Winding down with Zoya - pt23 updt pg 60 - Page 6

u kept m hooked through the entire story.. de lst prt de red smear.. hope dats a new lip gloss which zoya was tryng or probably pizza...

Nice..luvd it..do uodate soon n pkz pm me

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

Just found this story and read it all in one go. From the very start of this story, you had me hooked. Loved the way you described everything, gave detailed explanations wherever necessary. During the read of the first few chapters, I felt something was wrong with Asad's company and Miss. Dragon, as Asad calls his client, had an eye on him. But eventually things ought to get fine.

The love making sequences and their cuddling into each other when they wake up the next morning was flawless.

I can see a great bond between Asad and Najma; and Zoya and Najma. I've always longed to see this equation. My heart fills with blitheness whenever I see someone write about them.

Zoya's mood swings during the initial days and her dreaming of her Asad with another woman reflected her possessiveness and love, pure love for her husband.

Asad has to learn a lot. I'm happy he's patiently coping up with her. And why wouldn't he? HE LOVES HER.

Razia tried to harm Zoya!😲 She had to go through so much pain. Poor soul. My heart wails for her and moreover that, I can't see her in pain. Not at all.

The last update, I mean the current one, was the best of all. That doesn't mean the others were any less than this. They were equally amazing and beautiful.

The reason I loved the current update and has a slightly higher weightage than others is because Dilshaad and Asad along with Najma are so supportive of her. They wish her all the happiness she deserves and not let any harm even intrude their territory.

But the last paragraph left me gaped. I wonder what Asad saw. What that red spot was? I hope it wasn't blood. Ya Allah! Holy Christ! Don't let this happen. My Zoya and Asad deserves happiness. Don't let this get ruined.

Okay, this was what I thought of this beautiful and flawless piece of work. I'm left spell bound after reading this. You are a talented writer and have a potential to go and kiss the world! Keep up the great work rather I would say hard work. AMAZING!

P.S. Can you send me PMs when you update next chapters, only if you have time and if you send any.

Lots of love,

Diya😳

Beautifully Written. You have a gift, my dear. I loved how you incorporated how each of them is rubbing off on the other, for the better. And his moving an office into the house was about the sweetest thing yet. Please update soon :)

Superb update. Please continue soon.

HAW That was awesooome.

Loved loved loved this. Can't get enough. Please update. Plz!!!!!!

And PM me for every sing part after this.

Originally posted by: Mybabyomar42006

Loved loved loved this. Can't get enough. Please update. Plz!!!!!!

And PM me for every sing part after this.

Originally posted by: meow23

u kept m hooked through the entire story.. de lst prt de red smear.. hope dats a new lip gloss which zoya was tryng or probably pizza...

Omg...dat was amazing...u r too good...yr writing z like its almost real...u express sooo well...pls do continue...Jus loved d way u potray asad n zoya reltship ...