DARK PASSION-Asya FF updated chap 15 pg 140 - Page 88

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Posted: 12 years ago
Allah miya, what's wrong with u?! 😲 How could u end there?! 😡 U just left me hanging! 😭 Aapke dil mein seena nahi, pathar hai! 💔...🤣 But anyways, this was clearly my fave chapter so far! ❤️ So hot! 😳 I swear, I read it like 5 times! 😳 Awesomeee job! 👏 Nicely written, too. 👍🏼 And I have this horrible feeling that the 2nd kiss won't work out! 😔 Maybe Zoe will trick Asad! 😲 I hope not! 😉 🤣 Anyways, plz update ASAP!!!! 😃 I'm dying here! 🤢 I have to wait 4ever!!!!!!!! 😭

PS. My rating is 3! 🤗 🤗 🤗 But I'm mad at u for ending it there! 😔 (Jk! 😆)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing! Loved it! You are torturing me ! Can't wait do long! June? PlZ update soon! I'm anxious to read the next part! Fabulous!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome as usual! Keep up the amazing work!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice. but i wanna see jealous zoya too. we saw so much of jealous asad

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Posted: 12 years ago
man!!! asad is sooo naughty!!
he's sooo clever !!!
OMG!! will zoya actllly kisss
him?? realllyyy!
gooosssh!! ul defo make me go
crazy!! wts gonna happen
nxt!?? please updt it na!!..knw i am late bt stil congrats 4 being d best ff of d wk
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug

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For me?😳😲 🤗

Once again, a mind blowing update! Was smiling like a buffoon when I saw the dedication

And on to the story:

OMG he stole her first kiss haha I love how she was angry and astonished one minute and giddy and longing his touch the next 😆 AND how she was actually proud of him and happy that he took care of her ALL night (gutter mind 😆 can't help it!)

And Asad and his jealousy 🤣 Even at a distance and even after all that.. tch tch tch Mr. Khaaan... abhi bhi aag ki khushbu aa rahi hai! Kuch to jaal raha hai 😆 And he noticed her buttons huh... Oh you naughty Asad. I was actually hoping he'd console her about her mother 😭 BUT I know their relationship isn't at that point yet. SO I shall wait patiently 😃 I'm sure you have something in mind 😉

OMG OMG OMG I LOOOVED how he purposely made her trip on him and how he straddled her on his lap LOL her breathing getting erratic (and how they were lost in each other right before the bewakoof Sakim came in) AND SO WAS MINE! I was soo giddy 😳

AND THE KISS! OMG I actually really hope she doesn't kiss him... but maybe, since Sakim is already gone, she can BITE him? 🤣 or pinch him? 😆 But not kiss again.. right? Yet? I mean... she's still hates him... right? 😆 I know thats not true at all LOL


LOVELY update as always hun! And don't worry about not updating sooon I also have exams starting and for the next 3 weeks.. trying to be on IF for only about a hour a day (but seriously, WHO ARE WE KIDDDING? 🤣)

Thanks again for the dedication! You're tooo sweet!

And it was a 5!!!! (I was trying to use Mary Poppin's famous word to describe fantabulous things, but sadly it won't let me 😭)


I LOVE UR COMMENTS!!!! They make my day!!!!! LOVE U LOADS!!!!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing update.LOVE it.LOVE it..LOVE it..LOVE it.
cant wait for next chp☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
A gr8 work

I really enjoyed reading it

Sorry for short comment as my exams are going on and I am inactive




Add me to ur pm list plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
kiss...really zoya will kiss him...
plzz post soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon,😊

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