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Originally posted by: Rin03

It was nice Ill admit but I expected more from him, I dunno the dialouges were not that... upto to my expectations. I would have wanted them to go a bit deeper, have him explain about what he saw in her eyes, the expression on her face and the pull he felt towards her.
As a writer you can impact a simple scene like that with dialouges, you need to be careful.

But yes that khoobsurat bit was great, I loved that.

But he wasn't going to say that to an immigration officer. I think this will be his confession to Zoe or Dolly where he actually explains himself and how he feels.

Originally posted by: NallyAarviFan

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#330099">I may be a bit late to enter this thread but please sign me up. I'm so in love with these 2. Kabhi are too amasing!</font> </font>❤️

Welcome dear! 😊
Better late than never 😉 btw what is your name?

Originally posted by: Rin03

It was nice Ill admit but I expected more from him, I dunno the dialouges were not that... upto to my expectations. I would have wanted them to go a bit deeper, have him explain about what he saw in her eyes, the expression on her face and the pull he felt towards her.
As a writer you can impact a simple scene like that with dialouges, you need to be careful.

But yes that khoobsurat bit was great, I loved that.

Originally posted by: delena90

But he wasn't going to say that to an immigration officer. I think this will be his confession to Zoe or Dolly where he actually explains himself and how he feels.

I agree but when your lost in the moment and considering how he always keeps his feelings locked up, when you open up a bit you tend to say a lot even if its a little.

Ah yes the confession to Dolly is still there, I hope they do better in that.

guys will u be finishing this AT up tonite? its my turn for d nex AT so banake so jao ya tomoro banao?lol

Originally posted by: rogerrocks

But Asad is someone who is always in control na..Am sure he'l talk about his feelings during the real confession scene in future😆He just said what was needed and din overdo it like Zoya..He wouldn't want the others to get suspicious as yet😆

Yes I agree but its unbelievable the amount of restrain and control he shows. I just didn't feel his dialouges were enough to push me to tears or that immigration officier is just more of a softie on the inside than me😆

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

guys will u be finishing this AT up tonite? its my turn for d nex AT so banake so jao ya tomoro banao?lol

I dont think we might finish it up by tonight dear but just in case do keep a topic reserved, you can set up the front page an other things tomorrow 😊

Originally posted by: shaz2009

<font color="#990099">I agree...SBS/SBB to tend to spoil the suspense,I'd rather wanna find out what's gana happen as I watch...but having said that I still am curious,if that makessense,to know what is gana happen...😆...cnt help meself!😆</font>

Hahahaha... Im the same dear! 😊

Originally posted by: Rin03

I dont think we might finish it up by tonight dear but just in case do keep a topic reserved, you can set up the front page an other things tomorrow 😊

okie dokie😳

Originally posted by: delena90

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I ranted about Zoe being blind too. I don't get it! And don't get me started on Tanveer's non-existent pregnancy. 😡

Aaah Gul and ger pregnancy stories! *Sighs*
Just knock Billo off quickly please! Let Asad find out the truth, BR isn't offeriny much to the story anymore.