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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for the next update eagerly..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nice story and do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PLZZZ UPDATE IT NA canttt wait more 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just read ur os! I love it!! Please update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part Two: Come Back Zoya!!!!!!!!!

**** hey guys ****
I know some of you took time out if your VERY busy schedules to read my short OS. I actually wrote this on my way to school and I came home and transferred it onto here. So sorry about the grammar. I wrote this on the bus this morning. So sorry about the delay. Sorry if I forgot to PM anyone. Here you are!!!!

Nurse comes out running.

Zoya: aap Saab mein se asad kaun hai.

Asad turns around and runs towards the nurse barely able to steady himself on the way there.

Asad: mein. Mein ho asad!

Nurse: patient ki heartbeat slow ho rahi hai aur woh baar baar ap hee ka naam le rahi hai. Please chaliye.

Girl: ek minute. Asad kahi nahi jayegai. Woh yahi rehenga. Uss chudail ko Marne hai toh marne dee jiye!!

Nurse: lekin ma'am ...

Asad: JUST SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!

Asad runs into the ER after the nurse.

Asad: Zoya!!!!!!!

Asad sees all the new wires the doctors had attached to zoya's body. Tears scrimmage their way down his face. He runs to her and can barely hear her saying his name.

Asad softly speaks while he slowly grabs her hand.

Asad: zoya...

Suddenly Zoya's heartbeat started rising her body started to respond to all the wires and medications she had.

Doctor's look at each other and shock and awe. They were surprised that someone who was a millisecond away from dying came back from life.

Doctor: this is a miracle! Mr. Asad aap ki beghum khatre se bahar hai. She's absolutely fine. Aur woh bhi bina koi medications liye you're very lucky man you got her back sir. She is a strong fighter.

The doctors leave and asad is smiling while still holding onto zoya's hand. Zoya slowly opens her eyes and sees a smiling Asad which makes her smile.

Zoya: Asa...

Asad places his finger on her lips. "Shh. Khudah ka lakh lakh shukra hai ki aap Bach gayi. Warne mein toh mar hee jata. Agar aaj aap ko kuch ho jata toh mein apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar pata.

Zoya: asad aap theek toh hai?

Asad: ha baba mein bilkul theek hoon kyun ki aab tum mere paas wapas aa gayi aur tumhe kabhi nahi jaane doon ga.

Zoya: hu...

Nurse walls in " excuse me mr. Khan aap ko doctor bola rahe hai."

Asad nods to the nurse and looks at zoya he brushes his hand over her head "mein abhi aata hoon."

Zoya slowly nods and asad gets up to leave

Zoya: asad? (Asad turns around) Jaldi aana.

Asad nods and pulls out his phone.
" hello prasad mujhe Bhopal ki best security chahiye abhi within 10 minutes."

Asad sits down in the doctors office.

Doctor: mr. Asad. Sabse pebhle congratulations for the safe recovery of your wife. Lekin ab kuch dhino ke liye aap ko un par pal pal nazar rakhni pada gi. Unke har ek zaroorat khana dawai time par deni hogi. Aur aane wale one week mein unka chalna phirna bilkul hee mana hai. Hum Zoya ko hospital mein rakh sakte hai but I have a feeling that you will be able to take better care of your wife. (The doctor places her hand on asad's which was sitting on the table) ek baat kahoo? (Asad nods) zoya's very lucky to have you!!!

Asad: doctor. Sach ye hai ki lucky woh nahi mein hoon. Kyun kar woh nahi hoti to aaj mein bhi nahi hota and I won't let you down dr. Asin. Mein zoya ka poora khayal rakhoga

The doctor gets up and so does asad. The both shake hands.

Asad: thanks so so so much doctor.

Doctor: no worries. Yeh meri job hai and I'm glad I did well. I'll get the discharge papers ready. And I'll send the equipment to your house. I have to attend my next case thanks asad. Goodbye.

Asad walks back towards the ER.
Najma and Dilshad are inside with zoya.

Then Asad hears a voice from behind.

Voice: Rukh jao Asad warna Zoya iss baar nahi bache gee.

Who is it? Is Zoya going to... Will Asad save her? Like and comment please and if you want to get a PM for next part, please comment.
Edited by Asyamerijaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
that was awesome...do PM me when u update...
pretty please...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME!!!
Continue soon and do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Awesome. Plz continue and updt soon. Do pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
This story is getting really interesting write next part soon loved it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
omg that someone is so daring that asad ke piche face to back keh raha he ki agli baar zoya nahi bachegi...god that person has touched the raw nerve of asad now...cont soon nd me too

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