing streak in you...can say that from your ffs :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh bheegi...loved it...loved it so much...
Can I hug u for writing this?
U really lifted my spirits with this..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very possible prediction di. Asad kinda agreed that he loves but fears so its not as bad. I love how tannu mam is not in picture at all!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: bheegi

Dilshaad-Asad Conversation : Our Versions

As we all anxiously anticipate the mother-son conversation tomorrow, why don't we all write a short OS? Would love to hear everyone's thoughts and versions on this..

My Version:

As seen in the promo, Asad, Dilshaad and Tanu have returned from the wedding banquet, while Najma and Zoya are still on their way.

"Asad, mujhey sach sach batao, kya tum Zoya se pyaar nahin karte?'

Asad turns his head away.

"Tumney Zoya ko anghoothi pehnayi hai Asad, kya tum us se mohabbat nahin karte?"

An emotional Asad is about to reply, but then notices Zoya and Najma walk through the front door. Zoya's last words still echo in head, "I am not mad!"

"NAHIN! MAIN ZOYA SE MOHABBAT NAHIN KARTA!" He replies vehemently and walks away from the living room, shutting his bedroom door behind him. Dilshaad notices the color drain from Zoya's face. Obviously, she has heard his answer.

In a corner, Tanveer beams victoriously. Razia's observation notwithstanding, she has again found an open door to finagle her way into Asad's life.

Zoya, heartbroken, runs off to her room without uttering a word. A tearful Najma can't believe what she just heard. Bhaijaan couldn't have said that. She has seen them together; they are always so oblivious to everyone around them when they are together- of course they are in love.

Dilshaad takes a deep breath. She is seething with anger but is not convinced with Asad's answers.

She follows Asad to his room.

"ASAD!"

Asad stood near the window, pensive and tearful. Shireen's insults, ammi's pledge about his nikaah and then her question about Zoya have plagued his mind. Ammi's word is like an order from Allah but his mind doesn't want to give in; how can he act against his principles?

"Ammi?" He turned around, "ab bahut raat ho gayi hai, aap please so jaaiye."

"Nahin Asad. Jab tak tum mere sawaal ka jawaab nahin doge, main na tho so paaungi, aur na hi chain se baith paaungi."

"Ammi, maine aapko apna jawaab de diya hai." He averted his gaze and stared outside the window.

"GALAT! Merei aankhon mein aankhein daal kar bolo Asad. Tumhari zubaan kuch bhi kahe, lekin main tumhari aankhon mein sach dekhna chaahti hoon."

"Ammi, aap tho janti hain, main mohabbat jaise jazbaton mein yakeen nahin rakhta."

"Yakeen rakhte nahin ya yakeen rakhna nahin chaahte?" She pulled his arm and forced him to have eye contact with her.

"Ammi! Aap jazbaaton mein beh rahi hain. Please calm down and think about it."

"Asad, kya tum apni ammi ki baat poori nahin karoge? Dekha na tumne, un logon ne kaise tumhari ammi ki bhari mehfil mein be izzati ki aaj?"

"Jaanta hoon ammi, lekin aap hi tho kehti hain ki aise logon ko mooh nahin lagaana chaahiye."

"Aaj unhonein mere bachchon par ungli uthaai hai Asad! Mujhey wo kuch bhi keh lein, lekin main apne bachchon ki be izzati kabhie nahin she sakti. Asad, I need an answer."

"Ammi'k-kya aapne Ms Farooqui se poocha hai? Wo tho is sagai ko bhi nakli samajhti hain."

"Na tum is sagai ko nakli samajhte ho, aur na wo."

"Yeh aap kaise keh sakti hain ammi?"

"Jo ladki apne nikaah se bhaag sakti hai, wo anghoothi tabhi pehnegi jab wo us rishte ko sachcha maane."

"Wo tho unhone visa ke liye.."

"Wo tumhein lagta hai Asad. Kya tumne kabhie yeh jaan ne ki koshish ki hai ki wo Hindustan mein kyun rehna chaahti hai? Ab tho uske abbu ka kissa bhi khatam ho gaya. Tho phir kyun?"

"A-apke aur Najma ke liye."

"Asad! Shayad tum ek aurat ka dil kabhie nahin samajh paaoge."

"Ammi'Zoya is ghar ke liye theek nahin hai! Her values are different, uske sochne ka tareeka, uska rehen sehen hamari family mein nahin chalega."

"Yeh tumhara sochna na hai Asad. Lekin main jaanti hoon ki agar koi ladki is ghar ki bahu ban ne le laayak hai tho wo hai Zoya. Wo bhi tumse be inteha mohabbat karti hai. Maine uski aankhon mein dekha hai. Uski subah tum se shuru hoti hai, aur shaam bhi tumhare liye hi hoti hai. Deewani hai wo tumhari Asad."

Asad is stunned but comes back with a retort.

"Ammi'lekin'aap tho jaanti hain, main nahin chaahta ki uski zindagi bhi aap ki tarah'..." He paused.

"Meri tarah akeli reh jaaye?" She taunted him.

He remained silent.

"Jaante ho Asad, tumhare abbu ne 17 saal pehle jo bhi kiya ho, jis wajah se bhi kiya ho, mujhey iska jawab nahin chaahiye, lekin itna zaroor jaanti hoon ki unhone mujhse sachchi mohabbat ki thi'aur shayad ab bhi karte hain. Mujhey chhod kar unki zindagi mein na tho mohabbat hai, aur na hi khushi. Wo tho ek zinda laash hain Asad. Tabhie tho sirf chup rehte hain ab. Jaise unki zubaan hi kisi ne kheech lee ho. Kya tum bhi aise gumnaami ki zindagi jeena chaahte ho Asad?"

"Ammi..yeh aap kya keh rahi hain? I don't understand all this."

"Shayad samjhoge bhi nahin, kyunki sachchi mohabbat ki value tabhie pata chalti hai, jab hum usey kho dete hain. Zoya ki mohabbat ko thukra kar tumne aaj yeh saabit kar diya hai ki tum Janab Rashid Ahmed Khan ke hi bte ho!"

"AMMI!" Asad yelled in anger, "aap meri tulna unse kar rahi hain? Jinhonein humein siva gham ke kuch nahin diya?" Ammi had touched a sore chord.

"Kyunki tum bhi wo hi karne jaa rahe ho Asad."

Dilshaad turned around and walked to the door.

Asad followed her and placed his hand on her shoulder, 'ammi'.please inform Zoya's aapi and jiju'.main is nikaah ke liye tayyar hoon."

'...please feel free to write your versions..




Very nice Bheegi! Wish the CVs would show such a discussion between mom and son. I have a feeling a lot will remain unsaid tomorrow. Don't have your writing skills to predict any different!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣

Originally posted by: qhid

Bheegi👍🏼..you are such an optimist...such a sweet and beautiful scene...👏🤗


Dilshaad: wondering *why do I only get idiot men in my life ...this bloody Rashid...the darned khamoshi gene...git*

"bolo na bolo na Asad ...mohobbat nahin kartein"

Zoya: thinking * Mr.Khan...joker...say it out or I'll smack you hard*

Asad: thinking * she's such a hawtie, and...much smarter than I am, technology savvy..way more than I can hope to be..she even knows how to laugh...wonder how that feels...*

"woh actually "

Zoya : * phir se woh air actually * "phuphi. toss kartein hain"

Dilshaad : *knows secretly Asad will cheat* "haan haan"

Tanveer : she gives up...* rolls eyes* *he'll cheat again *

Asad : so excited he doesn't have to do anything and he'll get what he wants yet again * yes yes..where is the khota sikka *

Toss...happens...Asad cheats... nikaah of A and Z settled

"Asad Ahmed Khan kya aapko Zoya Faarooqui Qubool hai?"
"woh actually..."




Hilarious! 🤣🤣 Especially the toss part and the last line!! LMAO!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bheegi, you've beautifully penned it down. It is really touching and sweet 😊 I would love to see something along the similar lines on the show tomorrow, like a heartfelt conversation between the mother and son.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: webuser7

🤣


Hilarious!🤣🤣Especially the toss part and the last line!! LMAO!



😆 what to do... have to look for fun in life and TV heroes.. No? 🤗
Logging off... Thora kaam+ masti ( the real life kind ) kar loon you know yeh bhi actually Karna padta hain.
Edited by qhid - 12 years ago

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