NEW ASYA OS 50th ANNIVERSARY updtd pt 1 pg 5

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Titli

@afterlife.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

It's awesome dear...plz continue.though I'm having a little bit problem imagining Asad n Zo as buddha n buddhi but still ur concept is fresh..😛

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Gudduluvs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice cconcept..do continue n add me n plz pm me

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

No offense, but are you telling me Asad is just 25 years old on the show? I thought he was closer to at least 27 or 30. Plus, when you give the reader two paragraphs and then ask if we should continue then you should continue - take the risk and at least let the viewer read your first chapter. Then we can really say if we want to read more...

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friendsall

@friendsall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

kuch alag se hein!!!! v gud

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Laila2009
No offense, but are you telling me Asad is just 25 years old on the show? I thought he was closer to at least 27 or 30. Plus, when you give the reader two paragraphs and then ask if we should continue then you should continue - take the risk and at least let the viewer read your first chapter. Then we can really say if we want to read more...

sry but its completely my imagination...and i hav made this story keeping in mind tht Asad is 25...its just a fic...

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

50th ANNIVERSARY...

PART 1

Dilshad Ahmed Khan and her best friend Zainab Siddiqui were pregnant with their second and first child respectively...Dilshad was the first one to get married and hence she already had a boy

ASAD AHMED KHAN...but after his delivery Dilshad's health began to take a turn and hence baby Asad grew with Zainab...but after sometime Dilshad's condition was stable and ahe was able to take care of Asad...
But for him Zainab had been first preference than Dilshad as she had been his mother when he needed her the most...

Even Dilshad never disagreed with their relation or ever felt jealous indeed she was proud of it...
After 1 year even Zainab got married and Asad had to live with Dilshad from there onwards...

3 years later Dilshad and Zainab were pregnant with their second and first child respectively...
An exicted Asad was going to b gifted with two angels coz he wanted a sister for himself and looking at Zainab's bump he always used to say tht the angel is mine...

At the time of delivery all were standing outside the labour room in tension their reverie broke by a shrilling sound of the cries of babies...
Rashid and Gaffur both were blessed with daughters...and they rushd to their respective wards and our 4 year old Asad went to c his angel...

He went inside the ward and tried to get hold of the baby but she was too smalll like a cottonball...
Zainab - Asad beta dekhiye beta aapki angel...how is she????
Asad was just staring at her unblinkingly and Zainab laughed at his expressions...
And out of nowhere Asad said she is Zoya my Zoya...

I I m sorry plz dont throw chappals on me i hav been bzy off lately with tests and all...
So here is the first part how was it...
Plz hit like and comment...
Loads of love
Nazia