Asya SS ~ Tu Jahan Main Wahan! THREAD 1 (chapter 1-9) - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Enchantress

Hey , I just came across this SS today , and I just love it so very much. You need to continue this asap and please pm me whenever you update next, will wait.


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thanks but update will take time😊
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Plleeezzz update !!
Its been sooo long !!
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How I wish...Zoya gives him a back massage...:D
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Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

Plleeezzz update !!
Its been sooo long !!
Cant wait to see an AsYa scene !
How I wish...Zoya gives him a back massage...:D


i'll update today today today or maybe tonight tonight tonight šŸ˜†

the back massage *thud* did you read my mind or did you leak my script???? 😲😲 🤣 what a bang on prediction šŸ˜†
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i'll update today today today or maybe tonight tonight tonightšŸ˜†

the back massage *thud* did you read my mind or did you leak my script????😲😲🤣what a bang on predictionšŸ˜†


Woww ! Woww ! Woww !
I'm sooo happy !! Today is the day ! šŸ˜†
I love you ! I love you ! I love you ! 😳

Hahahaha...lol... I've wanted that scene so badly since I read the last update !! I'm sooo glad its happening !! Waiting for the update has become more difficult now...šŸ˜†

Hahaa...maybe I did both ! Sshhh...šŸ˜‰

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Part 4

~Siddhiqui Villa

"Yes phupi I'm absolutely fine, yes I had my lunch, yes I'm being careful, yes I'm taking care of myself." Zoya was talking to Dilshad on the phone. Dilshad was as usual fretting over her on the phone and Zoya was convincing her that she was alright. Just then she heard a scream.

"Ya Allah what was that?" Dilshad asked.

"I-I don't know. I'll go check." Zoya disconnected the call and ran downstairs.

Shireen was crying inconsolably while Rashid, Nikhat and Nuzhat were comforting her. Ayaan was sitting on the ground on one foot.

"Ayaan beta don't touch it." Shireen stopped him. That's when Zoya saw it. A lemon covered in red colour and a doll which looked like an effigy of some sort.

What the hell is that? She remembered seeing such things in those silly illogical movies she had seen with Najma.

"What happened?" she asked and went to sit beside a shocked Shireen.

"Beta someone is trying to harm me and my family by using black magic."

"What nonsense." Zoya stood up and walked where the effigy was lying. She bent and picked it up to examine it closely. Surely it looked like those dolls which people used for black magic. She made a disgusting face when she saw that the hair on the doll was not a wig, they were real hair and the hair looked exactly like Shireen's hair. She wasn't those people who believed in such superstitious crap. Although her appi believed in them her jiju always taught her that these things were harmless.

"Zoya don't touch it."

"Phupi this is nothing but total crap you know where it's real place is? In the dustbin. It is harmless, this motionless inanimate doll can't even hurt a fly forget you and your entire family. Honestly I feel like laughing at this. Someone is playing a prank that's it. A very silly and childish plan I must say, couldn't the prankster come up with something a bit credible?" she giggled.

"Zoya you should never like that about such things." Shireen shook her head.

"Ammi, Zoya is right this is all crap." He sided with Zoya. Zoya picked up the lemon and threw it in the bin.

"Look if this stuff can really harm anyone then I have touched it right? It should've harmed me? But no, look I'm fine. Nothing happened to me. Lightening didn't strike me, earth didn't gobble me, fire didn't burn me, no rashes, no mysterious cuts not even a damn cough." She tried to make Shireen see some sense.

"What do you know? You are a child. Such things take time to show their effect and I'm sure something bad will happen with you." Razia said throwing daggers at Zoya.

"And how do you know that? Can you see future?" she raised her eyebrows questioningly.

"I just know ok. I've heard stories about how the effect of black magic is capable of destroying not just the family but even the later generations. Shireen I…."

"Heard! Not seen. These are just stories by imposters to scare people and trick them into doing all sorts of charity. And nave people believe them. C'mon we are all educated, we can't seriously believe in black magic. Next you'll tell me ghosts exist."

Rashid decided to stop the argument, Razia wasn't happy to be cut off by Zoya and he didn't want Zoya to get on her wrong side.

"Shireen I think you should rest. I'll have the maid clean this up. Zoya is right, we are all educated so let's behave like one, shall we?" saying that he helped Shireen walk towards their room.

Badi bi called the maid to sweep the mess but the maid simply stood rooted to the spot and looked down.

"Sorry madam I can't touch that. What if something bad happens to me? I have kids to look after."

"Ya Allah!" Zoya exclaimed loudly, exasperated and decided to clean it up herself.

"Baji I'll do it." Nikhat offered.

"It's ok I've got it." Zoya smiled and dumped the remaining contents in the bin.

Razia on the other hand was seething in anger. She had a perfect opportunity to blame it all on Dilshad further degrading her in shireen's eyes but Zoya foiled her plans.

"Iss kambhakt ladki ka kucch karna padega. Woh kala jadoo ka saaman apne haath main lene se tumhe kucch nahi hua lekin ab zaroor hoga." Razia thought to herself and went in her room concocting some other evil plans.

oOo

"Billo rani you are of no use. You kept the money I gave you but you didn't do your job. What had I asked you? All I wanted you to do was get that wretched girl to leave this country. How difficult can this meager task be?" she yelled at Tanveer on the phone.

"Don't scream Razia bi. I can hear you well enough. Now stop behaving like a beggar. If I have taken your money then I will even complete the job you have given me. Trust me it's not as easy as it's sounds. That idiot Asad doesn't let her leave the city forget the country. If she wants to go to the market then he accompanies her. Uska bus chale toh Zoya ko apne se handcuffs se bandh ke rakhe." Tanveer said angrily.

"I don't want to hear any excuses. I want her out. Even I will try all tricks from here to make her leave my house and this country." Saying this she hung up on her and walked out of the room unable to notice Zoya standing behind the door with shock etched on her face.

She had heard her talking to someone on the phone and she sure as hell didn't sound happy. Who is this billo rani? Who does she want out of this house and this country? Should I be concerned? After all it has nothing to do with me. Maybe I should tell Mr Khan. No, he'll just ask me to stay out of it. I should tell dost. Yes, it's his family and he has a right to know. Does it have anything to do with me? Think Zoya think. Who else will Razia bi want to leave this house? I'm the only outsider.

I can understand her reasons to want me out, she may not be very fond of me but hey, I'm not that unlikable that she would hire someone with such a hideous name to get me to leave this country.

Ya Allah everything is so complicated. All I wanted to do was find out about that photo and my abbu's whereabouts. Where have I landed myself up?

Her inner musings were disturbed by the shrill ringing of her phone. She answered it without glancing at the caller ID.

"Hello?"

"Zoya beta is everything alright? What had happened? Are you fine? Nothing happened to you na?" Dilshad asked in a concerned voice.

"Phupi nothing happened to me. Actually it's a long story." She sighed.

"Come here today. We all really miss you."

"Even I miss you phupi. Fine I'll tell Ayaan to drop me at your place." She said excitedly.

"Okay beta khuda hafiz."

"Allah hafiz."

oOo

Zoya asked Ayaan if he could drop her at the khan mansion and he readily agreed. Zoya got ready and was about to leave when Shireen stopped them.

"Beta tum dono kahan jaa rahe ho?"

"Phupi, woh, actually, mujhe meri ek purani friend ne apne ghar bulaya hai toh Ayaan mujhe wahi drop karne aa rahe hai." She lied.

"oh ok, raat ko ghar jaldi aa jana."

"Jee."

Ayaan and Zoya heaved a sigh of relief and walked out. They had told Rashid where they were going so that if there is some problem then he can handle the situation at home. Zoya wanted to share what she had heard but she didn't know if she should. How can blame someone like this without any proofs? She herself is not sure whether she should get into this mess or no. If she tells it to Mr Khan then she will only say one thing

"Ms Farooqui aapko unke ghar ke neeji mamlo main padne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai."

Gah! He can he so annoying sometimes! She thought. She decided to let it out of her mind and concentrate on what was important. Two days she has been here and she was yet not able to find even that photograph forget any clue about her abbu. But she didn't let it spoil her mood, she knew how to handle disappointments.

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A/N – Tada! Finally an update! Ok I know that this may not be what you all were expecting and hey, it's not a short update ok. 1,443 words! The good news is that the next part is also ready as i had written it long back, only typing is left so I'll update part 5 day after tomorrow. Not proof-read it! Leave your comments!

@_Aaniya_ - your back massage will be in the next chapter. this chapter was becoming too long for it!

Buddy me for pms! Pms will be sent to only those who are in my buddy list. I've seen that there are many people in my buddy list who do not comment so I'm soon gonna filter my buddy list and all those who don't comment will be deleted. Writing is not easy so it'll be really nice if the silent readers comment once.

Love,

Sadie!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
I am first 🄳

This was fabulous šŸ‘
I loved hoe Zoe spoilt razia's plan
I like how the story is proceeding
I want some asya scenes pleaseee 😳

This was short and sweet 😃


Edited by giee - 12 years ago

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