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aryafangirl

@aryafangirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

asad one minute he so in love then cold as ice

😕

ps its lovely update send me another pms when you update again

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fee-fee

@fee-fee

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

This was me once I was done reading: 😲

Great update! Eagerly waiting the next.

(Take that Ch**!@! 😡 ahem...I'm good now)

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

this was SUPERB. I loved the way you got the truth of dat evil witch out. she is just so cunning, still sowing seeds of hatred between Asad & Zoe. I hope Asad does not push her away now because she won't be able to cope with it. she needs him the most at this moment. plz cont soon.

love,

Nimra.

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Omg billo churail kahi ki jate jate asya ki jindagi ki khushiyaan bhi legayi...cont soon...thanks 4 pm

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

hey

that was some update

it was very revealing

in more ways than one

i really liked the part where Zoya was coming down the stairs and Asad couldnt stop staring at her

and you were right, in true Zoya style she did trip😆

but of course Asad was there to catch her☺️

and i loved how you incorporated Yash and Aarti in this

very nice touch👏

and i'd have loved to actually see Asad and Zoya when they were holding the baby😊

it certainly would have been a sight worth beholding

and the ending was something

you had me scared for a minute there

i really thought Zoya would have left,

it's good that she didn't

and then the whole Tanveer drama thing was just wow😲

i guess some people really will do anything for money

oh i cant wait to see what else happens

the fact that Asad left without saying anything was a bit unnerving

and i'm kinda worried

i hope he doesn't do anything rash

that said, please continue soon so that i can find out what happens next

and thanks for the PM😊

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Holy shit!!! OMG!! Loved this chapter!!! Absolutely perfect!!! And awww Asya scenes <3 *_* Sooo perfect!!!

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princess84

@princess84

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

oh nooo...hope asad doesn't do something stupid again continue soonnn

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: Denita-ishq

Lol..ecstatic that you like my story so much to re-read it..beeg hug.

It was meant to be taught..not thought..sowi..
Even my spellcheck works quicker that my hands..

OMG

i don beleve i just couldnt figure which word it could be lol

that makes sense taught lol

man loved this new update as much as i loved the previous one actully more.

brilliant update