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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: irock321

OMG! Please make this better!!! I'm so sad but awesome chapter! Loved it! Hate Tanveer ...she NEEDS to die! -.-

i promise, i will make it up to you in the next chapter... i wont let anything seperate my AsYa😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Alveena12

i was happy at the beginning of the FF when they were acting all lovey dovey...but at the end that was just heart breaking...i can't believe that they got seperated, i really hope they get back together

amazing update, i loved the way you wrote the arguement between his mind and heart...please update soon and pm me when you do, thank you 😊

I am a big fan of happy ending stories.😃 I wont seperate AsYa.😃 they will surely get back together...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jassieg

Wow..wat a update. I hope Dilshad and Nazma tell asad that zoya isn't wrong. She was doing the right thing. I hope asad realizes soon.


Very happy that Dilshad and Nazma stood up for themselves. Good earful to Rashid. I hope they leave that place and have the rest of them suffer.

Can't wait for the next update. Plz post soon.

👏👏 👏👏

I always wanted Dilshad and Najma to speak up... so this chapter was for them😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi everyone,
Thank you all for your constant support and encouragement...🤗 it kept me going. there is only two more chapter left...😭 so enjoy this chapter.
Chapter 8: Revelations

It's been hours that Asad had locked himself up in Zoya's room. The anger in was replaced by the excruciating pain in his heart as he sat down relieving all those beautiful memories he spend with her. Her face, her voice, her hair, her big eyes, her long eyelashes, her perfect nose, her rosy lips, her red cheeks' in the morning he thought, that day was the most beautiful day in his life and it turned out to be the worst day. Frustrated, he kicked the cardboard box lying near him. The box opened and all the items inside got scattered here and there. Amongst that, a diary caught his attention.

With shaking hands, he took the diary in which her name was written. He slowly opened the pages. Wiping out the tears which clouded his visions he sat down reading the diary.

"Dear Diary,

You know what? Today is a special day. In fact, the most special day. Today is Eijas's birthday. He turned to 27 today. Can you believe it? I know he was feeling lonely today as I was not with him. What to do? I am stuck here in NY. I really wanted to go but the last minute's assignments spoiled my plan. He is angry with me now but I promise you by next week I will give him the biggest surprise. After all, I am his little sister. I really miss Abbu and Ammi today. If they were with us' I know I know, I am not supposed to cry' As Eijas say, I am supposed to be smiling thinking about Ammi and Abbu rather than crying' you know why? Because God loves my Ammi and Abbu more than anyone else, that's why he took them with him. So it calls for happiness nah?

I want to see Eijas and Grandma. It's been one long year I had been to India. And that stupid is not coming here as he is stuck in his NGO work. Last time when I spoke with him about the NGO, he seemed stressed. Next time when I see him, I will kick him hard to remind him to take a chill pill' hi hi'it is lame' I know that' now I gotta go sweetie' Time to sleep"

Great!!! So Zoya have a brother!!! And she told him that she have no one, remembered an enraged Asad. He flipped the pages roughly throwing all the anger on the poor dairy. His gaze stopped at the next entry.

"Dear Diary,

Today I reached India to give a surprise visit to my brother and grandma. And guess what? It's me who got the surprise' for the past one week I got no call or email form him and the stupid me thought that he was angry with me for not coming to India for his birthday. So in order to plan for this surprise I decided to not call back. And here I am standing in front of or house in India not knowing what to do. You must be confused as to what happened right? Even I am also confused. They say that my brother is in jail for the past one week and my grandma died three days before' what is happening? I don't know' I feel terrible' today I cried and cried and fallen asleep' I couldn't see my grandma. Somebody found her dead in the road' I don't know what to do' what happened to my brother' why he is in jail' I tried talking to police, but they are not answering me'. I yelled at them, but they threatened me' what should I do now' I have no one to ask help'. How will I save my brother? Abbu, Ammi'. Help me' show me the way'"

He could feel her pain in those words. He knew she was crying while writing this as the tears had smudged some of the ink. He started reading the next entry.

"Dear Diary,

Today I came to know what happened with my brother. I spoke with Nayab who was my brother's colleague in that NGO. They had been constantly in loggerheads with The Khans. Khans are the most powerful family in Bhopal. Even though they look clean outside they are no less than criminals it seems. My brother was leading a campaign against them and he got some evidences which will break the entire Khan Empire. And being the cruelest persons they were, they trapped him in a murder case and send him in jail. His friends spoke with many lawyers and none was ready to help' what is happening to this world'.here my brother is suffering for something which he hasn't done and there Khans are enjoying their life' I decided, I will go to Khans and get all the proof against them' I will prove the world that my brother is innocent and Khans are nothing but criminals' All I have in this world is my brother' I will save him even if it means that I have to risk my life also'"

As he flipped the pages to see the next entry his eyes caught a particular page. There his name, Asad was written in bold letters in red ink.

"Dear Diary,

Life is soo strange na' today I was able to get into Khan mansion. And that too because of Asad' Asad... he changed my preconceived notion about the Khans. Not every Khan is bad... Despite being the first son of Rashid Ahmed Khan, Asad is the most lovable person I have ever met till now. For a moment when I thought that I will die without fulfilling my mission, he came as a knight in shining armor and saved me' saved me and how? He kissed me' in front of his family' even though I hate to admit it; my first kiss was beautiful'. I was lost in some other world and for a moment I forgot that why I came here. Hmm' anyways, much to my shock, he called me by name and announced that I am his lover. I knew something was cooking in his mind and played along' when at last we reached the guest room my rational brain kicked in and I started yelling at him when I knew he was right' but I was really confused at how he knows my name and place. His explanation left me stunned' I couldn't help but to stare at those hypnotic hazel eyes. Our eye locking was disturbed when his Ammi and sister came. Dilshad Phoopi is the most wonderful mother I have ever met. And Najma, she is a gem. I know I am not supposed to feel this, but I felt soo guilty lying to them' Focus Zoya Focus' you have to save your brother' I don't know why, but I have a gut feeling that this is not going to be that easy'"

Asad's eyes lit up as he recalled their first encounter. So her first kiss was with him' he couldn't help but to smile at this revelation. His eyes stopped at the last entry in the diary.

"Dear diary,

I am scared for Asad'I don't know what to tell you'I know he will learn my secret one day, because I will myself reveal that to him. I don't want to keep him in dark anymore. I didn't want to lie to him, but I had to. All for my brother. I have only him in this whole world. I have to save him Asad' I have to' but I am scared to tell him as he is Rashid Ahmed Khan's son' which son will help a girl who is trying to gather proof against his own father even if the father is guilty.

Will he forgive me? Will he love me back the way I love him? Yeah, you heard it correct. I am in love with Asad' I am hopelessly, helplessly and irrevocably in love with him. How I wish to have him in my life! He will hate me if he comes to know about my secret'but his love is worth the risk' Tomorrow I am going to meet Nayab as he told me that he has some important information to share. And I know, Asad will come looking for me... I will tell him everything while coming back'. I wish he will forgive me' otherwise' I can't withstand the thought even'. Pray for me' and wish me luck' Love you Asad... always will'"

He closed the diary not able to withstand the pain. So she didn't betray him. He remembered she tried telling him something in the car and how he shut her by kissing. Only if he listen her that time, he would have never hurt her like this. He doubted her love. He thought she cheated on him' why didn't he see the love in her eyes? Why did he believe what her father told him? Was last night not enough for him to understand her truly? He started crying like a kid as realization drowned on him that he had send her to death.

Dilshad found his son drowned in grief. She had never seen his son broken like this, even when Rashid married for the second time. She slid down next to her son. Asad looked at her and fallen down to her lap hugging her tightly.

"Ammi' I didn't believe Zoya Ammi' she didn't betray me' she was doing all this to save her brother'. She really does love me Ammi' what have I done' I send her away'"

Dishad cupped Asad's face.

"Asad' You do love Zoya, right?"

He nodded in conformation.

"Go get her son'"

And he knew what he had to do' he had to act fast' Now or Never'.

Edited by rosamale - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Man m so happy I have stalked it and saw you have updated.
Loved it. Loved the diary entries. Poor zoya went through so much eh
I hope asad will go run aftr her
😊
Edited by jazmeen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just saw your pm thank u sending me the pm love
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jazmeen

R
Yayyu first one to comment

Man m so happy I have stalked it and saw you have updated.
Loved it. Loved the diary entries. Poor zoya went through so much eh
I hope asad will go run aftr her
😊

😆😆😆I am also a stalker of some ffs. so i can understand the feeling😉
I happy to know that you liked it. i know this chapter doesnt contain any AsYa moments but next update will be an emotional rollercost ride😳 it will have every elements.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnx to dairy...othrws asad judgemental behaviour vl dfntly ruin all thngs...

very nice update dear...luking fr nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW that was awesome
now your such a cliffy
just loved this part especially the diary entries shows us about zoya's past through asad that is amazing
plz plz plz plz continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was... Breathtaking. How he learns about her and understands every part of her charade, little by little with every entry.

Cant wait for the next part :)

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