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DISCLAIMER – QH and its characters belong to 4lions and I'm merely playing with the characters! This OS belongs to me and anyone before copying the SS, idea or plot will have to take proper permission from --starstruck--(Sadie)

Part 2 –

"Bhabhi inse milliye, yeh hai Zoya, Rashid ke kisi friend ki rishtedar kucch dino ke liye yahan rahengi." Shireen introduced Zoya to Razia.

"Salamwalekum." Zoya looked at Razia, she didn't know why but Razia looked very familiar to her, as if she had seen her somewhere.

"Walekumasalam."

"Jee kya maine aapko pehle kabhi dekha hai?" Zoya asked.

"Kya? A-a-aisa kaise h-ho sakta hai." she stammered. How can this girl remember her? She was very small when she must've seen her.

Zoya tried to go back in the past to know where she had seen her but nothing came in her mind. She continued to stare at her waiting for something which would tell her why she looked so familiar.

She could hear a child crying, Zoya turned back but there was no one, the child's cries grew louder and louder. She looked at everyone but they were oblivious to the shouts which echoed in her ears and caused immense pain in her heart. She clamped her ears shut with her hands but it didn't help, she continued to hear a child shout,

"Ammi…..ammi aag…….ammi mujhe bachao…….ammi!"

Zoya again looked at everyone as if asking them to find the child and help her but no one seemed to hear anything. Razia had gone to some corner of the room talking on the phone with someone, Nikhat, Nuzhat, Humaira and Ayaan were chatting while Shireen was trying to reason with Rashid about something.

Zoya could see flames surround her, red hot flames trying to engulf her, she could see a woman standing at some distance looking down at something. Zoya followed her gaze to see a lifeless body lying on the ground. The flames increased and she could feel pain in her right arm, suddenly Zoya shouted,

"Aag…..aag…….ammi aag." She fainted and fell on the floor with a thud. Everyone was too shocked to react at first. One moment she was fine and the next she fainted.

They ran towards her, Humaira patted Zoya's cheeks and shook her to get some response.

"Baji…… Baji?" but they didn't get any reply.

Ayaan lifted Zoya in his arms and carried her to her room.

"I've called the doctor, he'll be here soon." Rashid informed.

Razia didn't know how to react, she was stunned. Her day was becoming from bad to worse, first Ayaan refuses to announce his engagement to Humaira then this girl turns up on the doorstep of her house. With great difficulty she had eliminated Zainab from their life, Zoya couldn't just barge in and jeopardize all her plans. She didn't care about why she fainted, she was busy planning ways to remove Zoya out of the house, out of this country and if she causes too much trouble then out of this world.

oOo

"What? She fainted? How? Why? When? What happened?" Asad asked all in one breath. Ayaan had called him to tell him about Zoya.

"I don't know that. The doctor said that maybe she got some shock or something. She was fine one minute then the next she started shouting 'Aag, aag" and she fainted." Ayaan explained.

"Ya she is scared of fire, she must've seen fire somewhere and that's why she fainted."

"But bhaijaan where will she see fire in the living room? Trust me there was no fire there wasn't even a single candle burning." Ayaan said.

Asad pinched the bridge of his nose he could feel the headache resurfacing. He knew something bad was going to happen but he had no idea it would happen so soon.

"She drives me mad." He muttered to himself.

"Fine I'll talk to her. How is she now?" he asked.

"She is fine, still sleeping but fine."

"Okay Allah hafiz."

"Jee khuda hafiz."

"Asad beta what happened?" Dilshad saw his worried face and asked.

"Ayaan had called, he said Zo-Ms Farooqui fainted."

"Ya Allah! What happened?"

"Nothing serious ammi, she is fine now." He said.

"No Asad how can it be fine? Did you talk to Zoya yourself?" she asked.

"No, Ayaan said she was sleeping."

"Then talk to her later! I want to make sure the poor child is alright." She said in an authoritative voice that left no room for argument.

"Fine!"

oOo

~ Later that night ~

Asad was pacing in his room trying very hard not to think about Zoya.

"What would've happened?"

"Uff! Yeh musibat inka peecha kab chodegi? I hope she is fine." He thought to himself.

"Maybe I should call her." he picked up his phone but then placed it on the table.

"What if she is sleeping?"

"Still sleeping? Is she alright? Why is she still sleeping?" that was his heart talking. He picked up the phone again and scrolled through the preprogrammed numbers. He stopped at the name he wanted to see 'Zoya'.

His finger lingered on the 'call' button.

"No I shouldn't call her, what if she is not sleeping but only resting? I shouldn't disturb her."

"Did she have her dinner? Did she eat anything at all? Did she take her medicines? Ya Allah is everyone taking care of her?" his heart screamed. It was like a battle between his head and heart.

He decided to call Ayaan and ask him.

"……. The number you are trying to call is currently not reachable." The prerecorded voice of the operator said.

"Not reachable? Jahnum main gaya hai kya yeh?" he threw the phone on the bed with frustration.

"Calm down Asad, she'll be fine! What could possibly happen to her?" he reasoned with himself and settled on the couch with a book which no longer held any interest to him but he resumed reading from where he had left off in order to distract himself.

"……..And she left me but took my heart along with her. I never knew what separation meant, I never understood why sometimes people got so depressed in separation that they felt the need to drown themselves in indulgences like alcohol. You know that saying about how you don't know what you have until it's gone? I already did know what I had, and now that she's gone, I know even more. I miss her, I mourn her, all I think about is her, I hear her laughter in the winds, I hear the tinkling of her anklets. She consumes my mind. I see her in my dreams, I see her when I'm wide awake. I see her all around……"

He closed the book in exasperation. Why was everything reminding him of HER! it's not like she was never returning back. She had gone, BIG DEAL!?

He sighed, whom was he kidding? He missed her and he just wanted to know how she was. He knew Zoya really well, she always tried to be brave and strong, never letting anyone know her pain, never letting anyone see the hurt, sadness and loneliness in her heart. He knew how the conversation would go.

"Ms Farooqui how are you?"

"I'm fine Mr Khan nothing serious." Then she would act her usual chirpy and jovial self by reciting one of her shayaris and that would be the end of the conversation.

He wanted to know how she really felt. The restlessness inside him would only calm when he was sure that she was alright and there was only one way to find that.

oOo

"Zoya beta ab aap kaise ho?" Shireen asked her.

"Main theek hoon phupi." She said.

"Phupi?"

"Um… kya main aapko phupi bula sakti hoon?" Zoya asked meekly.

"Beshak bula sakti hai." she kissed her forehead.

"Aapko ab so jana chahiye. Kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh humein keh dena." She patted her head and left the room.

"I should call phupi, she must be getting worried." She took out her phone and dialed the landline number.

"Hello?" Dilshad answered the phone.

"Hello phupi main Zoya."

"Zoya beta how are you? You didn't even call me once, I was so worried."

"Phupi I'm fine, you don't have to worry about me. I'm a strong girl." She giggled.

"Ya I know you are a strong girl but I still worry about you."

"Ok phupi now I should sleep." Zoya said sleepily.

"Ok beta, good night."

"Good night."

oOo

He was standing in the backyard of that house which he hated more than anything. Standing right below her window contemplating his actions. If he wanted to see her, if he wanted to make sure she was alright then this was the only option.

"Iss ladki ke liye kya kucch nahi karna padta hai mujhe. Ya Allah mujhe bacha lena!" he sent a prayer to God and looked around to check whether he was alone. When he confirmed that no one was around he started climbing the pipe slowly and carefully.

"Damn it looks so easy in those movies and serials that Najma watches. The hero climbs the pipe with so much ease."

If anyone saw him now then he would be sent to jail for creeping around someone else's house at night like a thief.

With great difficulty he reached the floor and jumped inside the balcony. Just as he was about to enter the room he heard Zoya scream,

"AMMMIII!"

oOo

It was the same nightmare that she usually saw. The same worn out dilapidated building burning in fire, the same surrounding and the same screams of a child shouting for help, shouting at the top of her voice with an intention to get her ammi's attention, anyone's attention, shouting for someone to come and save her from the red hot blazes, calling her ammi to take her away before the flames consumed her, before she perished in the hellish fire.

And as if God heard her pleas and decided to have mercy on the poor child, someone did see her. The child looked up to see an unknown yet familiar face. The person, a woman actually, was staring at the child her eyes didn't have love or adoration in it, it had disgust and loathing. She was looking at the child as if it was a rodent or something.

The child cringed under the icy stare and felt the need to run and hide somewhere, anywhere but away from the woman. Suddenly her gaze fell upon something or rather someone. That someone was lying on the ground, completely lifeless. She saw something dark and wet near the body, she strained her eyes to get a proper view and that's when she saw it. BLOOD! Dark red blood oozing out of the person's chest, the dress of the body turned crimson.

She saw the woman still staring at her, her hand clutching something. She lowered her gaze to see a sharp pointed thing in her hand, a dagger maybe. She took a few steps closer to get a good look at the body's face, her hair fanned her face. She went and sat beside the body, pushing back the hair to get a clear unhindered view, as soon as she saw her face she let out a blood-curling scream,

"AMMMIII!!!!!"

Zoya woke up with a jolt. She was sweating profusely, her breathing had become heavy and ragged, the bed sheets were wound around her legs like weed and her hair was messy as many loose strands had found their way out of her pony tail. She wiped her cheeks with the back of her hand and felt something wet, that's when she realized that she was crying.

"What was that?"

"Zoya!" she heard his voice, she looked up to see him standing on the threshold of the balcony. Was he really there? Was she hallucinating? Was it her dream?

"Mr Khan?" she couldn't recognize her own voice.

"Zoya what happened? I heard you shout. Did you get another one of your nightmares?" he walked towards her and sat beside her on the bed.

She remembered her nightmare and shivered, even in the dark Asad noticed it and he got his answer.

He took the glass of water kept on the bedside table and offered it to her. when she didn't respond he raised the glass to her lips and made her take a sip to calm her nerves a bit. After a few minutes she regained her composure and looked at Asad.

"Mr Khan are you really here?" she pinched herself to check whether she was dreaming and winced when she felt the pain.

Asad rolled his eyes at her dramatic antics.

"Yes I'm really here."

"Why?"

"Trust me I've been asking myself the same question." He muttered under his breath.

"Excuse-me!"

"I-I….. woh….. woh actually…"

"Phir se aapka 'woh actually'!" she said.

"I-I-I came here to talk to you." He said the first thing that came in his mind.

"You came here to talk to me?" she asked bewildered.

"Um, yeah!"

"You could've called me." She pointed at her cell phone.

"Ya actually I forgot." He lied, he just couldn't tell her that he wanted to see her.

"You forgot!?" she screeched, his hand immediately flew to cover her mouth.

"Stop shouting someone might hear us." He warned her.

"Mr Khan how can you forget?" she lowered her voice.

"Even a small child doesn't forget his phone." She giggled.

"H-How are you?" he changed the topic.

"Ah! So Ayaan told you everything." She rolled her eyes.

"Ya, now answer my question and don't you dare lie." He raised his eyebrow.

She sighed, "I'm fine Mr khan. I just remembered some old tragic incidence and maybe that's why I fainted but I assure you now I'm fine." She placed her hands on his to give him the assurance he needed.

"How sweet of you Mr Khan you came here just to know if I was ok." She smiled brightly.

Asad was really embarrassed with her comment and he returned back to his annoying self.

"Ms Farooqui come back down to Earth. I came here because ammi was really worried about you and she wanted me to make sure that you were fine and you know I can't refuse her."

"Emotionally challenged! Har baat pe phupi ko beech main kyun leke aate hai." she made a face and thought to herself.

"By the way Mr Khan aap andar aaye kaise?"

"Woh…….. woh……."

"Please Mr khan don't start with your 'woh actually'."

"I climbed the pipe." He looked away from her in embarrassment,

"Allah miyan! You climbed the pipe? Like a true romeo? To meet me? How romantic!" she exclaimed.

"Ms Farooqui!" he said it a bit too loudly.

*KNOCK KNOCK*

"Mona darling, it's me Rabart!" Ayaan said.

"Allah miyan, Mr khan go hide." She shooed him away.

"Relax it's just Ayaan." He went to open the door. Ayaan was shocked to see his bhaijaan inside Zoya's room.

"Bhaijaan aap?" he yelled in surprise.

"Tum dono thoda dheere nahi bol sakte?" Asad chided. He motioned Ayaan to come inside and closed the door and bolted it.

"I was just passing by when I heard some voices so I decided to check. Bhaijaan what are you doing in Zoya's room so late at night?" he asked suspiciously.

"Ammi sent me here to check if Zo-Ms Farooqui was alright. She was very tensed after you called."

"Okay! But you both should be careful if ya'll plan to have such late night rendezvous. Be thankful it was me and no one else."

"Anyways I should go and bhaijaan even you should leave before anyone else sees you here. By the way how did you get inside?" he asked.

"He climbed the pipe and came in through the window can you believe it!" Zoya exclaimed.

Ayaan stared at his brother as if he had grown two heads.

"Okay I'm going. Good night." Asad turned and walked towards the balcony to climb down.

"Be careful Mr Khan. Emotionally challenged toh aap ho hi agar physically challenged bhi ho gaye toh problem ho jayegi." She laughed at her own joke while Asad rolled his eyes.

"Good night Mona darling."

"Good night Rabart."

A/N – Tada the second part! And I know some of you would be shocked to read ASAD climbing the pipe to meet ZOYA! But I was missing this Armaan wala trait so I thought chalo Asad ko bhi majnu banaya jaye! I know it's way out of his character and serial main aisa kuch nahi hoga but a girl can only dream!

Sorry for the grammatical errors! Sorry if it was not upto your expectations! Sorry if ya'll didn't like this part!

Please don't forget to like and comment! and please please please please AVOID RESERVING! If you are reserving then please DO NOT FORGET TO UNRES!

Ppl who res comments then forget to unres it really frustrates me a lot and I might discontinue the SS *blackmail Razia Ishtyle*

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Sadie!

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p.s. : Read : Dahad 😉
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
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OMG I guffawed really loudly at work! It's my dream to see Asad climb in through a window for Zoe. She has one it fr him so ek baar tho bantha hai, right? :D

Great update can't wait to read part 3. Does Majnu get caught? Does Razia catch him? So many questions...update soon!
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Asad in armaan style..Now what more do I really want.. 🤗
Climbing up the pipe for zoya??😆
As it is our Asad miyaan is already verbally and emotionally challenged,being physically challenged would just be sone pe sohaga 🤣🤣, the reason being that, then we can have some MORE amazing mitwa moments with zoya taking care of him!!! And then there would be a miracle and he finally recovers..LOL😉

P.s: i know it was melodramatic 🤣
P.p.s: yes we are sadists🤣
P.p.p.s: i just LAAAOED it sadie 👏
P.p.p.p.s: since I have already unressed my comment, you better start writing the next part and update SOOON 😃
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Hey Saddiiee!!
Great update!!
Loved the romantic Asad!! 😆
I wonder what Razia will do now!! Poor Zoya!!
Anyway, I'm loving the way you write. 👏
I mean your writing style is amazing and the way you explain everything is great!! 😃
Continue soon pleassseee!!
And yes, Zoya's last joke was nice!! 😛
And and and 'Woh Actually" was just too good!! Loved it!! 😆 😆
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Not dissapointed, but laaooved it ^___________^

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Waiting for the next part! :-*

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