DARK PASSION-Asya FF updated chap 15 pg 140

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snehasya

@snehasya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#821

I wonder from where do you get this PASSION oh my god you killed me believe me I was reading it and forgot to breathe in just when my lungs demanded oxygen I swallowed it it was breath taking and you left it on such note I would surely kill you for that😉 but loved it sooo much please update sooon dear and tons of thanks for pm 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Mahi Singh

@Kaya13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: snehalparab
I wonder from where do you get this PASSION oh my god you killed me believe me I was reading it and forgot to breathe in just when my lungs demanded oxygen I swallowed it it was breath taking and you left it on such note I would surely kill you for that😉 but loved it sooo much please update sooon dear and tons of thanks for pm 👏

Really!!!!! I am sooo glad This update had that effect..i have to think a lot for the Passion😉...

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#823

KILLED ME. KILLED ME. KILLED ME.

And I loved every bit of it ;) I'm so glad you made Asad turn her away from Sakim, otherwise I'd have killed him!

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Mahi Singh

@Kaya13

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

Originally posted by: Zara_92
OMG this one def 'Squeeze u to death' I freaking loved it !!!!!!

One of the most amazing updates 😃

I loved their passionatee romance and jealous Asad is HOT !!!!!!! ☺️

U toook enough time u better update ssooonnn now else I'm gng to murder u !!

Thankuuu!!!!!!!! Sry yaar bt u hv to wait for update bt I am planning to write an OS beech me jab padh padh ke bore ho jaoungi...this has to wait as I need time to think...😆

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Amy

@angelgirl_a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#825

So many 3's! LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!!!!

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Susita825

@Susita825

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Posted: 12 years ago

#826

i rate it as number 3 🤗

omg Asad is so naughty😈

if he gets a chance am sure by now Skim would have been dead 🤣

i feel like Zoya is not gonna kiss him maybe she will throw water at him 😆

i loved what he did to Zoya when Skim entered his cabin 😛

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t1234

@t1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#827

Thank you for the dedication 😳

Rating 5 - loved it so much, I had to read it even though I have some hardcore exams coming up but also wanna kill you for this cliffhanger and not being able to update for what feels like 6 years!

It was great, I dunno if I've said before but I absolutely love the characterisation of Asad and Zoya!
Although I hope she doesn't kiss him and somehow gets away!
Just to tease him and make him want her more haha

Great job!!

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Monica

@mochhug

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

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For me?😳😲 🤗

Once again, a mind blowing update! Was smiling like a buffoon when I saw the dedication

And on to the story:

OMG he stole her first kiss haha I love how she was angry and astonished one minute and giddy and longing his touch the next 😆 AND how she was actually proud of him and happy that he took care of her ALL night (gutter mind 😆 can't help it!)

And Asad and his jealousy 🤣 Even at a distance and even after all that.. tch tch tch Mr. Khaaan... abhi bhi aag ki khushbu aa rahi hai! Kuch to jaal raha hai 😆 And he noticed her buttons huh... Oh you naughty Asad. I was actually hoping he'd console her about her mother 😭 BUT I know their relationship isn't at that point yet. SO I shall wait patiently 😃 I'm sure you have something in mind 😉

OMG OMG OMG I LOOOVED how he purposely made her trip on him and how he straddled her on his lap LOL her breathing getting erratic (and how they were lost in each other right before the bewakoof Sakim came in) AND SO WAS MINE! I was soo giddy 😳

AND THE KISS! OMG I actually really hope she doesn't kiss him... but maybe, since Sakim is already gone, she can BITE him? 🤣 or pinch him? 😆 But not kiss again.. right? Yet? I mean... she's still hates him... right? 😆 I know thats not true at all LOL

LOVELY update as always hun! And don't worry about not updating sooon I also have exams starting and for the next 3 weeks.. trying to be on IF for only about a hour a day (but seriously, WHO ARE WE KIDDDING? 🤣)

Thanks again for the dedication! You're tooo sweet!

And it was a 5!!!! (I was trying to use Mary Poppin's famous word to describe fantabulous things, but sadly it won't let me 😭)

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago