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Rockerchic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: havokhotline
*fans face*

OH GOD WOMAN! DONT DO THIS TO ME!

I AM DYING OVER HERE! :D

I loved this!

😆

Note to self - Kill at least one reader a day.

Mission accomplished! 😃

Thank you love 😊

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Rockerchic

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Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: s120
This was so hot. So love this naughty side of Asad 😳

And the way you ended, the last line was too good "Oh Miss Farookie, you're making this too easy" Gosh, I can so imagine Asad saying this with that sexy smirk on his face

Continue soon and pls make the next chapter a bit longer, want to see some action 😉 😆

Action?

But the build up is so much more fun isn't it? 😃

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Rockerchic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: havokhotline
Sexual Tension.

Pent-up frustration.

HEAT.

*rawr*

Yep that's the summary 😃

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Manpreet23

@Manpreet23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

I love you for posting the second chapter today! :D

Update was hawttt.

And I want long updates fast or three short updates a day, your choice.

Yes I know I'm being extra mean and greedy but what can I dooo? I just love this story so muchhh. :P

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Rockerchic

@Rockerchic

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Manpreet23
I love you for posting the second chapter today! :D

Update was hawttt.

And I want long updates fast or three short updates a day, your choice.

Yes I know I'm being extra mean and greedy but what can I dooo? I just love this story so muchhh. :P

Muje college bhi jana hai yaar 😆

Koshish karoongi 😊

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Sara_76

@Sara_76

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Was hoping to read an os and go to sleep dreaming about ASYA. Reading this right now... big mistake. It was sooo exciting and well written ...now i m wide awake :-)

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

OHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its a long story... :D

i am so thrilled... :D

just loved the breakfast scene... i am saying nah.. i mean u just attach so many flavours that now the normal scenes wud be like if i am seeing it i wud be going thru the emotions u portrayed in the OS...

i expecially love the cocky remark in the end... ;)

and the way how u brough everything.. capturig those small gestures... i mean its just so beautiful...

amazing update...

waiting for next.. .:D

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Aaahh! I see the sexual tension building up!!

Mr. khan, you're way naughtier than anyone couldve thought you were! 🤣

I wonder if zoya knows how her jahapannah thinks of her! I mean the exact idea! 😆

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Rockerchic

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Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Sara_76
Was hoping to read an os and go to sleep dreaming about ASYA. Reading this right now... big mistake. It was sooo exciting and well written ...now i m wide awake :-)

RC- Spreading insomnia since 9/4/2013 😆

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Rockerchic

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Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
OHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its a long story... :D

i am so thrilled... :D

just loved the breakfast scene... i am saying nah.. i mean u just attach so many flavours that now the normal scenes wud be like if i am seeing it i wud be going thru the emotions u portrayed in the OS...

i expecially love the cocky remark in the end... ;)

and the way how u brough everything.. capturig those small gestures... i mean its just so beautiful...

amazing update...

waiting for next.. .:D