Asad-Zoya OS - Stay.. for me. - Page 4

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.

Sanaa!! This was FREAKING AWESOME! Sorry i couldn't comment here earlier. But better late than never :P

OMG I have missed your work sooo much! This really really made me happy! 😃 Specially when i got the pm :D BUT OMG THIS WAS FREAKING AWESOME! I loved how you described the emotions and everything with just that small poem in the beginning.

I feel you did an amazing job with describing how exactly Asad must have reacted to Zoya leaving him. And i loved how Zoya refused to show the paper to Tanveer. Finally she could say no to something at least :P

I am just waiting for more of your work soon now. Keep writing! Love ya xx

P.S -I hope you recognised me with the username change. Though it happened like long long back but then we haven't spoken ever since 🤔

Oooh.. thank you!!! 😳 I always thought Asad had this romantic part inside him.. and it was actually the poem first that came into my mind..then from that I sort of drafted the whole OS.. 😃 And regarding Tannu and Zoya not telling her.. THANK YOU.. you're the only one who mentioned it.. I purposely did it.. because I know Zoya's really innocent so she won't suspect Tanveer..but she does she have to share everything with her??!! It just frustrates me to no end.. so in this OS initially I wasn't going to put a Tannu in it at all.. but then after a while I thought of everything from her point of view.. and thought.. well.. she has a reason even if her actions aren't right.

I'll write more on AR.. they were the first couple to inspire me enough to write FFs.. 😊

As for who you are.. uhmm.. sorry haven't recognised you as yet..😳😕

Hu ...

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hu ...

That was brilliant !!!

And do write more :D

Thanks!! :) But 'Hu'? what does that stand for?? 😕

Gosh ! Wonderful OS, loved it!

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Gosh ! Wonderful OS, loved it!

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: aarundhati

SUPER-LIKE dear...!

Thank you!! 😊

This is amaazing :) I love Asad the poet :D

Originally posted by: mochhug

This is amaazing :) I love Asad the poet :D

And THANK GOD Zoya didn't show Tanveer the paper. Although I must praise you for making her tolerable in this story. I almost felt for her when you were describing her past and her current predicament :)

Ohh... Thank you! And I was having enough Tanveer getting to see everything as though she's frigging omnipitent! Annoyed the hell out of em.. so naturally as an AsYa fan I thought why the hell should I let her see the paper? Nu uh! 😆

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Oooh.. thank you!!! 😳 I always thought Asad had this romantic part inside him.. and it was actually the poem first that came into my mind..then from that I sort of drafted the whole OS.. 😃 And regarding Tannu and Zoya not telling her.. THANK YOU.. you're the only one who mentioned it.. I purposely did it.. because I know Zoya's really innocent so she won't suspect Tanveer..but she does she have to share everything with her??!! It just frustrates me to no end.. so in this OS initially I wasn't going to put a Tannu in it at all.. but then after a while I thought of everything from her point of view.. and thought.. well.. she has a reason even if her actions aren't right.

I'll write more on AR.. they were the first couple to inspire me enough to write FFs.. 😊

As for who you are.. uhmm.. sorry haven't recognised you as yet..😳😕

i know! It frustrate me too! I mean, Zoya being that kind hearted does everything for her and then gets THAT from Tanveer. It annoys me beyond the limit 😵

And Yayy! AR OS soon! That excited me! :D

And LOL i don't know if you remember me wese bhi. Its been pretty long since we spoke LOL But let's see uhmmm Die_hardfan_Ksg was my previous username! 😆