OS - My family is here! + a siggie!

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Anju_S

@Anju_S

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Awesome

I like it 😊

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suchitra

@AmaZaynGirl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Asusual...u wri8 fab...dat is y u r my favourite...tysm 4 the pm...u realy made my dae wid dis cute n swt updte ;D

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varshita nandagopal

@varshificat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

wooow !! amazing dear ... loved the os

varsha

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: loveQH
Its beautiful👏l!!! You write like a pro, you know that! Awesome long wala OS and an equally awesome siggie 👍🏼 Thanks for the PM. 😊
P.S: Just a small request, i have written a small OS, my first try...plz read it. I wil b really happy if a talented writer like u read n reviewd it😳 ...its called "Night-time Musings"

wow i'm flattered! thank you so much!

how i wish my sister could read ur comments! she thinks my stories are shit! 😭

your OS i have read it was just going to unres my comment!

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Chinnu.Munnu
Wonderful os..Very Well written...One of the Best OS I read in this forum..
Loved it dear but feeling sad that it got ended..Looking forward to read more..

thankyou! 🤗

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Rufia

@..Enigma..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Heart touchng os yar...realy i cried wn zoya left dis houz...i njyd readng...

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: shloksuchi

Asusual...u wri8 fab...dat is y u r my favourite...tysm 4 the pm...u realy made my dae wid dis cute n swt updte ;D

really?? i'm ur favourite??

woohooo! you made my day!

loveyou! 🤗

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Oh SHIT!!!!! You just wrote one of the most epic OSs I've come across, you Monkey!!!

That was one hell of a ride for me!

And am sorry for starting my comment by swearing, but I couldn't help it!!! It was so emotional, heart touching, moving to read and feel for Zoya.😳

You ended it so well here. Yes, both are stubborn. Asad and Zoya, but they do accept the fact that they do have some feelings for each other, even though they are not yet ready to accept those feelings. Not so early.

Tempting it might be to keep on going on about what you feel, they still know how to keep their mouths shut and speak without actually speaking to each other.😆

However I wanted to see Zoya bonding, even though a little, but still bonding with her new found family. She could have found a friend in both Humeira and Ayaan. Nikhat and Nuzhat would be so happy to just enjoy her company. 😳

Razia's feelings and intentions are now clear in the show, for which I feel sorry for her. I pity her for taking such a path to control the situation rather than talking it all out with her husband, Gafur Siddiqui.😒

I thought the man didn't have a heart and was a "Dil mein Seena nahi, Patthar Hain" waala Man like Asad Miyaa.😲 Of course the two stand out in their own way and are recognised individually because of their distinct personalities.😆 But the former does have a heart that cries out for his long lost daughter.😭 I just wish that Zoya finds her Abbu. But even finding her Abbu comes with its share of difficulties and hatred that she won't be able to change it into Love for herself. 🥺

And you know who I am talking about..🤢

Dilshad and Najma are literally her family, after Zeenat and Anwar. Zoya cannot afford to lose this family that Allah himself chose for her. It's like it was meant for her to find this family and realise that they have finally made a special place in her little heart.❤️

And the song...

It's one of my favs, Sadie!

I love the movie Kammbakkht Ishqq and this song is wonderfully directed and so lovely to hear. I couldn't help but put it on Youtube and listen to it as I read this OS.😳

Yes the lyrics are apt for this lovely OS you have written. I officially LOVE this One Shot named "My Family Is Here!"🤗

The colours did fade away as she had to cut off ties with people she never she could care for so much and love more than her own life. The promises that this family so silently promised her of, made Zoya revel in their love and be herself. She indirectly craved for love that Dilshad-Najma-Asad had. And she had it too. She realised it only after she had to leave them for her Abbu.🥺

Thank you for giving us such an OS!!!🤗 I would be so so so happy to see you winning the "OS of the Week" in this week's QuboolExpress. 😎

Ananya😳