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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry for the last update guys, and thanks for the lovely comments. I hope you like this part and please do leave your comments.Its a short update and really aorry for that, i am really busy thats way.

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Ayaan(to himself): kya hoga apka bhaijaan?

asad: kuch kaha tumne?

ayaan(scared): nai, kuch bhi to nai.

asad: acha ab chalo meri madad karo saman andar le gane main.

ayaan: jo hukum mere aka.

Just when asad and ayaan are taking out the stuff, imran appears.

ayaan: are imran miya, a gai app?

imran: gi(looks at asad) ap asad bhaijaan hai na?

asad nods his head in approval and imran hugs him suddenly.

imran: nighat ne apke bare main itna kuch bataya hai k lagta nai hai k main apse peheli bar mil raha ho.

asad: mujhe bhi app se milkar bohat khushi hui, ayaan ne bataya mujhe k kese razia ur siddiqui k jail jane k baad apki ammi ne rishta tor diya tha, lekin apne unka saath nai diya, balke apne meri behen ka saath diya, mujhe to samaj nai a raha hai k main kis tarha apka shukriya ada kar.

imran: are nai bhaijaan, nighat meri zindagi hai, ur balha main apni zindagi chor sakta hai.

Imran's word only reminded asad of zoya. Ayaan calls out to asad several times for him to come back into reality.

ayaan: bhaijaan...bhaijaan...bhaijaan!!!

asad: han?

ayaan: andar chale?

asad: han chalo.

They head inside and saw that the elders were sitting on the chairs enjoying there orange juice in the sun while all the girls running around after one another. Asad, ayaan and imran put the stuff on the picnic table, nighat saw imran and started to blush was seen by zoya, humaira, najma and nuzhat. While on the other side imraan also saw nighat and smiled in her direction which did not go unnoticed by asad and ayaan and both the brothers smile.

zoya: are wah nighat, tumhe to sharm bhi ati hai(teasingly)

humaira: bagi, app bhi na.

najma: hume nai milwao gi apne hone wale shohor se?

nighat: aye na, abhi milwate hai.

All the girls come up to imraan who was standing with asad and ayaan.

nighat: ap gai? ane main koi taklif to nai hui na?(blushing)

zoya: oh ho nighat, ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai.

imraan: gi ap?

zoya: Asalam walikum, mera na zoya hai, zoya farooqi.(offering her hand to shake).

imraan: oh to app hai zoya, bara una hai apke mare main.

asad(to himself): don't tell me.

Everyone look at asad.

zoya(angerly to asad): kuch kaha apne?

asad: nai, kuch nai.

zoya: good, well imraan, kya kya suna hai apne mere bare main?

imraan: wese kuch khass nai bas...cut of by asad's wisper to himself which was actually loud enough for others to hear.

asad: kuch ajeeb hi suna hoga.

When everyone looks in hi direction again, it is only then asad realize that he had been loud enough for everyone to hear.

ayaan(in his mind): ab to gai bhaijaan.

zoya(angerly): mr. khan what is you problem han?

asad: miss farooqi actually woh...i did'nt mean it.

zoya: you never mean anything right? ap to kabhi kuch galat ke hi nai sakte.

asad: what do you mean? maine aisa kya kehe diya?

zoya: oh to apko nai lagta apne kuch galat kiya hai.

asad: nahi!

ayaan: relax mona.

humaira: nai ayaan, ap bich main mat boliye. ap sare larke ek jaise hota hai.

ayaan: waha bhai waha, ap hum larko ko kyu la rahi hai, ap larkiya bhi kuch kam nai nahi.

imran: han

nghat: imran ap bhi?

iraa: wo main, actually...

nighat: arhene digiye.

nijma: han.

just then all the elders come into the picture.

dilshad: kya ho raha hai yaha pe?

asad: kuch nai ammi, bas in larkiyo ko larna ata hai har baat par bas.

dilshad: asad, ye ma bhulo ke main hi ek aurat ho, ur kya kaha tumne abhi, hame sirf larna ata hai?

rashid: ur nai to kya.

shireen: rashid ap bhi?

rashid: nai shireen, mere woh matlab nai tha.

shireen: to kya matlab tha apka, hame bhi to bataiye zara?

dilshad: rehene do shireen, in larko se larne ka koi faida nai hai, hume in larko ko sabak sikhana hi hoga, k hum larkiya kuch kam nai hai.

imraan: lekin kese.

najma: cricket match ho jai?

asad: pagal ho gai ho kya tamater?

zoya(to herself): han, dar gai jahapana.

asad: done!

zoya: what?

asad: ab ye match kisi bhi halat main hoga.

ayaan: r u sure bhaijaan? i mean...

asad: nai ayaan, ab baat hum larko ki izzat ki hai.

rashid: to phir thik hai, hum larko ki taraf se caption asad hoga.

asad(shocked): what!

dilshad: ur hamari taraf se zoya.

zoya(shocked): what!

both asad and zoya look at each other.

nuzhat: ur jo team hari usko dusri team ka har kehena mana hoga.

ayaan: nai aisa kuch nai ho raha.

humaira: kyu ayaan dar gaya.

ayaan: aisa kuch bhi nai hai, hume to ap ki fiqar thi, harne k baad ap mera har kaam karlegi.

humaira: itni kuch femi baat rakhiya ayaan miya, jite ge to hum hi

ayaan: jaiye jaiye.

asad(to himself): harne ke liye tayar ho gaiye miss farooqi.

zoya(to herself): harne ke liye tayar ho jaiye mr. khan.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update..luvd it..yhnks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice 😊 Thanks for PM and please do PM when you continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update...
aree wah cricket match between girls and boys... cool...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OHMYGOD THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!
I love how asad kept saying stuff to himself but zoya would hear and he would get all scared!!! and ayaan "ab to gai bhaijaan"
I loved their fight...boy vs girls!!! I cannot wait till their match!!!
keep up the work and PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting to read the match update
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Posted: 12 years ago
haye clapping clapping..👏..it was freaking awsum waiting for the next part eagerly..thanxxx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
GREAT UPDATE!!! was really making me smile, and laugh a bit too, i really enjoyed reading it, please update soon...and thank you for the pm, can you pm me again when you update the next part, thank you
I'm excited for this cricket match 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeehhh! I m so loving it. I read all the chapters in one go and am really excited to find out who wins.. I hope girls win this and then zoya gets asad to do something for her..hehehe that's something i like to read.. Please continue writing. Can't wait for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear cricket match between boys & girls sooo interesting egarly waiting update soon

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