AsYa OS: Mr. and Mrs. Khan

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Hey Guys, back with another OS. I'm really really bored so this OS is really Random, It's longish I guess...

Enjoy :)

The rain fell hard, making thousands of different noises. She slowly stuck her hand out the window, feeling the water drops hitting her palm and splashing elsewhere. She smiled; every little thing exited her, even a little rain. Suddenly she frowned, only if HE wasn't home, she would've been able to go outside into the rain

"Zoya"

She heard him say; quickly she pulled her hand back in and attempted to wipe her hands on the curtains

"What are you doing" he asked

"Voh uh oh, I was checking if the curtains are dusty"

She lied and pulled off a fake smile.

"Hmm" he said but didn't look as if he was satisfied by her answer

He sat down on the bed, pulling out a file from the drawer besides.

"voh, Asad, meh kya sochrahi thi, can I go out-"

"The answer is no" he replied, not even letting her finish her sentence.

She made a face, and sat besides him

"You never let me do anything, if I ask for ice cream...No Zoya; you'll get sick, if I asked for chocolate No Zoya; too much sweets isn't good for you or the baby"

She complained folding her arms. He smiled at her childish behavior and placed his file down

"Hey come here"

He held her hand, and caressed it slowly with is thumb

"You know why I say no to certain things right?"

"Certain things? You say no to everything"

He rolled his eyes

"Fine, but do you know why?"

She shook her had

"Why?" she asked

Asad smiled wider

"Because I want little Zoya to be the healthiest baby on this world"

Now she smile

"Who said, the baby will be a girl?"

"Well I said it" he replied

"Haha, funny, the baby will be a boy"

He shook his head

"No Zoya, you're wrong, it'll be a girl and she will be just like her dad"

"Psssht, then forget about it, I don't need another akdru in the family"

He raised his eyebrows

"Really, I'm akdru?"

She smiled and nodded, then tapped his cheek

"It's a proven fact"

"Hmm, you see Zoya, I was just about to change my mind about you going outside, but now that you called me akdru, I have to think again"

Zoya's jaw dropped

"What? Stop lying, C'mon Asad"

She whined

"Tum such mein akdru ho, jao, meh tumse baat nahi karti"

And again she folded her arms

He smiled from ear to ear, and put a arm around her

"Alright, but just for 20 minutes, okay?"

He said it as he was talking to his kid, and she too started jumping like a child.

"Really? Then let's go right now!" she started pulling his arm

And soon they reached the back porch of their house; Asad leaned back on the door, and watched her

First she put out her hand to feel the drops on her palms and slowly she walked into the rain.

She opened her arms welcoming the rain, and soon she was wet from head to toe.

She turned to Asad and signaled him to come. He looked around in the sky and hesitated for a moment, but seeing that smile on her face, he couldn't help and joined her.

She held his hand and stepped in closer

"I love you, Mr. Khan" She whispered

He smiled, and caressed her cheek

"I love you too, Mrs. Khan" He replied

And slowly he pulled her into a soft, but passionate kiss

Slowly she pulled out of the kiss and smiled

"And Asad Junior loves you too" she said

He made a face

"Asad Junior, no, no it's little Zoya" he said in return

"No Asad Junior"

"No Zoya, it's little Zoya"

"Asad Junior"

"Little Zoya"

... and so Mr. and Mrs. Khan stood in the middle of their garden drenched in the rain, fighting about their baby's gender

Thalyia, Thaliya

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Gurmeet4Drashti thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
Awwie that was so cute !!! :D
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Aaah!! That was sooo cute!
I could pretty much imagine it happening in front of my eyes 😳 ..especially loved them fighting over the baby's gender 😆 OMG i can so imagine them like this in a couple years!
And no, it was not long at all, i could read ten more like this! 😃 So please do write more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cuteness personified. :D

Amazing oneshot. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was beyond cute! I would love them to have a Asad junior
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Very nice. Made me smile:)
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That was beautiful hunn. ❤️
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when you said longish i was expecting maybe we can see who won the bet akdu khan ya Zoe... but was really cute :D
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Awww it was simply beautiful
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aww this was really cute loved it!!!!

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