SS: Longing for love l Chapter 12(b) l Page 139 - Page 60

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

I honestly don't know how to write or portray feelings of the lead. I kbow I wrote shit. I wonder yeh update kaisa hoga. Please forgive me if this wasn't upto your expectations. I haven't proof read so please point out my mistakes

this update is amazing
don't underestimate your taltent!!! 😉

Awww it was superb yaar please continue soon..

Originally posted by: kajenvirman

this update is amazing

don't underestimate your taltent!!! 😉

Thank you dear😳

I felt it because I have never tried writing such things. And had to retype everything as I clicked the delete button instead of copy I thought it won't be good enough.

But thank you so much for liking what I write. 🤗 I'm highly obliged.

good one...can't wait for our asad to strat wooing zoya...

hey dis was a fantastic part. at last dey meet. n just da way dey always do, Zoya landing in his arms. I just wish Zoe does not forgive him easily, dis guy deserves it. look at him, doing emotional blackmailing, kissing her hand, great trick Jahapanah but ur Kaneez isn't in a mood to let u off the hook easily. giv him a tough time.

Originally posted by: Monu_Deewani

Achhi bacchi my foot ! Bohot bigad gayi hai ! Mennu bhi tadpati hai 😭 Hahaha... sorry sweetu. Par ab toh maine update kar diya na.

Aapne bulaya aur, hum chale aaye ! *running off to CC 😎* Thank you hai jee😳

Arre, proud because my tamatar writes SO wonderfully ! Tu bhi na ! 😳 Oh! You know main tumhari dimlight hoon😆

Yesss !! Pehla PM mennu ! (Like always :P) Par update se pehle ek baar bata diyo ki 5 min mein update kar ri hoon..I wanna secure the 1st spot 😉

Thanku so much love !! 🤗 Your welcome DQ.

OMG you read it already? And I didn't see your comment ?! *hiding in shame and running off to check my tamatar's comment* :D

My comment in bold

I loved how Asad carried Zoya even though she kept refusing him. Zoya shouldn't forgive Asad so soon and I can't wait to see what does Asad do to get her forgiveness !!

finally finally finally 😃
*drum roll*

THEY MEET 🥳
eeeppp

how badly i was waiting for dis
but now dat dey have met n mr khan has realised his love for zoya
i know we ll get loads n loads of asya scenes in next part

i ve to mention kissing d hand wala part 👍🏼
howww dreamyyy

do i have to tell u again n again how well u write??
ab to muje habbit ho gayi hai ye kehne ki 😆
IT WAS FREAKING AWESOME👏

looking forward to d next part
asad miya manoing his janemaans 😆

update very very jaldi 😃

heee...it was awsum..thnxx for the pm

waaahhh!! waaah!! wahhh!!