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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Manpreet23
So cuteee, loved it :)

aww...thanks a lot,glad you liked it 😃

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: awesome
nice one
plz cont soon
plz can u make it ff

aww...happy that you liked it and ya i'll continue ASAP!

And about ff i am really sorry yaar! i dont have any plans to continue till many long part! OS hi rahega short and some 4-5 parts 😊

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: neenabinu
wow...very nice

Thanks a lot!😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Soumya02
loved it totally

aww thanks a lot! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -Yuks-
Cute update

aww...thanks! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wow...it was amazing...m so so happy readin dis updte...i luvd it <3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: shloksuchi

Wow...it was amazing...m so so happy readin dis updte...i luvd it <3

aww...thanks a lot suchi...you made me happy tooo with your reply! 😃

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: luvushivin1
loved...it yaar...plzzz continue

i have a plan to update it today itself..anytime i will...anywayz thanks! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

part 3

Mr with Mrs khan entered the kitchen...asad pulled the chair for zoya and he sat on his chair!

NAJMA:Mere liye toh kabhi bhi chair whair pull nahi kiya bhai jaan? (najma entered with a teasing asad and zoya)

ASAD:Tamatar tumhare liye tumhare pati karega!

Dilshad entered with breakfast and kept it on the table!

ASAD:Good morning ammi!

ZOYA:Good morning phu...Ammi

DILSHAD:Aww zoya! Good morning Asad zoya!

Asad saw bread jam and remember zoya telling that she loves bread jam so He kept bread jam on her plate!

ZOYA:Allah miya yeh aap kya kar rahe Mr khan..mujhe bread jam bilkul pasand nahi hai..mei ekk bhi kha nahi sakti!

ASAD:uss din jab tanveer ne banaya tha tan toh mere plate se bhi lekar khaya tha na..aaj kya hua?

ZOYA:Vo aap na khaye issiliye!
Asad smiled and zoya smiled back

ASAD:Mujhe aaj ke meeting ke liye kuch kaam hai so me room mei jata hun!
Asad was not al all in a mood to work in less than 10 mins

ASAD:Zoya ekk cup coffee milega?

After sometime Najma came in with a coffee!

NAJMA:Yeh lijiye bhaijaan!

ASAD:Meine zoya ko bulaya tha!

NAJMA:kya farak padta hai bhaijaan...coffee coffee hi hai na...kyun?
Najma said that and left!

It was 1 pm so asad though of leaving so he thought of getting ready!

ASAD(in mind):abb dubara se freah kyun hona aaj subah zoya ka sath kuch zyaada hi fresh ho chuka hun...gave a huge smile showing all 32 teeth!

He got ready and came to hall!

ASAD:Zoya!

ZOYA:Ji?app ja rahe hai?

ASAD:Meine bulaya tha coffee ke liye kyun nahi aayi tum? made a sad face!

ZOYA:Sorry Mr khan vo najma ne kaha vo lejayegi so! Sollly!

ASAD:Koi nahi...(he hugged her)

ZOYA:Its 1:30 Mr khan you mustt be leaving!

ASAD:Yea..take care..and i love you!

ZOYA:Love you tooo!

Asad left!

It was 7 and zoya was wating for asad...when asad came back!

ZOYA:Mr khan...(she went and hugged him)

ASAD:oyye hoyye...agar Nigah ke baad yeh sub hota toh mei vo aleena se hi Nigah kar leta jiska meine dil thoda hai...(the scene where a foreigner said that asad ne uska dil thod diya instead od deal thod diya)

ZOYA:Hit his chest and chailye khana kha lete hai!

ASAD:Ammi aur najma..?

ZOYA:Vo khana kharkar garden mei hai!

ASAD:Arrey wah privacy!

Asad zoya had there dinner and went to there room!

As soon as they entered Asad had a heart attack seeing his room!
Chips packets...pizza boxes..coke cans everywhere!

ASAD:Zoyaaa?yeh kya hai?

ZOYA:Room Mr khan our room! Sorry Mr khan mei kal theek kar deti hun abb chalke sojate hai na please!

ASAD:phirse aase kabhi nahi karogi?

ZOYA:sochungiii!

Zoya ran to the bed and asad chased her! Both on the bed!

ASAD:Perfect landing!
hahhaaa...Both slept and zoya was once again between those safe chest and arms where she was having rain of kisssieees :D

Morining rays fell on them zoya could again fell those arms around her! She turned back and kissed his forehead!

ZOYA:Good morning Mr khan!

Asad:Goood morning and kissed her forehead then neck then her nose then her lips thenher cheeks!

ZOYA:Mr khan kal ke kisses ke barish kafi nahi hai jo aaj itna barsa rahe hai aap?

ASAD:Nahi!kissed her neck!

ZOYA:Abb mei jake tayaar hoti hun Mr khan...aaj dargah jana hai Mr khan!

ASAD:ok...

Zoya left and asad woke up and kept his leg on the ground but he fell down as the coke can had fallen down!

ASAD:Ahhh ouuchh..Allah!

ZOYA:Not this time Mr khan!

ASAD:Ishq hi thekk tha...yeh shadi risk! uff!

yeh meine aaj hi update kar diya senior member bannki khushi mei..yaay baaallee baallleee! 😆

How was it? please do comment!

Edited by cyndu_ - 12 years ago