ASYA OS: Tu Jo Nahin Final Chapter PG 22 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

loved it...i love the song...



Aaw i love the song too
It is one of my favourites both thanks love 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaww thanks so much for the comment 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ankie milegi
But yaar thoda writer block hogaya LOL
Paa ni jab idea aa jayega phir uodate hojayega pakka promise 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
nice story.waiting for ur update like for ages plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: sasir

nice story.waiting for ur update like for ages plzzz update soon



Updating now :
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Chapter 3

Finally I have updated and After this there is one more part guys. Hope you enjoy it.

'I'm sorry, we did all we could to save them. But unfortunately so much blood was lost. All burst into tears as they had lost a person close to their heart.


FLASHBACK

Asad and Zoya stood in front of everyone looking at others around them whom were staring at them shocked.
Zeenat and Anwar were both first to move.

'What is this? Yeh kya hai sab? Zoya... Aaj tumhari shaadi ho rahi hai' Zeenat was fuming. What would others think about this? Here her sister was about to marry someone else yet she was hugging Asad. Zeenat mnew something must have gone on between them as ever since Zoya came back from Bhopal, it's always Mr Khan this Mr Khan that until they told her about the wedding.

Zoya was about to speak when Asad spoke first.
'Kya hai Aapi.. Woh actually... Woh mein Zoya se pya...'
Before Asad could speak more he felt something hit him from behind and he fell to the floor.

'Asad!!' Zoya screamed. She turned around to see her now ex fiance standing behind Asad with a bat. Her ex fiance whom she had told about Mr Khan as she didn't wanglt to marry someone who didn't know that her heart went to another man.

'Tum ho Asad Khan, jo meri honewali biwi pyar karti hai' Abbas spoke hitting Asad again. Asad tried to cover hits that were coming to him but now it was getting too painful. He looked up at Zoya who was in tears.

Zoya went to stop Abbas from hitting him when his family grabbed her.

'Chod do usko. Aur Asad ko bhi. Yeh shaadi nahi hogi.' Both Anwar and Zeenat said shocked about what was happening. They never knew Abbas was like this. But now they have seen his true colours.

'Yeh shaadi hogi Zoya ke saath aur tum aur yeh kameena much nahi aahega!' Asad looked up at Abbas this time trying his best to speak.

'Jab tak... Jab tak main zinda hoon... Main .. Main yeh nahi hodenga..' Asad winced in pain and Zoya watched tears running out of her eyes.

'Tum dekhunga.' Asad was grabbed and dragged inside the house while guns were held to Zeenat and Anwars head as Zoya was pushed inside too.

All watched as Asad was dragged to where the Nikah was gonna happen and thats when he heard the question.
'Abbas Hussain, kya aap ka nikah Zoya Farooqui ke saath Qubool Hai?'
Abbas smiled and said, 'Qubool Hai'
'Aur Zoya Farooqui kya aap yeh Nikah Abbas Hussain ke saath Qubool Hai?'
Zoya looked at Asad who was barely concious now but was staring at her. Why couldn't she be happy with him? After all she has been through.. She just wants to be happy and live her life. Memories came runnin back to her. Many times he had saved her. Many times her Asad Ahmed Khan had saved her and today she couldn't even save herself and him from this. If they were both going to live and her Aapi and Jiju, then she had to say it..
'Qubool...' She can't say it no matter what. She decides to see how life will play out for her now
'Qubool Nahi Hai!' Abbas was fuming and grabbed the gun of his fellow people around him. Zeenat and Anwar were relieved as thy now didn't want him to marry this guy at all!

Abbas pointed the gun at Zoya 'agar tum meri nahi bansakti toh lo ...'
Abbas fired the gun. 'Tum kisi aur ka kaise bansakti hai'

When the gun fired screams were heard and Asad had lost unconciousness after seeing Zoya fall to the floor with blood oozing out.


I know there is one more chapter after this but all the readers so far... I LOVE YOU ALL for the comments and that as I never thought in a million years people would actually like it. Anyway THANK YOU so far for your comments much appreciated.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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full of drama hally😆
nyc
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the comment lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hifzaa

full of drama hally😆
nyc



Lol moni drama toh hona hoga na typical wala drama hahaha 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...hopefully zoe vl b fn...

waiting fr nxt one..plz update soon

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