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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Ohh you are goona update Today? Donot April Fool PLEASE 🤣

am so so so waiting 😳

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Aaniya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 5

''Aag... Ammi aag... Mujhe bachao... ammiii... bachaaooo'' Asad heard Zoya mumbling in her sleep. She always had such dreams. By now he had got used to her ranting in her sleep. Initially he used to ignore it, but day by day it became difficult for him looking at her in that condition. Sometimes she used to get so scared that she would wake up and leave the room quietly.

He saw tears in her eyes. She seemed to be asking for help from her ammi, sweating profusely. He decided to go close to her and console her. As he inched his hands towards her face, he remembered their night together and immediately took back his hand in reflex.

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Asad Ahmed Khan did not attend business parties, especially the ones held in discs or pubs. Mixing business with pleasure was something that irked him ! It was one habit of the rich business men of his community that he hated.

This was a big deal for him and it had gone very well with the client. He wasn't used to get happy at such things 'coz he always aimed for the best and believed in attaining it !

The client, Mr. Sharma had invited him to a party at one of the famous disc in the town for celebrating the deal. After much perseverence, Asad had agreed to attend the party as he could not disappoint such an important client.

Knowing that it was a late night party, he had informed ammi that he would be late and that they should sleep. Indirectly, the message had been intented for Zoya.

It had been 8 months of their married life. She had proven to be a perfect wife...a perfect misfit ! Yes, misfit ! Thats what he had thought of her, which lately made him feel guilty. She had proven all his assumptions and judgements about her wrong.

He entered the disc with Zoya on his mind, unknown to the pair of dark black eyes looking at him. Like those eyes had been longing to see him. ''Aaj mai tumhe wapas paake hi rahungi Asad'', she thought eyeing his every movement keenly. Asad met up with Mr. Sharma and the rest of the staff. They spoke about business for sometime and Asad asked for their leave. He couldn't tolerate the loud music anymore and decided to leave.

That very moment, waiter brought him a drink that he was asked to give to Asad purposely. He gulped down the whole drink thinking of it as juice. Within few minutes, he could feel the light pain emerging in his head and the surroundings becoming blurred !

He was unable to understand what was happening to him. With much efforts he reached near his car parked outside the disc. He tried to open the lock when he felt a hand on his shoulder. He turned around to look at the person. He kept blinking his eyes until he could get a clear view of who the person was !

''Tum !??!?'' he asked furiously with rage filling his eyes. ''Tumhari himmat kaise hui mere saamne bhi aane kii ??! Door raho mujse'' he said pushing away her hand away.

''Asad mujhe maaf kar do...plz mujhe apni galati sudhaarne ka ek mauka dedo... Mujhse tumhe samajhne mein bhool ho gayi... Tumhari Aayesha aaj bhi tumse utni hi mohabbat karti hai'' she said faking tears.
''Lekin mai tumse mohabbat nahi karta hu...'' he said looking straight into her eyes.

He could feel his head getting heavier. Making an effort to move away from her, he turned towards his car to open it, but again she came and stood between the car and him. This time she was very close to him and her proximity was disturbing him. He couldn't think straight especially with the adultered drink making it worse for him.

Taking advantage of the situation, she inched closer to him bringing her lips just an inch away from his. He closed his eyes due to the effect of sedatives and she came closer to kiss him. All he could see with his closed eyes was Zoya! Her smile, her tears, her hazel eyes filled with love and trust for him which he had been ignoring purposely time and again!

He opened his eyes in a fraction of second and stepped away from her. ''Door raho mujhse aur meri zindagi se... Mere dil mein tumhare liye ab koii jagah nahii...'' he said turning his back towards her. With an annoyed expression, she again went towards him and hugged him from behind.
''Tum chaahe jitna bhi inkaar karlo, mai jaanti hu ki tum aaj bhi mujhse bepanaah mohabbat karte ho ! Maine tumhari aankhon mein pyaar dekha hai Asad...aur meri aankhon mein bhi wohi pyaar jhalakta hai...ek baar meri taraf dekho... Mai tumhari wohi Aayesha hu jispe tumhe aitbaar tha !''

''Aur tumne mujhe uss din ehsaas dila diya ki tum uss pyaar aur aitbaar ke laayak nahi thi...!!'' he said pushing her hands away from his chest and walking ahead.

''Tum aise nahi jaa sakte Asad... Mai jee nahi paungi tumhare bina...'' she tried sounding broken. ''Tum aaj bhi zindagi ke ussi mod pe khade ho jahan mai tumhe chod ke gayi thi..tanha aur akele... Ye saabit karta hai ki tum abhi b mujhe bhula nahi paaye ho...!!'' she sounded confident about her assumptions.

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Aaniya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

So...here's part 5 !
Hope you guyz like it...:)
There's a few things yet to come in the story...n I'm taking it slowly so that everything gets clear!
Hope you can diffferentiate between the flashbacks and present...:)))
and thanks for the likes and comment..:) I read all of them and even tried to reply to a few ! :)
thanks for the motivation guyz !

Edited by _Aaniya_ - 12 years ago

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Aaniya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Ohh you are goona update Today? Donot April Fool PLEASE 🤣

am so so so waiting 😳

Hahahaa... No April fooling Ankie 😳

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life4me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Very nice. Please update soon.

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Fimmy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Awesome updt...
Hmmm... It's getting more n more interesting...
Cont soon...

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Waah Waah Waah! Makes me want more and more it was sooo good.! Great. update asap. how about today? 🤣

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Aparichit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

That was too good..waiting to know what happened that night.update soon

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Aaniya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Waah Waah Waah! Makes me want more and more it was sooo good.! Great. update asap. how about today? 🤣

Thank you ! 😆
I'm afraid I wont be able to update till next monday...😔
still... I'll try my best ! 😳

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anushka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Good update dear... it was like a platform for story to progress... take ur time to progress it m loving the plot... the more he want to get away from zoya closer he found himself to her..
.love the scene where he close his eyes and sees Zoya's memories.
That's a true love...
one request pls make updates bit long and try to update daily... kya karu wait hi nai hora
thanks for pm