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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Chotti I totally hated it!! there I said it! 😛

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Oishi

@Oishi23

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

this is so sad..but beautifully written..u should write more

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Riima_Azraa
Chotti I totally hated it!! there I said it! 😛

Youuu evil thinggg!!! 🤣 🤣

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: 4ever4love
WOW, that was amazing! I was like 'what the heck is going on' and then I got to the 'lifeless' part - great writing.

Hahaha that was intentional cuz had i told zoya's dead in the begining, people would quit reading it like i wouldve if i was a reader😆

thakyou so much😳

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: nihamrm
though this is a sad os
and has made me cry
i cant stop liking it
you've written it so beautifully dear

Thankyou sooo very much for such encouraging words! Really mean alot😳

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I Love your work, be it Arshi or now Asya...You write beautifuly...😊

I had to re-read the first part of this one...I couldn't understand why he said the very first line...the rest of it...I can't bear my heroes cry...be it Arnav or Asad...and only their women can make them cry and wit them also us...God...This one was a really sad one...I think maybe Its My first Sad Asya OS...😭

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@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal
I Love your work, be it Arshi or now Asya...You write beautifuly...😊
I had to re-read the first part of this one...I couldn't understand why he said the very first line...the rest of it...I can't bear my heroes cry...be it Arnav or Asad...and only their women can make them cry and wit them also us...God...This one was a really sad one...I think maybe Its My first Sad Asya OS...😭

Awww thankyou so much, hun! Your comment made my day, such an encouraging cmment! 😃 Im glad you like my work! Makes me so happy😳

U see as asad is extremely sad and his pain comes out in his anger, hes saying meaningless things in order to take his frustration out. U know like blaming zoya for leaving him and he is angry that zoya came and went just like that! Hes just being mean unreasonably due to the pain in his heart! I hope this makes it easier to understand😊