~Saiyaara~ an AsYa FF THREAD 1 - Page 69

Originally posted by: anushka2112

OYE...where's the update...grrr...update update update...otherwise ll break the screen ...oops no nuksan to mera hi hein...lekin I bear ,,,,,lol,,,,

update update update...

Haven't written anything yet...:(
lol...you cant read the update if u break the screen...:D

Originally posted by: me2you

<font color="#0000ff">Hi there!</font>

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<font color="#0000ff">I am one of your new and latest fans. This FF is simply amazing and you are such a good writer.👏I just love love love this story.</font>

<font color="#ff0000">It was hope, faith and trust on her Allah Miyan that kept her going.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">This was from part 8. I absolutely love this line, so beautiful, so powerful, so intense. You just nailed it with this one!</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Please PM whenever you update again. Can't wait to read more and more.😃</font>

Aawww...thank you soo much !! I'm so glad that you lovd the story ! :)

lol...I'm happy you liked one of my original lines...:D

Sure... 😳

Part 14

''Door rahiye mujhse... Mere kareeb mat aaiye...'' she spoke like she had seen a ghost; fear clearly visible in her eyes. He couldn't believe she reacted to him in such a way.

''Zoya... Meri baat suniye...'' he said trying to move closer to her.
She immediately raised her hand in defense asking him to stop where he was.

''Ab kehne aur sunne ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi hai...Mr.Khan...'' she said like she was on the verge of dying and nothing could stop the inevitable from coming.

The chill of her words seeped through his skin and sliced his heart. The look in her eyes was very unknown, something he couldn't relate to. The silence that followed was as painful as an empty void, which only grew every second.

She silently left to the washroom without another word while he stood there pondering over what he had turned her into. What had he done this to her !?

The whole day he was there in the house but couldn't take a single glimpse of her. She didn't leave the room even for a minute. He only saw his ammi or Najma taking food to her and coming back with empty plates.

He was satisfied that in all this, she atleast took care of the baby.
Only then he realised that she was the one who all the while took care of the baby, alone ! He was never there for them, even when they needed him the most.

The realisation hit upon him so hard that he just wanted the earth to open up and get buried in it alive.

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Even till night, he couldn't gather the strength to face her after all that happened early morning. But he also couldn't let her on her own, not anymore.

He paced around his room restlessly, not knowing how to get her back, atleast to his room, their room. Finally when all his patience gave away, he sneeked into the guest room only to find her crying silently.

She hadn't expected to see him this morning, atleast not like that, uninformed and when he showed up, she couldn't control her emotions and the words that eventually came out; though she had stopped feeling anything, lately.

The whole day she tried to divert her mind from him, but all she could think of was him.

Sleep was far from her even today. She was so close to him, just the next door, yet so far. The thought itself brought a fresh set of tears in her eyes.

Looking her in that state only pained him more. Her sobs filled the room with an unheard painful story.

He couldn't help but blame himself for every tear of her. He decided to end it here.

Asad switched on the lights and Zoya got alert assuming it to be ammi. She hurriedly wiped her tears and turned around to look towards the door.

Her eyes grew wide as she saw it was none other than Asad. He was in his usual white kurta and pyjamas and she in her night suit.

He strode towards her with his mind set on his task and just as he was about to pick her up, she protested, ''Maine aapse kaha na...''
He didn't let her complete and placed a finger on her lips asking her to keep quiet.

He said, ''Sshhh... Kuch mat kahiye...''

She was mesmerised by the touch of his fingers on her lips and could not dare to speak another word with him being so close to her.

She was shocked at her own behaviour. He never failed to surprise her by evoking feelings that she thought never existed or atleast died long ago.

She felt alive just by his one touch and felt like her soul was healing. She didn't want to get lost in the moment, so she just turned her head side ways in denial.

Taking advantage of her lost self, he carried her in his arms pleading, ''Chup rahiyega...warna ammi aur Najma jaag jayenge...please...''

She didn't have an option other than staying quite in his arms when her mind was full of questions and confusion regarding his actions.

He aksed her, ''Aapka shawl kahan hai...??''
She furrowed her eyebrows at his irrelevant question and was just about to ask him when he shut her up by saying, ''Bas mere sawaal ka jawaab dijiye... Aapko sab pata chal jayega...''

''Wardrobe mein hai...saamne hi...'' she said, feeling like a criminal who wasn't allowed to speak so that people dont get injured by her words.

He moved towards the wardrobe and picked up the shawl and moved towards the main door. He slowly locked it and placed her in the front seat of the car, making sure she was comfortable.

Within no time he himself went and sat behind the wheels. It was more than half an hour and Zoya couldn't make out where he was taking her, especially during midnight.

She thought it was useless to question him about anything so she preferred staying quiet.

After a few minutes, the car stopped and he opened it for her to get down. She carefully stepped out of the car placing one hand on her tummy. She felt so sorry for ignoring the baby all these days, but pushed away the thoughts for sometime thinking to make it up to him later.

She looked around to find that they were at some beach. The place looked so beautiful, calm and serene.The tides of water moving back and forth, kissing the sand on the shore. She felt the cool breeze on her skin and got goosebumps. Asad felt it too and so he took out her shawl from the car and wrapped it around her. She looked at him as he stood behind her with his hands wrapped around her. She instantly moved away from him, in reflex to the havoc created within her by his closeness.

He walked past her and she silently followed him. Before she could say something, she heard him say, ''Hum yahan har sunday ko aaya karte they... Mai..Ammi..Najma aur..'' after a short pause, he said, ''Abbu!''

Her head turned towards him as she could feel the pain in his voice when he said the last word. He was looking straight ahead, somewhere trying to find his past in the same place.

She hadn't expected him to speak about his past like this, out of no where coz she knew that was the last thing he'd ever talk about. She knew very less about his father, only that he'd left them for some other woman when Asad was very young and nothing else. She didn't want to interfere, so she let him continue.

''Bohat khush they hum sab apne chote se parivaar mein... Zindagi se aur kuch maangte bhi kya... Aami aur abbu bohat mohabbat karte they ek dusre se...aur humse bhi !'' he continued reminiscing all the old memories that came along with the surrounding.

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Surprise ! :P
lol... This was unexpected ! I hadn't planned to update tonight...but it just came out... I dunno how !
This was part 14...:)
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hi i'm your new reader and your updates are so fabulous 👍🏼

Another beautiful update,👍🏼 I have to tell you how much I love your story, its just amazing, you are an amazing writer, thank you so much for this beautiful write up, please update soon, eagerly waiting..

amazing update! I was so excited to see you posted. This is just what Asad needed to open up and speak about his past. Finally, he will be able to reconcile and move on instead of burning in the past.

WOW.. What an surprice update..
Well written...
Continue it soon...
Will wait for the next update

Too short :( NEED MORE :D But lovely update.. finally some sense kicked into his thick head haha