~Saiyaara~ an AsYa FF THREAD 1

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Aaniya

@_Aaniya_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: bindasss
You have to continue ASAP!! It was awesome, loved it!!

Thank you ! :))
Glad that you liked it !!
I'll try my best...:))

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Aaniya

@_Aaniya_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: havokhotline
Hello. :)[/DIV]

Wow, it's much much better. Thank you for taking my advice without getting angry with me. :)

It was really good, trust me. You portrayed Zoya's pain at being ignored by Asad so wonderfully.
That too when she's apparently pregnant.
Now I'm dying to know what exactly happened. -.-
You left us with a cliffhanger, you evil person. :O

YOU HAVE?

*takes two steps back*

Aw, thank you so much. :) It means a lot to me. :)

Heyaa :)
Angry ? Noo wayzz !! I'm so happy that you tried to guide me :)

Lol...thank you soo much ! I thought I was bad at portraying feelings...esp pain !!

Now this is making me really nervous. I didn't want all your expectations to be raised so much ! :D

Anywayz, I'll try my best !! :))

No taking steps back ! 😆
yup ! I've read them and loved them to the core :))

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Zaina

@CrazyForAshish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

it's very nice ... i like it.. do continue it...

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Soumya

@Ceon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hey it ws awsm yr. Cont it

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

And you stopped? So tell us, why is Asad ignoring Zoya? He definitely took the time out to get intimate with her - she's two months pregnant, so what has changed?